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Reviewed By: William Givens On: February 28, 2005 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the series. Hmm...did the Osekkai on Planet Vegeta want the Saiyan Prince of that era to mate with a Kai? Idle speculation. Yeah, I'm a fan of the pairing (Goku & Vegeta). Chichi is too much of a domineering harpy in the show. I like how you toned her down. You are a really good writer. If not for the stupid bakayaro (a little redundant, I know) copyright laws, I'd say go ahead and publish your stories. You are far more talented than I am. Also, a small suggestion--please do not have Gohan end up like he does in GT (a generally useless nerd). It's your fic, so of course you decide. The timeline you have created is intriguing and very fun to read. I hope Goku and Vegeta don't have any trouble with the Kais in the past. Keep writing, because you are very good!
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Title: Chappie 26
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 11:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! I was gone for way too long that time! OMG! Wow! That (and the past few) chappie took my breath away! *Floored* Ok, I hope I can catch my breath back before I go to work today! Fabulous, fantastic, outstanding as usual! You rock! Next chappie, please!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: February 26, 2005 23:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW!!! That was nice Please up date soon and a little more of that would be nice Bye For now LadyKATT
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Title: ch 25
Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 11:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. That was fun reading. I liked how you describe things, the ambience seemed to engulf and me and make me travel together with Goku and Vegeta. And yes, Vegeta's character change is logical ;)
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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 16:11 EST
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Fantastic chapter, as usual. I love the explanation of why Vegeta's hair stands up...I've always wondered about that. As for editing 'Maintaining' and 'Quest', personally I think it has pros and cons to it, as with every situations. A pro would be that a larger audience would be able to enjoy the story, a con would be that no matter how skillfully it's done, a story always loses something when it's edited. That probably didn't help you at all, I'm sorry. ^^; Anyway, great job.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 00:27 EST
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Oh it's beautiful. I hope I'm not inadvertently responsible for your distrust of the Kais. I just thought about that. I like the part where Vegeta is untaming his hair. I always thought it fortunate that Vegeta already had the Supersaiyan hair and that all the artists had to do was change the color. Your explination of his hairstyle leaves one to wonder if that would have been coincidence or not. hmmmm... There is nothing wrong with adding a lexicon. Part of the fun of creating an OC is spending an entire day trying to come up with the perfect name only to have it come to you in a blinding flash 5 minutes before you fall asleep. Then, of course, you have to share with everyone your brillance. Looking forward to more. -El-
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: February 10, 2005 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow...Loved It! Damn Kai alway showing up where you don't want them! Please tell me it will be ok? You will be kind right...ah heck who am I trying too kid...so tell me I need a hanky for next chapter? Up-Date soon please and keep up the exalant work Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: chayron
Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 11:34 EST
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hi, long time no review. Hell, hate libraries, always cut in the most interesting place and even don't let review! Anyway, wanted to say that i'm still reading it, and like the same as in the very begining! It's a very emotional Vegeta you're portraying here, and you're doing a very good job - everything is very nice twining together. I like to read about that. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 02:11 EST
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I was just thinking earlier today that I hadn't gotten a Quest update and that I missed it. *GRIN* I like it. I believe that you can never have too much description. I love it when a picture can be painted. (Although I'm one to talk.) I thought of the photos my mom brought back from Arizona. They fit. My past Vegetasei always had the Saiyans living in the mountains on cave dwellings. I never thought of carving them out with Ki though. Great Idea. I may have to borrow/incorporate it into my view of Vegeta-sei. Hm hm I'm going to have to see If my prediction is right. Thank you for writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: February 03, 2005 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sorry about you puppy we lost our kitten not long ago know how you feel kids really miss him.... I look forward to then next chapters I am really cerous how you discribe Vesta sitting here waiting like a good kitty (evil grin) Bye Bye LadtKATT
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 04:21 EST
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Hey PG!! I finally caught up!! Aren't you proud?? And I definitely agree with Vegeta's eyes being a very dark blue. Dark enough to look black to most. I have this little theory... Since Goku's eyes turn yellow in SSJ4 form, then he must have a brown/gold base eye color. (It's just so dark it looks black. Also this is the reason his eyes are more green than blue than in any other SSJ form) And because Vegeta's turn a lovely shade of cobalt, he must have a blue base color. I know, I'm weird. But I'm really loving this fic!! I can't wait to see what happens to them, visiting Planet Vegeta. That's gonna be so cool. I bet the Saiyans are going to seem really weak now that they have SSJ3 bursting at their fingertips... I know you'll make it wonderful and sappy and enlightening and sexy and heart-wrenching just like all the other chapters... (I did mention that this is a GOOD thing, right??) Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!! Hoshi*
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Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 19:51 EST
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Now, normally I like Krillin...but this Krillin is making my hair stand on end already. Can't wait to see what's going to happen with short n' bald, I'm sure it'll be good. I like this new chapter a lot, especially the story of Kikon and Chikara. I also like the bit about Radditz meeting his dairi, and the whole concept about them. Of course, I am a bit of a Radditz fangirl. *blush* Anyway, love the story, as usual. Keep up the fantastic work. ^_^ --Altair
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: January 18, 2005 10:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Yes Mom" This is the last thind I would have thought of Vegeta calling Piccolo I laughed so hard thanks But I think I see were this is going Vegeta telling fairy tails Love it! Well up-date soon Verry Cool Chapter LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: January 12, 2005 10:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW!!!!!!!!! I finaly can review! Well I am so glad Goku said yes and that they might have found away to get info on Sayains I have this feeling though the Kis are being too quite if you know what I mean it would be just like them to trap them in the past.... But I have fath things will be fine...right? You are going too be nice right? (Give puppy eyes) Well up-date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 18:52 EST
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So bald boy is going insane. Well I never thought he was far from that anyway. I am loving Vegeta's eyes. ^_^ So they are going to the time room to meet up with some old saiyans?? what a fab idea! Perfect way to solve the problem without having to use the dragon balls! BTW merry late YULE! **Dances off**
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