| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 22:00 EDT
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I have to say that it's definately the innocence of Shiro that gives each chapter that extra radiance and that laughter. Personally, it makes me look on the story and think about all the knoweldge that has been bestowed upon me these years. With age comes wisdom they say. Please continue writing.
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:42 EDT
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INuyasha and kagome's "date" was wonderful. Packed with such fluffy moment I smiled through the whole thing. Their relationship seems to go at a normal pace. Not too sudden or slow. You did a great job in that.
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:02 EDT
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This story is sooo cute and adorable. The jokes go far in making me smile and laugh. You can't miss that it's rated low and well written. It's very nice that you can write so enthusiastically.
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Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGoodness! I looooooooooooooove this story. So Cute! No sex or overly horrible language and it had a cute little kid. As a mother myself (I'm 22), I can just imagine my daughter soon acting like Shiro. This was soooooooooooooo cute. Thank you for such a wonderful, heart-warming story! Many Inuyasha fics I've read are full of dirty/ pre-maritual sex and depressing themes. Good to know I know where to get all warm and fuzzy (reading your story). I laughed, I cried, I loved it!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(*sniff*) On: March 07, 2005 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wails*/Rin:*sniff*How can it be over!/*wails louder*
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Youkai.Danni On: March 07, 2005 15:54 EST
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Oh I am so happy yet sad at the same time I have finally finished your story. I am sad because it's done with but happy that it came out so beautifully. You have a real talent for this keep working at it and I bet you'll be a great published author when your older!
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Reviewed By: queenserena*claps* On: March 06, 2005 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bawls*/Rin:*sweatdrops*She's very sad.../HOW CAN YOU END!?/Rin:....
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: March 06, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spectacular! That was just simply amazing everything else pales in comparison to this marvalous story. Definatley sequel worthy. I'd give it at least a 50 out of 10 if I could.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (Not logged in) On: March 06, 2005 11:57 EST
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That story is sequel worthy!! I loved it so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o much!! Everytime you updated I would get so excited! I luv Shiro. He is so cute! I really really really loved this story!!! Great Job!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 18:19 EST
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Here's a food for thought from me "If you're having a really bad day, and it just seems like people are trying to piss you off, just remember, it takes 42 muscles to frown, but only 4 to extend your middle finger and tell them 'Bite me!" Thought you'd like that one.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Kittencutie On: February 24, 2005 23:03 EST
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oh my god!!!! I love your story! it's awsome and, not to get gushy or anything but, anwsome writer!! Please please PLEASE update really really REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 24, 2005 20:42 EST
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just read the whole story in one sitting, so freaking awesome! what a mean cliffie though. please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: February 24, 2005 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a horrible cliffy!*Tears in the background* Please do up date soon. This is one of the best most updated stories I have ever read Anyways just thought I'd be the annyoing pain and let you know how Kwaii your story is and I hope you update soon bye!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: February 23, 2005 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still a ten, but these cliffhangers are killing me! PLEASE update soon.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(*growls*) On: February 23, 2005 19:51 EST
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HOW CAN YOU END IT SOON!? AND KILL INU-YASHA!/Rin:*sniff*Inu-kun...
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