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Reviewed By: queenserena(*claps*) On: December 08, 2004 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pure romance story, there is no angst. No suspense...And they fell in love quickly.../Rin:Like your stories?/....Jee, thanks Rin.../Rin:We have a food for thought!/Oh no.../Rin:'If at first you don't succeed, skydiving isn't for you!'/And don't forget, 'Shin: Device for finding furniture in the dark'.
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Title: UPDATE SOON
Reviewed By: BookNerd [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:17 EST
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YES!!!!!!Finally Inuyasha gets to meet Kagomes ex! Well, I think Hojo would be Kagomes ex, that would tie in good with the story. Can't wait to see Inuyashas reaction *giglges*!! Hurry and update! I need to know what happens!!!!! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 12:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is on florr laughing from the chapter* please,u gotta keep up the good work,this was a good funny chapter,sometimes,short but sweet is the best,just like the chapter i read. shane.
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: December 06, 2004 08:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story this has got to be the most Kwaii story I have ever read!please continue and update soon, however a question did Kagome invite Sesshoumaru over for christmas or rather does she like him(as in friend). Anyways update soon. Bye!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 06, 2004 01:47 EST
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*pout* that was a short chapter. great job though. update soon! can't wait to find out what happens!
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Reviewed By: nightwarp*not logged in* On: December 05, 2004 23:17 EST
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oohh wonder what InuYasha's gonna do! UPDATE SOOOOON!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: December 05, 2004 22:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story keeps getting better and better! I love your food for thoughts that is ingenious. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, can't wait.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(...I don't sign in...I'm lazy,,,) On: December 03, 2004 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rin:Kawaii!/Aw, Rin! You won't talk! Why not?/Rin:...Rin doesn't know.../Oh well, you're still a cute a little kid!*hugs*/Rin:*smiles*Arigatou, Kuro-Rebekuka!
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Reviewed By: WS03 On: November 30, 2004 20:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon and if you haven't already read my fic.
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Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is great,i just love it. this is one of the best fics i have EVER read,keep up the really good work and update whenevr you can. oooh b4 i forget,there is an author called aurora_thorn and she has a really good story as well called " the red and silver assassin " you should check it out,its good. shane.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I love the way it played out slowly, that was really good form. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: November 29, 2004 22:51 EST
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great update! i look forward to the next one!
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Title: sparkyakito
Reviewed By: sparkyakito [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 01:00 EST
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wow great story update soon!
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Reviewed By: diablodude(not signed in) On: November 19, 2004 11:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story get better and beter,i love it!! keep up the good work. shane.
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I can't wait until it's updated!!! Oh... there are two songs that sooo remind me of this fic! Howie Daye's "Collide" is a Kag-Inu song and Finger Eleven's "One Thing" for Inu and Shiro. If you haven't heard 'em, at least look up the lyrics. They're cool. Anyway... yippee!!! (Yay, no Ritalin for p_s!) Love this fic. Please update soon!!!
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