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Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 06:28 CDT
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Mostly what I hate about OCs is they always either know the character from some random event before the show or are perfect in a way that makes several guys/girls lust after him or her. Yuai, on the other hand is an OC I liked from the beginning becuase I really enjoyed her character development! This chapter was really awesome, and I absolutely loved it! Everything from the slightly angsty beginning, hilarious middle, and sort of fluffy ending was wonderful. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Aaaah! This chapter was really cool! I liked the whole Yami and Yugi thing..and I can't wait to see that Honda sketch! Hehe update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens..I love the way you write ^^ so intriguing!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(this is me...really!) On: June 18, 2004 15:58 CDT
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I'm sorry about you're accident!Hope you're ok now. Yeah, 'Insert Cool Yu-gi-Oh related title' is an awesome fic. ^-^ I'll have to read those other ones.'Lovely day. The sun is shining. The birds are singing. Jo is practicing bondage. What more could a man want?' hehe, my fav. quote so far. Update soon! Oh yeah, OC question. Well, I like OCs tht either suffer a bit, or are insane and hilarious. I don't like it when OCs are always perfect, and everyone likes them. :p
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Reviewed By: DaeBird [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sorry to hear about your accident, I hope you're alright. Nice chapter, it was very relaxing. ^-^ Mm, cat's cradle is a tough game, tho only Jou can get that tied up. And Yami seems to be having so much to contend with despite being so comical and noble in the prequel. Hope he's alright. Update soon. What I hate most about OC's. Sometimes they just come in and suddenly everyone is falling for them. It rushes the entire story and throws the original characters out of character.
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Title: Yeah!!!
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC (Not Logged in) On: June 15, 2004 12:20 CDT
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Vey cool, sorry I haven't reviewed sooner, my comp, has broken down, so It's been hard getting online, anyway, this is looking good, I hope you get the next chapter up soon
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: June 14, 2004 21:45 CDT
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I think it's cute, but it cut me up, that Yami and Yuugi aren't a couple. Wasn't expecting they would be, and Yuai and Yuugi are cute too, but I like the YamixYuugi paring more. You fiction is better, though
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic very much. As a biker-b I would like to say only one small thing. Bikes don't slip. They skid or fish-tail. And please don't say it went sideways. In a lot of bike related groups that means comitted suicide. Your character development is great and I do like Tristians new hair. But can you say helmet head? Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
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Reviewed By: DaeBird [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was awesome! I've read Chrysalis and I can tell this one's gonna be just as awesome if not better. Wow, Yami's jealous. I mean, It was nice of him to set Yugi up w/ Yuai, but look who didn't think of the consequences. Take your time and update, I'll be checking back!
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Title: Have At It Matey!
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that Renaissance Faire scene was hilarious! I think I'm following along ok. I've read all of Crystalis (pardon if I didn't spell it right) and that was pretty good; lil confusing at some parts, but otherwise good. *dramatic soap music and announcers voice* So...will Yami and Yugi get together? Will Honda ever get his hair back to it's pointy self? Will Kaiba survive his brother's sugar rushes? Will Yuai and Yugi ever be able to touch w/o Kaiba wanting a health report? All these and more coming up in the next chapter (I hope ^_^)
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Reviewed By: divastarz002 On: May 19, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey cool!!! WHere'd you get the name Yuai anyways? Plz continue to write!!!
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Reviewed By: Pharaoh's High Priestess On: May 19, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighing* Tamlin-san....why do you have to be such a good writer? Now I can't stop checking the web every 10 minutes to see if you've updated...Seriously, I feel both miffed(is that a real word?)and sad...I know Yami-sama is jealous...But wasn't he the one pushing Yugi-sama toward Yuai? I like Yuai..but I still feel Yami and Yugi belong together...I can't wait to see what Yami-sama's excuse for being so quiet is...you rock as an author...It helps when correct grammar and sentence structure is used...Make sure Yami and Yugi-sama make up..SOON!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 19:02 CDT
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Hey, Yugi annd Yuai got together? This is the first time I thought an OC with Yugi was a good idea. Wait, what about Yami?! Oh, poor guy. And Anzu got together with Mai, cool! ^-^ Man, I want to see Honda with that kinda hair, I bet it looks better than before! Please update soon, kay? *5 minutes later* Okay, maybe i should wait a bit longer. ;;;;^-^
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama (not signed in!) On: May 19, 2004 14:21 CDT
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Oooh this chapter was cool. I'm sorta confused tho...Yugi and Yuai got together? O.o well thats cool. And Honda changed..I would love to see him with that kinda hair. Well, can't wait for the next chapter! *sits and waits at the computer* update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 17:44 CDT
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Ooooh, the sequel. ^-^ I like the faire. Hmmm...is the man Pegasus or someone else? Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter. Update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama (not signed in) On: May 03, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaay the sequel! I've been waiting for this for soo long ^_^ I can't believe it's finally here! And I like this chapter..the fair thing was cool and nice..Wondering if Yuai likes Yugi or she just likes to beat him in games o.o we'll find out! Update soon!!!
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