| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: July 29, 2004 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha-o! It's me again! I just want you to know that the last two chapter made me cry... I'm still crying even as I type... I need a hug... Can you squish me till i stop breathing? and About the songs are they from the new CD? Because I have only the first one but one of my friends told me that they released a second one not to long ago... Anyways,please Update As Soon As Possible. I would like that... Damn tears...
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 29, 2004 00:07 CDT
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Ok, I feel better now. Even though Bakura is still being tortured. *glares at Yami* Anyways, this ch. was fun. So Seto's going to throw a tournament for chibis? How fun! Make those evil little brats (Eric and Rhonda) lose if they enter. ^_^ hehe. Malik's really stressed. Poor him and his yami too. Till next time then. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Redconvoy-1 On: July 28, 2004 17:37 CDT
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Geeze, Yami is a real bastard. I hope he doesn't come back. I was always wondering something. Did you make up Bakura's last name or is that his actual last name? I remember it being something different. Keep up the story!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: July 28, 2004 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* Poor everyone! Though I thought it was a good chance to have a sweet moment with Aten and Marik. I love those, it cant get any better than those father son moments. So that was happiness. *takes pictures with my digital camera of bakurasgirl and aten* ^-^ Man I wish Rhea could help Bakura out! It's so sad! Yami is getting what he wants! That's not right i tell you! But anywho, I'll be happy when Aten can be cool like a fool in a swimming pool and draw and express all his emotion and everything, I'm interested to see what he has in the works. *cheers* They're gonna duel! Chibi's all around Domino are going to be dueling! It will be good! MAKE ERIC LOSE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tokyo Nights On: July 28, 2004 12:23 CDT
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*glares at Yami* I have a feeling that Yami will be punished for this greatly..? Either way.. Everyone seems to suffer in your fan fiction but him *thinks* there were a few times, but he seems to have it easy... bastard pharaoh
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: July 28, 2004 12:21 CDT
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Sorry!! I was away on vacation. Damion says hi. Now, on to the reviewing. Baku died??? You- you killed him? How could ya?! *throws pillow at you* Evil is what you are *throws more pillows*
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Title: Moshi Moshi Neko
Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 12:16 CDT
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*groans and dies* Geeeeh, no more chocolate... no more *blah* So sad... *sniffle* I hate you, Yami! *stranles teddy bear* Diiiiiiiie! *Stabs with knife*... crap... my teeddyyyyyyyyy *dies again*
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Title: The Yami Virus
Reviewed By: AngelRavenDove On: July 28, 2004 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this series since it was on fanfiction.net. It always seemed like a story based on reality and twisted up with shadow realm magic giving that sweetness. Never did it not make sense. It was excellent. You couldn't help but love Aria and Aten through the stories. You made the kids so life like that it was to the point you thought that they were your own children and they would running up to you while your reading. Never stop writing cause if you ever started writing novels in real life, you would be on a top seller list. This is on of my favorite story series so please don't stop! Ja ne and Buenos Suertes! AngelRavenDove
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Reviewed By: lost light On: July 27, 2004 19:54 CDT
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hey your a good writer the death scene was real sad I hate death its so final exept in your stories to bad it can;t be true in rrealy=ty my boy freind died 5-27-97 still miss him i no how it feels tl lose but anyway sorry good storie . this is star I got tired of my name .
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: July 27, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! *strangles Yami* Die Yami! DIE! DIE! DIE!!! *throws daggers at him* So cruel. Poor Kura. He doesn't deserve that again, it's not fair. *cries in a corner* Poor Ryou too, and Aria, and Aten, and everyone else too. *cries some more and runs off*
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Reviewed By: yami no miko On: July 27, 2004 10:55 CDT
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NO!!!!!!!!!!! how could u!!!!!! why did kura have to die! *cries waterfalls* its so unfair!!!!! and its worse that u gave him to yami!!!!!*cries more waterfalls* *runsoff to revive Kura*
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye(too sad to log in) On: July 26, 2004 16:50 CDT
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Can't write, crying to hard. Too sad. Must stop crying long enough to kill Yami. Again. *sobs in corner* Lady Elfskye
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Reviewed By: valea On: July 26, 2004 16:37 CDT
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*kills her VERY PAINFULLY* grrrr!! WHYY!!! Why must you choose to be so cruel! I acatully cried for this one! AND IT HURT! *brings her back and slices her into small pieces with a chainsaw!* RAWR!!! *sniffles* Why again! Why mushe have to suffer Yami's evil stinkin's pain again! Hey maybe Rhea will save him..but you won't be that nice will you? And by thte way I'v eheard that song and it did go very well! But it will still take me a long time to forgive you! wahhh! badness...bakura dying equals BADNESS!!! well written though..*runs away crying*
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: July 26, 2004 16:03 CDT
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¬_¬ I think.... I dunno what weapon yet.. It's gonna be painful though... Poor Bakura! T_T He shouldn't have to go through that again... Poor.. everybody.. Marik, realizing the death of Aten ( you do that, I'll hurt those you care about.. ¬_¬... no killing off Aten... ¬_¬) Ryou, losing Bakura... Aria and Aten.. losing a dad... it's just not fair...... ^_^ Keep up the great work! lol
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Reviewed By: Moshi Moshi Neko On: July 26, 2004 10:37 CDT
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*eating chocolate and sobbing* Poor Baku-sama... placed at the hands of Yami... I never really expected it to end like that for him.. *sniffle*
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