| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 27, 2004 01:16 CDT
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so...tired..late at night..ok review time! time to be concerned! so...steven..is he stil around somehwere...(looks around nervously) ah...reminds me of the evanescence song...whisper, i can stop the pain if i wish it all away...go aten, painting all his troubles away. o.o
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 26, 2004 23:32 CDT
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Wow! Another great chapter!! Good Job!! Okay, I have a question though that has nothing to do with this story though. In your story 'Shadows of the Past', does Yami ever bare a son or daughter? Just a question :) Great job!! Roxy and Ray
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Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: April 26, 2004 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie! I know this will be a fantastic fanfic! By the way, how old is Aten and Aria in this fic? I kinda got confused in the timeline. Hope Aten will be okay. *hugs Aten* no worries!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 26, 2004 09:07 CDT
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Awww, poor Marik is scared, Bakura's right though. Crap! Gotta go to school, bye!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 25, 2004 22:54 CDT
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(yay i was right, daniel's okay!)I swear i almost didnt finish reading the chapter when i did because i was like at such a loss...let me scream...NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! my poor monkey baby!!!! he'll be aiight! he can shake it off, he can shake his little chibi bum in the bathtub and he'll be okay!*hugs him and robbie to pieces* together they will both conquoer the world! wait and see! *sniffles* he'll live 50 more years if he eats a clove of garlic everyday.mmmhmmmm.
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:29 CDT
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Poor Aten...hope he doesn't die too soon...well, good chapter.Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 24, 2004 18:53 CDT
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I'm going to burst into tears, I had to wipe away the trails of tears streaming down my face. Poor Aten, WHY? Maybe Aku will keep him alive because he needs his Hikari's body? You put me through QUITE a shock when you left off at Miranda's letter. Robbie and Aten are SOOOOO KAWAII!!! SO KAWAII!AWWWWWWWWW!! Makes me, makes ME, a depressed hormonal female teenager with a cruel and insensitive streak, want to hug the living daylights out of them!! Once again... awwwwwwwwww! That was just MEAN!! With the "little hair" in Bakura's throat! You're trying to make me have a mental breakdown aren't you? Oh well, ANYTHING for another chapter! The squirrel MAY have been a while ago but it's one of those things I'll ALWAYS remember!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 24, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Awwww!!! Poor Aten!!!! * attempts to hug Aten 'till he turns red, but then Marik comes and chases her away*... sheesh! Anyway... I'm glad Daniel get's to come home! Whew! ^-^ That was a great chapter!.... One more thing.... * shoves some Yami cough Medicine down Bakura's throat* Poor Baku! The Virus has come! :(
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Reviewed By: Roxria On: April 24, 2004 16:10 CDT
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OH NO!!! POOR, POOR ATEN!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM? Aten's sooooooooooo sweet! Please don't let him die!!!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 10:04 CDT
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It's good that Daniel didn't die. But Aten... noooooooo, poor kid. And we all know Marik must feel extremely bad if he's crying. He usually hardly ever cries... I would cry if I lost my son too, though
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww did you have to stop it there. it's a great start to it. can't wait until the next one. Jas chibis eyes look. "update really quickly. ok luve you byebye."
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 21:14 CDT
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An excellent start is always a good sign! I'm hooked- Aten's heart trouble, the possibility of Daniel being gone, Aria and the gymnastics... Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 21, 2004 19:47 CDT
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*burns the lady at the front desk at the stake* MUWHAHAHA! die! (Bakura saying they're doing gymnastics! OMFG SO FREAKING FUNNNY!!!!!!!!) *pets aten's head* i know youll be okay! Dude, that letter, itsx like college exceptance letters..your an indentdannt woman Miranda, you'lkl get through this! *hugs* It would be so good if they said we regret to tell you that your husband has been injured! yeah injured! *nervous laugh* eh..no... doesnt work u.u
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: April 21, 2004 19:30 CDT
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OH NO!! What's going to happen to poor Robbie ;_; That's right, I'm back ^_^ Think I would miss this? Not for the world ^-^
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Reviewed By: M0nonoke On: April 21, 2004 17:50 CDT
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THATS MEAN! Poor Aten, and not knowing about whats his name... I didn't read the other, hostile takeover, but i know most of the backround. I love your stories, so keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing.
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