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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 08:39 CDT
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hehehe!! that was great! i can not wait for the next update! but u should really start tellin about kouga! cuz i really like kouga when he is in stories! and maybe he should have little wolfys running around his legs that would b so cute! kouga with little wolfys! i think i will use that in my story! hehe! well any way! hope u update soon!! and i really hope inu gets smart really fast!! much love!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 05:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was a great chapter. I cried a little during Miroku/sango angsty moment. Why must they suffer? so much torture...oh well i do it too. LOL Well i can't wait to find out what happens next. Will we get to meet fluffy? te he. Krystal.
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Title: mmmm......chi-ken...lol
Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I've just stumbled on your story a while ago and thought that it would be interesting to read about it. I have fallen in love and I cannot wait to find out what happens next. I do hope that you keep up the great work and update asap because I might shrivel up and blow away if you don't. I hope that there is also some more Miroku/Sango moments. Not many people consentrate on them, but it be cool if some one did. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 19:42 CDT
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that was soooo sweet!!!!!!!! i hope sango and miroku get together: ) plz update soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 (Not signed in) On: June 24, 2004 17:29 CDT
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Wow...I hate to say it but sometimes Miroku could be one clever lech. I mean using his staff to reflect Sango's image so that he could watch her is a pretty clever idea. Since stage one is complete, does that mean that you will finally say what stage two is? I'm dying to know! And what's the deal with Kikyo? I mean, is she like a stalker or something? Like who the hell would ever watch two people having an intimate moment together...either than Miroku of course. I hope Inuyasha and Kagome will stop her before she ruins thier lives. ARRRGH! I wish that bitch would just DIE!!! Ahem...I know that I'm probably bothering you with all these questions but I have one more for you: Will Inu and Kag find out that it was Hojo who was trying to kill them and what kind of role will he have in the other chapters of your story? Come to think about it...I just asked you two questions. Okay...I think I wasted enough of your time with my questions so again great chapter and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 24, 2004 14:58 CDT
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yay! i got to read two chapters in one day!! In one sitting ! woo hoo! lol. I like Yuka going back in the past, its cool. Inu and Kagome having their scents mix is a cool idea too....I hope my boyfriend isnt a dog demon cuz he does that to me all the time lol. i hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 11:25 CDT
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aaaaawwwwww what a sweet ending to this chap!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 08:33 CDT
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hahaha!! that was great!! i can not wait to c what kikyo does!! but one thing is for certain!! i want kikyo to b in pain becuz i just found out that i am a kikyo hater so might as well tell every one else!! kikyo must pay!!! mahahahahaha!!! cause her pain and make her wish she was never born!!!!! i hate kikyo!!! now we just have to find out with these couples and what the hell is kouga doin any way!! i was just wondering!! o well! never forget the love!! which i can tell that u have not !! but still!! much love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: sweet chap
Reviewed By: smittin kitin (not logged in) On: June 24, 2004 01:14 CDT
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Another great chap! Wow stage 2 of the mating ritual. How many stages are ther? What happens if the ritual is interupted before it's complete? I've been thinking, Hojo & Kykio both suffer from unrequited love. The cause of thier heartache stems from our favorite couple. If Kag's soul has regenerated & Kykio's piece has morphed into a diffrerant soul isn't it entirely possible that Kykio's next encarnation is related to Hojo. Just something floating around in my head. Thanks for taking the time to answer my questions! I tend to ask a lot (sorry) Hope your muse keeps you busy! looking forward to your next update! Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin
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Title: clever girl!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 09:05 CDT
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Wow I havn't red in a while now that I'm caught up I have some questions. Why didn't inu & Kag recognize Kana's name & associate her w/ Kagura? If they did won't they be able to figure out Yuka's mother? Why can't Inu smell Kagura on her? As for the little fox's father was it more than a coincidence that he was bugging Inu when she mentioned his father, hmm? If I'm guessing right it makes total sense. They all seemed surprised Ses would try to kill Inu, doesn't Inu exist in this time? If so wouldn't he have told them about he & his brother's past even if they've reconciled? So, Ses is an overprotective father figures! I love the complexity of this story & am interested to see how it all works out! As for the lemon, I think it's early for Inu to figuer Kag's question out. He hasn't given it any thought all this time so why would it just dawn on him all of the sudden now, especially w/Kag destracting him all the time! ^_^ Oh almost forgot... Hojo a snipper! I never would have guessed! I always thought he was a little unbalanced though. Just goes to show, even the doppiest guy can be dangerous when properly motivated! Ok gotta go! Keep up the good work & here is a great big cookie for you & your imagintion! Thanks for sharing your fab fic! Hugs & Kisses Smittin Kittin
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 23, 2004 08:37 CDT
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ohmigod ohmugod ohmigod~!! Fist off, thank you TOOO much for the descendants chart, it helped out a lot. This stroy is so totally great right now, seriously? I can't wait to read the other chapters you've added but i have family over *yuck* anyway, these phase things with demons seem to be pretty funny lol. cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:12 CDT
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that was GREAT!!!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 23:10 CDT
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i'm a little confused with all the new characters can you give a quick run down on who's what and who's who
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Reviewed By: Chibi-Inu13 (Not signed in) On: June 22, 2004 17:54 CDT
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Great chapter! The fact that you made Naraku reborn in the future is an intresting idea. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Anyways, I would really like to know what stage two is? I hope it's something that I hentai like myself would like. And also, are Kagome and Inuyasha gonna meet Sesshomaru and Kagura in the future? Becuase if they did, things would get a bit more complicated. Anyways, great chapter and plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 07:53 CDT
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hehe!! that was great!!! i can not wait for the next update!! and for shippo i think it would b cool if he had like alittle girl friend thing going!! i hope it is a cat demon!! i love cat demons!! they r so cool!! but i am more into bunny demons the only thing is no one is ever scared of bunny demons!! damn!! o well!! shippo and a cat demon would b cute!! and i would like to no what the 2 stage is but i have a feeling i would regret it! so i think i will wait on that one!! o well!! much love never forge the love!! and i can tell that u do not!! becuase ur writing has so much love in it!! long live the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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