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Reviewed By: HSaiyajin On: May 22, 2005 00:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, the chapter wasn't a cliff, but it feels like one if you read from the prequeal to this chp... So, good job overall. I just have one complaint: why are the chapters soo short? I'm being driven insane with it! [Well, not really... but you get my point] I really like your frequent updates! I can't wait for the next chapter! As for grammer/conventions, you're doing a very good job; better than what I've seen in the fanfiction world. Two thumbs up for that. And that's it for now! Update soon Please!! Leave a pleasant surprise!
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Reviewed By: H.Saiyajin On: May 15, 2005 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm... good job so far, and I really want to you to update soon [preferably day by day], but whatever suits your fancy. The problems and situations are very realistic as are the characters that portray them. The story seems to be very well written and thoughtout [there is hardly anything that appears out of the blue]. And that's it.... soo update soon and have a good day i guess... ps: why'd you leave us hanging on the cliff?!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: May 03, 2005 23:41 EDT
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Aww Vegeta...so much pain but he has mad one step in healing thanks to his lover...I see well the Kais better hope Goku and the others don't fine away there (Evil Grin) not that I mined they should pay for what they keep doing...I loved this chapter ChiChi what a dirty little mind she has...please Update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: elenek *not logged in* On: April 30, 2005 21:42 EDT
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Good chapter. I especially liked the way th eRouba invited herself to the palace. -EL-
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 29, 2005 21:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noo it is notr fare...will they make it back...and when they do I think ity is time for Goku to use his IT and confront the Kai before they do something like reserect Frezza...but even you are not that crule to Vegeta right...like both chapter sorry did not review the last one just catching up Please tell me will Vegeta live or is this the end of him and the end of what kindness and trust in Goku? Up date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 18, 2005 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree love what you did with the chapter...still worried about thoses damn Kais' don't trust them nope I don't...I hope Goku can do what he needs too so Vegeta can heal...please update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Vernalla On: April 11, 2005 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You look like someone he cared about as a child - his Rouba." He was grateful when Kakorr softly answered for him. "He hadn't realized how much he missed her until he saw you." This line made me suddenly burst into tears. I've read this story from the very first chapter of the prequel, and it's still affecting me now. I'm so glad that you're back at your usual very emotional level, I'd missed this during the last chapters I read! Emotions are so overflowing in this, I love you for that~! *hugs* I think it's very important to "feel" the characters' emotions, cry for them, be happy for them, hurt when they're hurting.. It makes it so much more than just simply "reading". I love this story from the bottom of my heart, even more so now that the emotions came back for me in this chappy~! Can't wait to see exactly what'll happen, there are oh so many possibilities.. =) Already like the Rouba and her special relationship with Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: April 08, 2005 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WHAT!!! Why can't they?! Please tell me it was a type o and you were teasing right...right...no no why the y have come so far...please update soon... LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Yuki Eiri On: April 06, 2005 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeepers!! a clifiie :: falls :: I'm loving this so far, keep writing! thats an order! lol :P this is fab hun, cant wait for the next chappie! Hugs Yuki xx
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 14:21 EDT
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Fascinating stuff. Priceless Piccolo scene--I just love Nail. Wondering when Krillen is going to get his. >.<
Wonderfully original and exciting way to get our fave pair mated.... holding on to my seat for next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 10:38 EDT
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I'm Jealous and envious of your writing skill. I'm horribly distraught and on the verge of tears. I loved the description of the Rouba. Poor Vegeta. -El-
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:33 EST
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This story is so yummy. I loved Goku's epiphany and Vegeta's views on ruling. I was so cute. I'll watch for the next chapter and the Kai's explanations. Thank you for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 11:57 EST
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oh I read this chapter the second it was posted and I've been trying to think of something more intelligent to say that "I love it." But I just do love it. The Saiyan history, Goku's POV--so touching--the self-awareness of Saiyan-ness. I *love* it.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: March 19, 2005 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter Nicley done Update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Yuki_eiri On: March 15, 2005 16:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigod! *orgasms & falls over* amazing serries, you are such a talented writer ( a little ass kissing never hurt nobody :P ) Hehe, update soon! :: neeeed mooore :: anyhows! see ya later! :: dances ::
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