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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Diesel_Typhoon nsi On: June 02, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're storry is awesome, I totally love it, it seems totally original, and it's funny, I love Yue and his buddies, it's great, keep up the awesomeness!
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Title: *HUG*
Reviewed By: Lirrle Rin On: June 02, 2005 10:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for putting out another chapter to this story. I like it a lot. I hope you'll put out more soon, but as long as you are going to finish it I'm happy. I know you hate flames, so I'm going to put a little one here: MAKE SURE SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS TO THAT PURPLE HAIR OR.... OR.... Or I'll write another stupid post here. :Þ
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Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story but I am dying to read more! AHHHH! *Hits herself over the head with a frying pan* *crunch crunch crunch*
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with StarFireKag :) But do know the movie Ghost (Swayze)(OObaby) when Kagome enters the room a sees Marg there kiss him . Have Inu spirit go into Kagome's body and tell Marg off and kick some a**. But I know Kagome can do it her self because she is bada** I'v seen the movies "Wow". I think you are doing a very good job and take your time. Don't ignor the others and don't make them get you to upset. Now for this story I'll give 5 double chocolate chip cookie because I love it!!! Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. Love ya until next time
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Reviewed By: Kermit... On: May 07, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was long-awaited but excellent. Don't let the constant bullying get you down. I'm a fanfic writer, too, so I know about pestering and questions, even though my fanfic is not as popular as yours... sob... Keep up the good work! OF COURSE your life comes before this fic...if it didn't, that would be pretty sad... Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kag (not logged in) On: May 05, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! i can't wait until you update. yay yay yay yay!!! sorry like really super hyper here. I CAN'T BELIVE SHE KISSED HIM!!!!!! How about i kick her ass for him!!! I'll do it too!!! oh sorry rambling and hyper but yeah i love this and i can't wait for the update!!! By the way I know that MARG(lol) is Kikyo but who is Brit? well talk to ya later Star Fire Kagome
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Reviewed By: darkdynama On: April 24, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter^^ I'm sorry to hear ur having some problems with reviewers, i hope that despite how annoying it might get, you can continue this fic. i like alot and i'd luv to see how it progresses, stay calm and be kool and u'll b alright lol. i have one question though, is that Marg woman supposed to be like Kikyo? Just curious.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was a little on the boring side...and was Marg supposed to represent Kikyo(hate that b**ch!)? I hope you can get online more often and start posting more chapters...i've been VERY patient....*eats chocolate to pass time* Now for the fortune....Hmmmm it says Penguin will wake Yue/Inuyasha up very soon!^-^
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: April 19, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story and chapter. You're setting up an InuYasha-vs.-Koga-like rivalry between Margaret and Kagome, I can feel it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 17:20 CDT
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I found you again! Yippie! heheh. I'd read your story last december and was completely pulled in. I love it! Keep it going, at your own pace of course. ignore those idiots who attempt to demand quicker updates and other such lame requests. I tend to lump those idiots under "non-writers" ^_^ Or unemployed lol. I know exactly how ya feel. I'm 25, pregnant (8th month), working 40hrs week AND writing. Ugh. But hey, as long as we, the writers, are satisfied with our works, then i saw screw those who don't truly appreciate our efforts. Ja!
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Title: ice_apparition17
Reviewed By: missthix2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for not loggin in, but I'm so glad you updated! this was a long chapter too so i was really happy. but whats up with margaret? she seems pretty...well evil, lol. and its cool to see a story take place in tennessee, because i'm from nashville! anyway i can't wait for the next chapter, and sorry about all the people who have been buggin you, hope i wasn't one of them.
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Title: @_@
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 16:36 CDT
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I really don't like that Marg charactor! Grr.. she's.. like.. a psycho bitch from hell! Anywho, welcome back! /grins/ left me hungry for more, but I understand! Great job, as usual, and I'll try to be patient for the next one. ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: bk On: April 16, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see your back. I glad you got over your writers block and I hope your life has settled down. As for the fools who spam whine and insult you, it is best to ingnore their foolishness. If they have a problem with your story they don't have to read it. This last chapter was very good. I really enjoy you story and would like to thank you for taking your time to write it. I know you have a life and you are doing this as a favor to all of us. Thanks again and keep up the good work. I will be on the lookout for your next update.
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Title: You go!
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm a bit lazy about writing reviews- so I'll apologize 1st for never having written before- Gomen. However, I read your A/N. You go! I haven't updated my fic for 3 months, cuz, well, LIFE. It happens. Take your time- those of us who are trully addicted (like me), will wait for the goodness that comes forth, when it comes. And as for the "encouragement" you've received to wake Inu up, well, I can fully appreciate that a story has to build, it has to weave and flow of its own accord- rushing it will only detract from the finished product. Things are great so far. It's funny, I was just thinking of this fic yesterday and wondering if you had abandoned it- I'm so glad that isn't the case. And, for what it's worth, I'll wait, patiently, for the next installment. Nothing worth having ever comes easily, so if you have to push a little harder to write what you want, it will only prove to be that much more grand when it is done. May all that you strive for be within reach. Cutie Pie Hentai
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Reviewed By: Na (drachaeli) On: April 15, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah... I'm just too lazy to sign in it's me draechaeli. Great chapter... What Yue's gotta girl! and a bitchy (no pun intended (well sorta fits on both levels)) one at that! During that whole Margret part inside Yue/Inu-Yasha's head it was always Yue screaming and protesting. so is it both the Yue and Inu-Yasha parts of the soul that protest Margret or just Inu-Yasha? It would be great if when Kagome and the guys get back if Margret started a cat fight with Kagome and than suddenly (while no one wa paying attention of course) Yue/Inu-Yasha woke up and yelled as best as he could something along the lines of "I love Kagome". therefore waking and pissing that bitch Margret off at the same time, but than of course he'd punch out his friend K(something sorry can't spell) and either out of happiness or anger for hurting a friend Kagome yells "SIT" and most likely sending Yue/Inu-Yasha back into a coma. yes well anyways great fic I'm glad you updated, and hope you do again soon. ~Na
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