| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 30, 2004 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn.... I can't draw to save my life...x_x... Ohh! ^-^ I love Miranda for that! ^0^ The rest of the chapter I pictured Anzu throwing her under-wear and bra's.... o_o at Seto! ^-^ And the part with Aria starting to develop? PERFECT!....... Ignore my evil mind....x_x * runs over and squishes Hayden* He's SO CUTE! Poor little guy... Seto really cares for him though! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 19:04 CDT
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*huggles the chibi* awwww, she's so cute ^-^ Ne, are you going to put her into the fiction, or is that was Aria and Aten both represent? P.S. --> The little quick kiss was cute ^-^
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 14:17 CDT
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Just a guess...but the coughing is the first signs of the Yami Virus, correct?Just a guess...good chapter!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: April 29, 2004 12:40 CDT
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sorry I havent reviewed in forever, but the library blocked AFF, and I don't want to get this site blocked... good story... poor Aten :: hands Aten a cute fluffy monkey plushie ::
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 22:07 CDT
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Hmm, very interesting. I'm liking it so far. I think I should read your prequel before this, so I can get some of the background info. Ud soon. Well ja matte ne.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 28, 2004 21:37 CDT
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Chill out i say! Man, being eight years old, and being that mellow..just so at ease on the talk of death. amzing good stuff there not to mention who's the kcik ass daddy! DADDY BAKURA IS THE KICK ASS DADDY! ryou take notice to the virus! *waves around big sign* ok im going to go off and cry now for various reasons
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: April 28, 2004 17:47 CDT
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wat? i can't collect the ashes and tape them together? pooh....in any capsels update^^ i can't wait^^
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 28, 2004 17:12 CDT
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THANX!! You cleared my question up up and what a good chapter!!! I hope Bakura and Aten are okay...
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 28, 2004 10:40 CDT
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Eep! * runs and stands in front of Aten* ... No hurting Aten! Poor Marik... first Aten... then Anzu... when I read that, I thought about that" Itsy-Bitsy-Teeny-Weeny Yellow Polka-Dot bikini" song... Anzu and ...* shiver* teeny Bikini's... go together as well as Bakura and a cough! Poor Baku! -_- How could you.... you... ar PURE evil... Great chapter though! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 27, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grr... BAKA STEVEN! * pokes him with the Millennium Tooth Pick ^-^* Does he count as a yami too?? I hope so... -_- The only good that can come of this is YAMI'S GONNA DIE!!! ^-^ Yeah Justice! Or Karma! ^-^ Aria's so cute when she's sleeping! * hugs 'da chibi* Great/ Evil chapter! Update soon!... wait... UPDATES TOMORROW!!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: April 27, 2004 15:29 CDT
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Ah, that was so sad.. poor ...erm... everyone ;_; And my boy is 5 years old. He had blonde hair and green eyes, with a lot of freckles. His name is Damion. He's an angel, and like Aten, has a problem. He's blind in one eyes, but you wouldn't notice it, because he never mentions it unless asked. Do you and your wife and husband have any children?
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 27, 2004 01:16 CDT
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so...tired..late at night..ok review time! time to be concerned! so...steven..is he stil around somehwere...(looks around nervously) ah...reminds me of the evanescence song...whisper, i can stop the pain if i wish it all away...go aten, painting all his troubles away. o.o
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 26, 2004 23:32 CDT
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Wow! Another great chapter!! Good Job!! Okay, I have a question though that has nothing to do with this story though. In your story 'Shadows of the Past', does Yami ever bare a son or daughter? Just a question :) Great job!! Roxy and Ray
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: April 26, 2004 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie! I know this will be a fantastic fanfic! By the way, how old is Aten and Aria in this fic? I kinda got confused in the timeline. Hope Aten will be okay. *hugs Aten* no worries!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 26, 2004 09:07 CDT
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Awww, poor Marik is scared, Bakura's right though. Crap! Gotta go to school, bye!
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