| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 12, 2004 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vera got told! Hahahaha, by the great CEO who denied her for Joey. ^_^ And Vera got to suffer from all the lovemaking in the rooms next to hers, and even when she passed the ballroom! ^_^ She's surrounded, there's no escape! Mwahahahahahaha! I think I'm hyper, I just had two chocolate brownies. ^_^ mm, delicious, as was the lemon between Kaiba and Joey. ^_^ Loved the chappie. Till next time then. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: July 11, 2004 16:26 CDT
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*giggles insanely* Go Tris', Otogi, Mali', and Marik! Vera got what she deserved for bothering and trying to get at Seto! You're the best for making her suffer ^_^ (Geh, sorry for the lack of updates, I was camping... sun burns hurties)
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10++++++!! That was incredible!! Both lemons were excellent! Hah!! You go Seto!! Dumb bitch. I hope she doesn't sleep the whole time!! Poor Miranda, though. I hope that she does. Man, oh, man. I don't think I'd have gotten any sleep either, but I'd be trying to play peeping chick!! LOL! At our house, the vents upstairs are on the walls, and you can see into the next room! I'd be doing some serious peeping!! Shoot, I'd just ask to be included!! Anyways!! Can't wait for the next chappie!! Lady Elfskye
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 09:19 CDT
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Go Seto!!!! O_O How can she think that's disgusting? I'd take her place...though, maybe not once I was in my room. That'd get annoying after awhile. Poor Aten. *smacks the smoker*
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Title: aff is down again
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: July 11, 2004 08:52 CDT
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first, whee lemons!! seto showed that bitch not to mess with him and i'm so proud as well *smiles and wipes tear away* I feel sorry for Miranda, I mean she has a great husband but for him to be gone for so much? *sighs* it's not easy when you're in a military family. aten and robbie are still too cute for words and vera... well that's the elast of what she gets. but damn those couples can really last and last and last and last... boy now i kinda miss those energizer bunny commecials *realizes pun and ROFL* Okay i gotta go before i choke on my waffles, see ya tuesday!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 11, 2004 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting ch. Nice Ryou/Bakura love making. ^_^ Hehe, I kinda feel sorry that Vera is stuck in a room between Marik and Malik, but I think she deserves it. Can't wait till ur next ch. Gtg. Till next time.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 18:55 CDT
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I think forgot to acatully submit my review and I wanted to amke sure it was here! (thanks for the speical happy bday!) Dude I swear the funniest part in this chapter 'I think to burn things' it had my like rolling on the floor it was wonderful and not to mention how happy I am! Yay Bakura is back even if its for a short while! yay let's have a lemon party shall we? *dances* and i want to hurt Vera so badly! She's so mean but at least kind anow aten and robbie can be all happy in the summer house whoot whoot! *drools over the ballroom scene* sooo cute!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: July 09, 2004 09:22 CDT
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Ewwwwww, Vera and Seto. *chuckles slightly* You're so evil to him. But we all enjoy watching him squirm under your wrath! Aa, sorry I haven't updated much.. friend of mine had a break up with her boy friend.. poor little thing is heart broken :(
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'The Future Mrs. Kaiba'... *snort* yeah right. You wish lady. Boy, she sure goes for what she wants, doesn't she.------------I'm glad you like your characters. It'd suck if you didn't, considering how far you've brought them.----------Wow... I think I've gotten cavities from reading your fics. *checks* yep. There be cavities... Oh well! *huggles you* =^_^=
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Title: its valea
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 01:51 CDT
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(its my birthday today! july 8th! sorry had to add this in)
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: July 08, 2004 21:04 CDT
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I hope that Vera gets what is coming to her. And why the hell would they let Yami have what he wanted. He`s a piece of sh** in this. I can`t help but feel bad for Otogi and Tris, I hope Donny and Alex get better soon to take care of it all.
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! What a chappie!! What a bunch of asinine fuckheads!! PR is definately gonna be busy!! GO CHIBI ARIA!! Tell that woman where to go! Show her how a real gal handles things, and give her a taste of her own medicine!! Man, Lemon next?? Yummy!!! I'll try to wait.... Lady Elfskye *sung to tune from "Finding Nemo"* ...just keep waiting, just keep waiting...
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Title: since aff.net is down i'll review here.
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light (too lazy to log in) On: July 08, 2004 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear gods in Heaven... Ugh people can be just, so cruel and disgusting! Aten's stuffed monkey, Tristen's painting from Aten, Otogi's china, man oh man. Too bad we can't skin bastards like them alive. But they're getting out of the apartment and hey! With Anzu now living in that building those humanity rejects will be getting a living hell every second of every day. I wish it was just more though. Also poor Seto. How will he react when Aria comes up to him one day and says she's wearing a bra? I'll be glad when Friday comes around 'cuz we can read the next update of this fantastic story.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: July 08, 2004 01:20 CDT
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*eye twitches* that was just..so...freaking wrong! the evil bastards i mean GRRRRR! *runs around and kicks stuff* that was so mean! why cant people be accetping..damn them to hell! argh! ...but besides that fact, for one moment i was happy there was yet another good lovely fainting from seto because miranda was great! yay tristian fetish! whoot whoot! lol yay! so there was my bit of happiness, oh how i missed reading this...why cant the whole world just get along...? it would be such good times! but anywho another chapter well done!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: July 08, 2004 00:22 CDT
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Aten....? That was liek so scary! *twitcjhes* i thought that malik found that out before but obviously not...why wont miranda kick that evil woman out of her house! *growls*
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