| "Emergence" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: `DaeBird On: August 24, 2004 06:40 CDT
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Oh Yugi!!! He's getting weird looks, altho, I can so picture him with Yami as an imaginary friend and as for Yami himself, he needs to be shoved back with his adoring aibou! KaibaKaibaKaiba. I find him a bit OOC in this part for some strange reason, but the 'voices' in his head could be a problem. Heh, I can't wait for the lovebirds to work things out. Setty looks like he could use some right now. I haven't seen too many Seth/Seto/Jou fics myself, only two of them, never a threesome. Eh, I happen to be an ultra huge fan of Seto/Seth and I do have a fic on that pairing at ff.net. Hmm...maybe I should try a threesome. Sounds cool enough. A companion to Rabbit Rabbit.*hugs you* Ok, what annoys me in fics: random screwing right off the bat. I mean, there is no actual foundation for relationships. I will use Seto/Jou for this one; it is annoying when they just get together because they somehow liked eachother ever since they saw the other or whatever. There is no actual considering of their characters. Well, that's what I find somewhat annoying.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 23:55 CDT
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...why do you continue to ruin my life by toturing Yugi so? AUGH! Poor Yugi...oor Duke! What did you do to him? Magician of Black Chaos...what are you planning? Hmm... James wants to be fired... so she reorganizes Kaiba's files. -_- Meep! Dark Magician(Mahado, right?) is there! Yay! And no, I've never seen any Seto/Seth/Jo, but it sounds like a good pairing. What I hate about bad fanfics... suicide fics, that don't make you pity the character about to die, dialogue only fics that aren't funny, and proclamations of love out of the blue. Not very helpful, since I don't think you're going to do any of these though. Anway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: August 18, 2004 11:24 CDT
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I just finished reading all your fics. This one is interesting. I hope it is updated soon. My daughter loves Duke so I couldn`t let her know what you did to him. I hope he will be okay. He seems to still be her favorite. The Rabbit one is hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 20:01 CDT
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O.o;; Haha Honda acting insane!! That's hilarious!! Well yes, As you said, at least Yugi remembers Yami now. But he's still acting a little funny. I can't believe all those fangirls jumped on him! O.o that scared me. Oh no, the Seto and Jou angst is back >.< Jou better not catch Duke's 'sickness' or whatever it is. That would suck. Really bad. You write really well ^^;; Update soon!! And maybe if you have the time..you could view my fics..that would be great!
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Reviewed By: Moshi Moshi Neko On: August 11, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! You're so good it hurts my head! Was it really Yami talking to him, or was it the shadows toying with him? And why couldn't he remember why he had the puzzle, or what it was for? I really hate being culeless, but I suppose that's your reason... makes the reader want to see more and more
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 12:00 CDT
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Hey, awsome chappie. My god Yugi's being glomped, its a worldwide glomping session. Poor boy he has no idea. Noooo Jou! Seto! not again my god your evil....i love it!! tee hee i just re-read my last review sorry for the godawful spelling of mine. I'm definatly gonna enjoy this ride and my computors probably gonna blow up lol
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Reviewed By: ~DaeBird On: August 10, 2004 16:18 CDT
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Now, I'm totally confused as to what's happening to Yugi and Yami. I hope they're not falling into a black abyss of death and no return. Aw, now I'm worried about Kaiba and Jo. I'd like to see those two through hell and back, but you've developed their relationship so well that I'm hoping they don't break up. I'm thinking Jame should try putting pink bows and eyelashes on all the BEWD statues just to piss Kaiba off to get fired. That'd be SO cute! Keep going!
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Title: DemonandGoddess
Reviewed By: D&G On: August 10, 2004 07:49 CDT
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You're really having a lot of fun with this story, aren't you? Hey, Yugi remembered Yami! Cool! Ok, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: August 09, 2004 21:21 CDT
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I think the best line of the chapter was Jo worried about turning Kaiba's brain into mush. Like that could ever happen. Poor Jo. Of course, I can see problems arising for these two over Duke already. I wonder what more hell you're going to put those two through. The secretary is hilarious! I was reading another fic(I can't remember which one it was) and kept expecting the secretary. Then it dawned on me that I had the wrong fic... sigh. Yugi, Yugi... there's something terribly wrong with that child! I can't wait to see what you're up to. You're an RK fan as well? Cool! There are so many good RK fanfics around. Thanks for the recommendations.
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Reviewed By: Amunra On: August 04, 2004 00:08 CDT
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ARG!! It's way too late at night for me to be figuring anything out... My brain can't take the constant shift in directions, so next time I read a chapter, I'm going to have to do it when I haven't worked for 12 hours straight. Okay, so Yugi is losing pieces of his memory, huh? I like the idea. Actually, I just like seeing him acting all confused and stuff, it's really cute. I bet he's going to have a hell of a time getting through the convention. Why do I have a feeling that what's happening to him is being done deliberately? Or am I just too paranoid? I hope to read amore soon!
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Reviewed By: ~Daebird On: August 02, 2004 17:03 CDT
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Mokuba's gone?! Awwwwww! Oh well, Kaiba does need time to dye all the grey hairs. Actually, it'd be funny if he found one the next day. And has Yugi stepped into a twilight zone? Hopefully, he won't forget the puzzle at the hotel or toss it into the woods. *shakes head* all that exposure to the Shadow Realm can't be good. Kaiba or Yuai should take him to an exorcist.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 05:43 CDT
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i've just finished reading the first part of this story and now i've read all of this so far and i have just got to say you are an awsome writer. In the first story (which name i can't spell) i was so heart broken for Seto and Hou when they broke up and poor Yuai's trtagic story. It was seriously awsome and this ones just as good so far. I have to admit i'm untrigued by it and have no idea whats going on so i hope you update quickly
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 11:33 CDT
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*confused* Yugi's acting strange...very very strange...he keeps forgetting everything! Don't take the puzzle off Yugi!!! Well at least Mokuba is gone until Yuai gets back..and Poor Honda and his broken wrist. Hope he gets better. Ah well! Use your powers to make Yugi better!! He's acting too weird!! >.< Tis an awesome story, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Waitasecond! What the heck is happening? How can he forget Yami!!!! What are you doing!!!! grr... evil authoress with her evil authorouss powers. Grr... update soon!
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Reviewed By: ~Daebird On: July 29, 2004 11:43 CDT
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O.O Oh my, Kaiba and Jou are really scared of Mokuba, aren't they? And I hate seeing Yami so depressed, he's usually so strong, I hope he gets a body. As for Duke, I have to see what you do with him or if it IS him at all. I love a good surprise.
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