| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 21, 2004 17:38 CDT
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This is such a awesome start to the story!! Stupid woman not letting Aten through to see the doctor. Roxy: To the shadow Realm with her!!! Ray: *Raises her hands in agreement* YES! GO MARIK! SEND HER TO THE SHADOW REALM!!! We're wondering what the letter says? Is Daniel dead! We hope not! Poor Robbie!
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 17:23 CDT
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Wow, good start for this story.Like I said a while ago, I don't really like the yaoi parts, but so far, it's really good.Uh oh, I think Daniel's dead...color draining from your face and 'We regret to inform you'are bad signs that something is wrong.Unless he was taken as a hostage.Well, good so far.Bye!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl Worshiper On: April 21, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! Poor Miranda!!! -_-... whenever anyone starts out with, " We regret to inform you" that's bad!! And Aten!!!! Stupid lady!!! He couldn't breath!!!! Poor Baby! :( ... Now, on an adorable note, That's so cute!!! With Aria walking into there bedroom! Gymnastics.... -_- Pitifull..... atleast Tristen mentioned money.... Quarter in Seto's pants!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and On: April 21, 2004 15:47 CDT
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