"The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: November 13, 2004 13:17 EST Comment/Review: wow! what a great story! i can't wait to read the rest of it. keep up the good work and i can always pray for another quick update.
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Title: Wow! Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 12:36 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What a cute story! I love it so much. P.S. Thank "Precious" who writes "Meant to be" to recommend this wonderful fanfic!
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Reviewed By: WS03 On: November 12, 2004 18:36 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: update soon, please read my fic
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Reviewed By: clavira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:00 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: How sweet - he wants a baby sister! I read your story all-in-one and I really enjoyed it! Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: moonshadowe On: November 11, 2004 07:06 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: sooooooooooooooooooooo cute!!! update soon can't wait 4 the next chappie ^________^
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Reviewed By: queenserena(no, it's santa claus!) On: November 10, 2004 21:13 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *claps*Yeah!/Rin:*jumps up and down*More story!
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Title: Great Story! Reviewed By: BK On: November 10, 2004 07:46 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is such a great story. I deserves a perfect 10. I enjoy the characters and Shiro is sooo cute. I hope to see more of the story in the future. Keep up the good work. I will be watching for updates.
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Title: great story Reviewed By: inuluvher`151` On: November 10, 2004 01:20 EST Comment/Review: hey this is a really great story! I love reading it, it's really funny and cute at the same time. can't wait until u update which i hope is soon Love always, Inuluvher151
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 03:20 EST Comment/Review: hey update soon please pretty please with sugar on top...well ja ne
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Reviewed By: queenserena(Yep, it's me!) On: November 02, 2004 19:31 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What a great way to wait for election results, reading like my mom!/Rin:Rin doesn't understnd this 'e-lkti-on'!/Good thing you don't, I don't wanna fight with you like I did Sam with the presidents...Okay, I'm confusing you more, forget it./Rin:*blinks*Hai...
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:56 EST Comment/Review: very cute chapter im so happy you updated...anyway i love the story. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: October 31, 2004 17:44 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is perfect! Please by that is good update soon I must read the next chapter! I can't give this story anything higher than a 10 by mediaminer's scale, but i'd give it a 20 out of 10 if I could.
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Reviewed By: hg777omm On: October 25, 2004 00:55 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, I love this fic!!! I remember reading it on fanfiction.net, and when I saw it here, I just HAD to read it again! I've always wanted to rate this fic and tell you how talented of a writer you are...so so so talented. I LOVE THIS FIC!!!! Reading...again and again and again...*trails off*
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Title: hello Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 22:05 EDT Comment/Review: well i just finish reading your story up-to-now today and all i can say that it's great...it's funny and it's cute in it's own way...a suggestion for you...i like miroku and sango myabe you can do something with then in the plot more one chapter is all i ask of a half....well keep it up and update soon...thanks Ja ne
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Reviewed By: queenserena(Lion King's COOL!) On: October 17, 2004 20:08 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Rin:What's a Lion King?/The thing we watched with Akki-san when she slept over./Rin:Oh, that! And Rin doesn't like ducks!/A duck attacked one of my friends at school, she thinks they're against us. But she did feed them the animal crackers when she shouldn't have...Everyone thinks they're trying to take over the school, they're in the front yard and never leave, and they'll come up to the windows and start quaking at us. Then they fight with each other, I think they're training...But we just LOVE the little landmine presents on our shoes.../Rin:*giggles*
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