"The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 25, 2004 22:54 CDT Comment/Review: (yay i was right, daniel's okay!)I swear i almost didnt finish reading the chapter when i did because i was like at such a loss...let me scream...NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! my poor monkey baby!!!! he'll be aiight! he can shake it off, he can shake his little chibi bum in the bathtub and he'll be okay!*hugs him and robbie to pieces* together they will both conquoer the world! wait and see! *sniffles* he'll live 50 more years if he eats a clove of garlic everyday.mmmhmmmm.
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:29 CDT Comment/Review: Poor Aten...hope he doesn't die too soon...well, good chapter.Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 24, 2004 18:53 CDT Comment/Review: I'm going to burst into tears, I had to wipe away the trails of tears streaming down my face. Poor Aten, WHY? Maybe Aku will keep him alive because he needs his Hikari's body? You put me through QUITE a shock when you left off at Miranda's letter. Robbie and Aten are SOOOOO KAWAII!!! SO KAWAII!AWWWWWWWWW!! Makes me, makes ME, a depressed hormonal female teenager with a cruel and insensitive streak, want to hug the living daylights out of them!! Once again... awwwwwwwwww! That was just MEAN!! With the "little hair" in Bakura's throat! You're trying to make me have a mental breakdown aren't you? Oh well, ANYTHING for another chapter! The squirrel MAY have been a while ago but it's one of those things I'll ALWAYS remember!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 24, 2004 16:50 CDT Comment/Review: Awwww!!! Poor Aten!!!! * attempts to hug Aten 'till he turns red, but then Marik comes and chases her away*... sheesh! Anyway... I'm glad Daniel get's to come home! Whew! ^-^ That was a great chapter!.... One more thing.... * shoves some Yami cough Medicine down Bakura's throat* Poor Baku! The Virus has come! :(
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 24, 2004 16:10 CDT Comment/Review: OH NO!!! POOR, POOR ATEN!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM? Aten's sooooooooooo sweet! Please don't let him die!!!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 10:04 CDT Comment/Review: It's good that Daniel didn't die. But Aten... noooooooo, poor kid. And we all know Marik must feel extremely bad if he's crying. He usually hardly ever cries... I would cry if I lost my son too, though
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Title: ooooo Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 14:57 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: aww did you have to stop it there. it's a great start to it. can't wait until the next one. Jas chibis eyes look. "update really quickly. ok luve you byebye."
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:14 CDT Comment/Review: An excellent start is always a good sign! I'm hooked- Aten's heart trouble, the possibility of Daniel being gone, Aria and the gymnastics... Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 21, 2004 19:47 CDT Comment/Review: *burns the lady at the front desk at the stake* MUWHAHAHA! die! (Bakura saying they're doing gymnastics! OMFG SO FREAKING FUNNNY!!!!!!!!) *pets aten's head* i know youll be okay! Dude, that letter, itsx like college exceptance letters..your an indentdannt woman Miranda, you'lkl get through this! *hugs* It would be so good if they said we regret to tell you that your husband has been injured! yeah injured! *nervous laugh* eh..no... doesnt work u.u
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: April 21, 2004 19:30 CDT Comment/Review: OH NO!! What's going to happen to poor Robbie ;_; That's right, I'm back ^_^ Think I would miss this? Not for the world ^-^
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Reviewed By: M0nonoke On: April 21, 2004 17:50 CDT Comment/Review: THATS MEAN! Poor Aten, and not knowing about whats his name... I didn't read the other, hostile takeover, but i know most of the backround. I love your stories, so keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing.
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 21, 2004 17:38 CDT Comment/Review: This is such a awesome start to the story!! Stupid woman not letting Aten through to see the doctor. Roxy: To the shadow Realm with her!!! Ray: *Raises her hands in agreement* YES! GO MARIK! SEND HER TO THE SHADOW REALM!!! We're wondering what the letter says? Is Daniel dead! We hope not! Poor Robbie!
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 17:23 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, good start for this story.Like I said a while ago, I don't really like the yaoi parts, but so far, it's really good.Uh oh, I think Daniel's dead...color draining from your face and 'We regret to inform you'are bad signs that something is wrong.Unless he was taken as a hostage.Well, good so far.Bye!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl Worshiper On: April 21, 2004 15:51 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: No! Poor Miranda!!! -_-... whenever anyone starts out with, " We regret to inform you" that's bad!! And Aten!!!! Stupid lady!!! He couldn't breath!!!! Poor Baby! :( ... Now, on an adorable note, That's so cute!!! With Aria walking into there bedroom! Gymnastics.... -_- Pitifull..... atleast Tristen mentioned money.... Quarter in Seto's pants!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and On: April 21, 2004 15:47 CDT Comment/Review:
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