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Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess (what, you thought I'd log in? But that would require me to do work!) On: September 23, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::glares:: You're gonna draw this out as long as possible, huh? Eh, you've got me hooked. I'm hopeless... I like the thing with the song... if only I could hear Bakura's "beautiful" voice... ::snickers:: Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: September 23, 2004 12:43 CDT
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Yeah! You've got Mahaado and in 2 chappies now! Sorry I didn't say anything about the last chapter, but accursed moving skills interfered. :p I think that's real cool that they go insane without the other and I so can't wait to find out what else you have planned. :) Man do I look forward to this all the time!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 05:11 CDT
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Yay the yami's found out what they have to do! Too bad Bakura can't sing hehe. That'll be interesting. I'm curious about the whole Kaiba thing too. That's really cool. Poor Honda. Medication making him chatty. hehe that was funny. I can't wait to see Yugi and Yami back together again! Update sooooon!!
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Reviewed By: `DaeBird On: September 19, 2004 16:44 CDT
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Yep, here w/ meh review for two chappies. I would have done that a lot sooner, but a few hurricanes seem to have it in for the south. But anyway! You really are driving me insane by not revealing who the evil dude is; at this point, I'm guessing Pegasus. I get crazy on suspense scenes. Jou and Kaiba are back together(yay)and Yami and Mahaado are having a moment; it all looks peaceful enough, but for Yugi. Poor sweet child; actually, it shows the strength of the bond between the two. Anyway, I'm sorry this story's almost coming to an end. What inspired this tho? It's really wonderful!
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Reviewed By: amunra On: September 19, 2004 10:07 CDT
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I think at this point, everyone is going insane... that's not necessarily a bad thing, but it's good to know they're not going to have anything else thrown at them to rush along the insanity process. Good update!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 21:41 CDT
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W00t, go Jame. And Mahado is here! Yay! And the readers, Yugi, and Yami are still insane. >_< That's gonna change in the next chapter...right? Anyway, awesome chapter, plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 07:15 CDT
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Yah Jame kicks ass, i can believe she'd very easily take over the entire story. O.O ooo is kaiba pissed or what, i love him to bits but if he was in that kind of a mood i'd run away and hide! Still can't wait to see what happens to the evil dude! Yay Yugi is completley bonkers, its great but i will like having the normal Yugi back..not to mention YAMI! hmm i've been thinking...which is hard work for me lol. Anyways earlier in the story if I'm remembering it correctly Yuai and Yugi's relationship was a bit rocky because both felt like they wern't getting enough out the of the relationship but (And i'm trying to guess your plot line lol) when Yami comes back Yuai is obviously gonna end up meeting him so will Yami give what Yugi and Yuai need in the relationship, afterall he already loves Yugi and cares for Yuai so maybe...hmm i've lost my trail of thought anyways hopefully you got what i meant even if i'm way of track with it lol. Anyways short but awsome chappie!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 20:26 CDT
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Aww, poor Yugi, losing his cute li'l mind. *gives roses to Yugi* 0_0 You are driving me crazy. WHO IS HE!!!! Driving me mad...and what's going on with Seto? What? WHAT!!! Damn authoresses, ruining their reader's minds... Update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 12:52 CDT
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Hehe yeah mad Yugi and he's going crazyer...but he lost his invisible friend... how heartbreaking? Did u ever have an invisible friend as a kid, i didn't but i suddenly feel a yearning for one lol Yeaqh i', loving the mad Yugi...of course eventually i want the slighty saner one back..is Yai ever going to find out that Yami's real is one very important question right now!! I hope so. I'm all confuzzeled (my new ford for confused) about who could be the shadowy powers person...but go Seto for managing to shake them off. I felt sorry for Jou though bless him. Btw i have no idea if i've told you but i love ur OC Jame....she kicks ass!!! I know the whole granpa/peggy thing was al little far out even for moi. My little teapot? never heard of that one...from the sounds of it i don't want to but who knows if i ever get really bored O.o
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Title: WTF?!?! I'm lost!!!
Reviewed By: Y ami no Jean On: September 07, 2004 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...I'm am completely absolutely 100% lost on this storyline. I cannot follow it anylonger. What the hell is going on? Everyone seems to be losing themselves to something it seems like and nothing is making sense anymore. Can you try and explain? I think I got lost about the time when Yuai and Yugi took off and Yugi started acting weird. What's going on with Yami? You haven't done anything with him lately nor Bakura or Marik. What's going on with their parts?
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 10:43 CDT
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Wow! That was a great chapter! Yugi lost his invisible Yami that's not there! How sad...*hugs Yugi* Yuai still thinks he's crazy. Well I don't blame her cuz not anyone can see Yami O.o. So, I'm a little confused. Did Seto feel the shadow powers or he just knows they are there? ^^' That part confused me just a little. But it was still a good chapter! Thanks again for reading my stuff! Love and Peace!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 11:17 CDT
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lol hey i'm back! Btw thank you so much for your review on my story, i feel all special!!! lol my god yugi really is loosing it! its great fun to read, i think Yugi should go mad more often. Ooh and the companion thingy to rabbit rabbit rabbit sounds very very good..hmm what don't i like...well i pretty much go with anything except when the Yamis are made out to be something different...for instance when Bakura and Marik are made out to be changed people and they're all goody goody, rabbit rabbit rabbit was cool though because bakura obviously didn't want to be nice...uf ya kbow what i mean. Ohh an di hate really silly pairings like Grandpa Motou and Pegasus...i'm all like you what?! Urm theres lots more but i'm running out of space so all i have to say now is keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 00:29 CDT
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Finally I'm getting off me lazy arse and reviewing your work of art. Which is exactly what it is. i loved chrysalis(sp?) and I actually think this one is even better. All the characters are in character (an increasingly rare find these days), the storyline is very well written, and the plot bunnies just keep multiplying! You write well and make the story very interesting. And don't worry about this story ever being mary-sue-ish in the least. I don't think you know how, actually. Now what makes me want to hunt down Marik and all the Yamis and personally help them to destroy the Earth when it comes to bad fanfictions? Easy. OOC Characters like nobody's business. Abandoned stories. Stupid plots. Repeated Tea bashings for now damn reason at all (i mean, how can you hate her if you don't even explain why she should be hate?! You at least do it with style and plot!). Which brings me to the most dreaded of all: Stories that go nowhere because the author clearly has no brain. Not to mention all the mary-sue's who suddenly appear with no explanation what-so-ever and some of them are even judgemental, hypocriticaly snobs! ~ Ok, I'm done ranting for now. Sorry, but that's only the tip of the iceberg, too! I've actually almost given up on Yugioh fics, now! But anyways, continue writing cuz I wan't wait to see more of Mahaado and Y/Y's insanities. :)
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: August 24, 2004 22:08 CDT
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What I hate about Yu-Gi-Oh stories? Wow... there really isn't enough room for all of my pet peeves here. It'd take all of my reviewing space to list. However, I can tell you what my favorite Seto/Jou story is. It's called Being Dead Ain't Easy by D. Draggy. It's absolutely fabulous! It's complete, and you can find it on fanfiction.net. I've got a couple more, but the titles escape me at the moment. Poor, poor Yugi... not only is he being manipulated by god knows who, but the people around him are going to start thinking he's nuts. I can't see how that will go over well at all. I am glad that Kaiba is going to the convention. Maybe he can help with all the madness. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 09:22 CDT
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Wow! Strange, yet, very interesting chapter! Yugi really seems to think Yami is there doesnt he? Oooh and Yuai isn't supposed to know about Yami! Hopefully Jou and Seto don't get into another fight, that would be horrible. Shadow Magic hurting Duke is kinda scary O.o hope he does get better soon. I loved this chapter ^^. Can't wait for the Honda picture! Thanks so much for taking the time to read my fics..they're not much but..still cool ^^. Update soon! Can't wait!!
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