| "Wake Me Up Inside" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! All that going on and you're appologizing for posting "late"? LOL no need to worry if your other readers are like me and simply want to see where the story goes. I, myself, find it harder to update lately due to a new baby and returning to work. I feel bad for posting once every other week or so! So i guess i can say I know the feeling. Hope all is better on your end. Been to the ER myself for a heart problem, take it easy! Wonderful chapter btw! I'm really loving this story.
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Title: Unbelievable
Reviewed By: angel8818 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ove this story so much I registered with mediaminer just so i could tell you how much i loved it. You are an amazing author and... i'm speechless ... plz update soon and thanx in advance angel8818
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Reviewed By: bk On: July 29, 2005 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter. Keep up the good work. Your writing is impressive and this chapter was hilarious. I can't wait till he wakes up. I am sorry to hear about your dog, I'm sure he had a long happy life with you. I also hope you are feeling better and don't need any more trips to the ER. I too just recently learned to read Katakana and I am now trying to learn Hiragana; I know it can be time consuming but I like the challenge. Unfortunately, I don't get much support from people around me. They tell me why bother and what will I do with it after I learn it. I hope you don't come across similar negativity, but if you do ignore them and remember you are doing it for you not them. Take care of yourself and keep writing. I will be watching for your updates.
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Title: Intriguing
Reviewed By: Rafael On: July 18, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic is just so hilarious. But the suspense is killing me right now. So could you please hurry up? I hope I didn't offend you.
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Title: Intriguing
Reviewed By: dragoonms On: July 18, 2005 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic is just so hilarious. But the suspense is killing me right now. So could you please hurry up? I hope I didn't offend you.
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Reviewed By: darkdynama On: July 16, 2005 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! i luv it! I find it totally hilarious^^ cant wait for the next one! Good luck with ur writing^^ I have one question though Is Kouga gonna appear? and what about sesshoumaru? i'm just wondering lol soooo cya l8er^^
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Reviewed By: kittypanther [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 23:01 CDT
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hey i like it please contuine where kagome is it the dram world with inuyasha like sherry but this time inuyasha gets time to tell what needs to be done to wake yue from the coma. if u like that idea give me a type at kittypanther603@yahoo.com & if u can can u please tell me how i can put my own story on mediaminer.org. thanks for the help if u don't like the idea please write me & tell me how i can put my own story on mediaminer.org anyway okay cause i would like to put my own on there too.
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Title: In Total Awe
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, very well written. It brings out more of a sensitive side of Inuyasha, and like Ice said, I can't believe she sat him. That was her only reaction..lol funneh. Bring on the juicy parts soon, i've been sooooo patient and been faithful to this fiction for a VERY long time! I really enjoy your fan fiction, please update soon. I'm also not very hyper tonight...(that was very random)haha.
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Reviewed By: ice_apparition17 On: July 10, 2005 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow these chapters were well worth the wait, seriously. I love the three Stooges they crack me up, Keito is the best. And Sherry is the cutest. Oh! and as for the Whizzbang, I say go for it!!! Sounds like fun! LOL, anywho I can't wait for the next chapter, I can't believe Kagome "sat" Inuyasha at the end of this one, that one caught me by surprise, but I bet he's shocked as well. Please update very very soon!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: ama_tori *nsi* On: July 06, 2005 17:17 CDT
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amazing story you have going here! the OOW would be a great idea, it could be a livejournal community... or an ez-board thing or something... when i first started reading the story, i thought 2 things: 1. Shelly was rin, and 2. Dave was Sesshoumaru, with that whole calm, tough guy stuff, i was sure, but then i read the auther's note ^^ i can't wait to hear from you again!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness. I don't want another Kikyo running around. I thought that was what it was but I was freaking out when she was acting like that. I loved both updated chapters. It was certianly well worth the wait. Also to the questions aboth the Whizzbang Order, I do think you should start it. The main purpose could be what you suggested and just be a place where people can just be goof balls like Keito, Dave, and Zach. It could be placed on a web site that is accessable to everyone who is wanting to be part of this order. Heck yeah I would be willing to participate in this. I would think anyone nuts if they were odd balls and didn't want to join the Order of Whizzbang in honor of Keito. Well there you go hope that is helpful. I am trying to make up a web site to Inuyasha (if I can ever figure out how) if you would like to place it on there if you have no other options once I can figure out how to start it. If not cool too. Just let me know where you do put it. Ja ne for now, *~Star Fire Kagome~*
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Reviewed By: holyllama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 05:04 CDT
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This is such a great fic! The premise is really original, I love how you're trying to (and, I think, succeeding in) keeping the timeline realistic, the characters are extremely believable, and I'm sure you've heard it five dozen times but I absolutely LOVE the Stooges! The scene when they joined the rest of the group (sans Sherry and Inuyasha/Yue) for breakfast had me practically falling out of my chair because I was laughing so hard. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 20:36 CDT
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OMG!!! You have to update again soon!! I love this story!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Mist Goddess On: June 21, 2005 11:43 CDT
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Hey, it Call Me Kim. Can't seem to log in right now so I have to use this name..Can't remember if I answered your question or not...So I will answer it now. Yea, too many apples can cause colic. Any kind of over eating can cause it. Hope that was at least some help.
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Reviewed By: im not logged in On: June 08, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I can hardly wait for your next update, I'll be patient, promise(i hope you relize what a sacrifice that is) you have a life I will remain calm.....DON'T DROP THIS STORY I WILL KILL YOU AND MAKE IT LOOK LIKE THE CAT DID IT! okay i am calm now....sorry bout that i won't pressure you but I will check back every weekend! ciao! ~air
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