| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: December 21, 2006 14:13 CST
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You know, I realized I had never said bravo to you for making a decent OC. A female one at that, and one with a significant part in the story. I have seen it done before. Once. It was a very long Gundam Wing fic, and I had avoided it like the plauge because it was very upfront in announcing that there would be a female OC, and that she would be a main character. But that one was actually good, to my great suprise when I broke down and read it in a fit of boredom. This one makes two fics with an original female character that is in the main cast that is both well rounded and someone I don't want to see killed off. Great job, it must have taken a lot of work and a great deal of skill to manage this rare feat.
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: December 21, 2006 13:56 CST
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You know, I think the shadows found the hippie's 'special stash' and got a little 'happy.' Or to put it plainly, I think the shadows are high. But it makes for a cool chapter. Onward!
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Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: December 21, 2006 00:01 CST
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The whole secretary thing was hilarious. I came dang close to waking up my baby niece (oh the joy of having relatives over for the holidays-not!) with my choked laughter and odd squeaking sounds. Yeah. It was that funny.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this in one go, what a ride. I loved the story. I am now ready to read Psyche. I love Yuai and Jame. Great job.
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 00:26 CST
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Oh my god! My review stayed! Thank the gods of writing and reviewing! Just want you to know, I tried to post a review a month ago, so blame mediaminer for your lack of reviews! This was my third or fourth attempt! Heehee! Letting you go now! Can't wait to see what your interlude story's gonna be... (wait...am I mixing up stories/authors...?)
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 00:22 CST
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Here's to hoping it actually stays and reaches you this time... I love the story so far. As usual, I'm dying for more. The Yamis singing... Yami Bakura thinking no one heard him... And Yami himself threatening to grate his guts with a cheese grater if her ever did that to Yugi again... Beautiful! There is one thing though. It says that you've finally completed this arc, but for some reason it doesn't have the feeling that it ended... Is this because you know you're going to be having a third arc, so you're not going to make it a complete ending like in the first arc? Anyways, take as long as you need in getting the next arc up. But only because I'd still be impatient in seeing how this really original and interesting story ends up.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 13:57 CST
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Hey! I can review here now! Good! I
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 14:43 CST
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OMG yes the scene is just TO cute for words! Bless him. Well now thanks to you i'm gonna be sitting on my seat in suspence but oh well. I can't wait and i'll keep my eye out
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Reviewed By: DaeBird [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 12:40 CST
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Yay! You updated! Oy, carwrecks are a bitch; prolly why I have such a phobia of driving even if I don't have a damn permit. Anyway, it was a great chapter with everyone home and all, well, not everyone, but I so understand what you had to do to Jo. It's justthat Kaiba is so depressed. Yesh, the suspense kills me, but I guess I can wait. Yuai knows...wonderful. I think she'll like the ohter two. Lol, keep writing and drive safe!
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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 15:45 CDT
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::gasps:: I didn't review this before? How dare me! Ah, Yuai's finally in the loop. ::nods:: Yup, that's a good sign. Keep it up! I want more, girl! ::giggles::
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 10:07 CDT
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Lol no the humiliation will probabley never end for Bakura but its not all bad beacuse he has Ryou...as demonstrated by this chappie. Ooo also it causes many amsuing situations for us at Bakuras expense. Yamis reaction to Yuai being able to see him made me crack up. The idea of Yami not knowing something had happened is just so funny since he has that 'all knowing' image going on. Can't wait for the next chappie
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Title: Signing in is for the weak!
Reviewed By: -DemonandGoddess On: October 28, 2004 21:53 CDT
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The triple hack thing is interesting. So, how exactly would you be able to do that? For perfectly legal reasons, really. =D Never mind, I suck on most things invovling computers anyway. *sigh*Dear lord... Jou, knitting? OMFG.... and Yugi, you got some esplaining to do!!!! (bad attempt at Ricky Ricardo accent with test) ^^ Hehe... love, laughs, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: October 28, 2004 14:24 CDT
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God! I just keep rolling on the floor with laughter. And the scenes with jounouchi! I cna't believe he's learning to knit! :)(: That's ok about the update. I'm being really bad about my story as well (I haven't updated in months, but that's a whole different story because of circumstances and the fact that my computer now has a virus on it), but I'm looking forward to the tonedeaf singing yamis and further torture from one of my favorite authors. :)
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy (NLI) On: October 20, 2004 21:26 CDT
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Buuuh, end of the story-ness ;-; One question; the YamixYuugi pairing.. it won't have a girl added to it, will it? Noooo, please say no, it won't
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: October 13, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Yeah, I guess I'd probably run too in that situation... then again, maybe I'd be happy that there are TWO of my boyfriend instead of one... or maybe not. Poor confused souls... I swear you get a kick out of throwing them in these crazy situations. That's okay, because we all do too! The shadows thing with Yami freaked me out, and I have visions of multitude of shadow monsters flying through the forest after Yuai. Then again, that could just be my overactive imagination. Either way, I can't wait until the next chapter. Please pandon any and all spelling mistakes. It's been a long day... :o(
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