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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: October 11, 2004 14:31 CDT
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lol! Those new stories of yours sound great! Especially the Yami cliche fic of torture! :) Your story is getting really really interesting! I can't believe Yuai kicked Yami's arse in a dream! I'm wondering tho, about that connection of hers with the Dark Magician of Chaos. Is she it's reincarnation? Is he her version of Yami's Dark Magician? Do I have to wait 'til the next story arc? Argh! Hurry and update! THe suspense is killin' me!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 11:26 CDT
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OMG i'm sorry i missed a chapter! I've had so much work to do that i havn't been on mm.org for ages. I'm so happy that Yugi had his Yami back now. *sigh* they are so kawaii together but poor Yuai who can blame her for being totally freaked. I know i would. Lol the thing about Bakura not being able to sing is even more amusing my my twiste dhead because i can picture Ryou being a good singer, ah will the contrasts never stop! Byebye
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 09:40 CDT
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O.o aaah the chaos ensues. Hehe Yami mind-crushed him! Best thing i've seen all day. Anyways, I didn't think Yuai would be that scared of Yami..although seeing a transparent Yugi for the first time is kinda frightening. I hope they find her or she'll get really sick! I wonder what Bakura is going to do...O.o sounds cool XD. I can't wait to read more!!! I feel bad for Jou though T.T. Everyone is picking on him! Bad people!! Update soon!! ^^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 21:05 CDT
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And Jame gets added into the mix. Nice. o_0 Chickens? Shadows have messed up Yuai's mind. Oh, and I gotta say, I love this line: "Last week, when a maître d' didn't seat us right away, he just settled for getting the man fired and having his car and house repossessed. See? He's improving." I love Kaiba and Jo's relationship. ^_^ Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sorcerss Sarrkh On: October 02, 2004 23:59 CDT
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More mahaado...? :) Sounds good to me! Man, you just keep sucking us further and further into this story of yours! I wonder what's gonna happen now that yami is here! I can't wait for you next udpate. :)
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:36 CDT
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Awwww, go Yami! Or is it really Yami? *So confused*
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 21:41 CDT
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Yay! Yami and Yugi-ness!!! I'm so glad. I wanna see singing yami's! That would be hilarious..like they'd all do a show and get kicked out because they sucked. I wonder if the gang will find Yugi and Yami and Yuai. And what about what Yuai thinks about Yami!? Oooh so interesting I can't wait to read more! Update soooooon!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 16:32 CDT
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All right, no worrying aout Honda/Ribbon. That's ok, since WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!! *clutches head* Yugi...Yuai...Yami... GAH! And what's with the glitch in the system? Kaiba-boy's(uh-oh, sounding like Pegasus) gonna be mad... there were also a couple of typos you might want to fix as well. Please update soon, so I don't go insane.
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Reviewed By: `DaeBird On: October 01, 2004 15:54 CDT
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Very nice additions. ^-^. Everyone seems to be in somekind of problematic position right now. I can't wait for the Yamis' chorus triplet. I hope Yugi and Yuai will get out alright, they should now that Yami's here. And Mokuba still hasn't returned from Sri Lanka...sorry, I just randomly missed him. Oh and the names for Jame's friends look familiar. They look like they were taken out of Disney and Shakespeare...were they? *shrug* Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess (I have an account, I swear!) On: October 01, 2004 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Yami's back! Er... threesome? ^.^ Possibly? I can't believe how much I'm into this story... You're something else, you know that? ::grins:: Now, I must go, because I'm in school, and I really shouldn't be reading this... ::guilty grin::
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Title: So La De...Yami?
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: October 01, 2004 06:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are they gonna sing?!?!? I gotta see that...well you knkow what I mean ^^ heee.... So...has everyone regained their senses yet of who they are and whatnot? I'm still a little in the dark about who the true enemy is here though. That I'm still mystified about... And what the hell happened to Otogi? Is he ok?
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: September 30, 2004 22:57 CDT
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Yay, Yami is back in the picture... there was just something about Yuai and everyone else thinking Yugi was crazy that rubbed me the wrong way. I can't wait to see how Yuai reacts to them. I have a feeling that Anzu and the rest are bound to do more damage than help. Then again, I could be wrong. I'm intrigued about the hacking going on at Kaiba Corp. I can't wait to see how that turns out. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: September 24, 2004 19:07 CDT
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I think that anything at this point counts as a rush towards the road to insanity... but then again, we're already used to that, aren't we? Kaiba is going to be kicking some major ass when he gets a hold of Marik. I can't wait to see it. I was laughing so hard at the thought of Yami, Bakura, and Marik all having to sing. *snickers* I'd love to see that.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:49 CDT
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Song of Orpheus? *tries to remember what the name Orpheus has anything to do with anything* *looks it up* Oh, some guy who was the son of Calliope and Apollo or some other guy... helped some guys from being crushed on the rocks by singing(such a horrible summary. I know I could give a better one). Very approriate. Go Yami! Go save Yugi! o_O I don't knw if I want you to continue the Ribbon/Honda thing or not... please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 14:05 CDT
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Oooh singidge from the Yamis. This should be highly amusing, some how i can picture Bakura and Yami being bad singers yet when I imagine Marik i think that he'd have a beautiful baritone that just washes over you, and i Marik isn't even my fave yami..oh well. I think next chapters going to be hysterically funny and i definatly am excited to see whats going to happen with the Yugi Yam Yuai thingy...and I have to admit i'd totally forgotten all about that other character...whos name i've already forgotten I'm so blonde its not funny. Anyways I loved the chapter and the whole without half of your soul you'll go insane thing is a brillient idea and most likely true.
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