| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 03:14 EDT
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"But Mama, I don't wanna punch the cow. I wanna sleep." lol.....ROFL
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Food for thought: As long as there are tests, There will be prayer in schools I loved that!!!
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Title: great ^ ^
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 16:04 EST
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I love this fanfic ^ ^ that was such an awsome fanfic you wrote once again. ^ ~ keep it up
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE story. I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 02:19 EDT
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interesting story... really liked it... great work... good job...
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Title: Late but Not Forgotten...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story so much and you're awesome for writing it... I'm hentai and personally wanted to read a few sexual moments between inu and kag but I can live with what i have... I loved the planning/plot that went into this- it seemed reasonable but also enjoyable! COOL STORY!
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Title: All done!
Reviewed By: InuSaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 14:02 EST
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Well, I just finished reading, after spending the last couple of days ignoring my own stuff. Good work, LD, I really enjoyed it. It was lighthearted and a very nice diversion. It made me smile, and laugh out loud several times. The characters were recognizable, and some of the characterizations were awesome. Kouga, for example. Yes, he was pushy, but not in the mad stalker rapist sort of way so many others favor when writing him. In fact, I laughed at times at how great he was in the story, as in what a wonderful person you made him out to be. It was refreshing that he was nice, but Kagome chose InuYasha because she loved him, not because her other options were too creepy to contemplate. That "Mama, I don't wanna punch the cow" line had me rolling. Also, the way Miroku kept getting beaten up by everyone was funny. But, if I had to offer any criticism, I noticed a punctuation error here and there, nothing major. I thought the adjective "gentle" was overused in the story, and the romantic buildup between InuYasha and Kagome at first seemed a little forced. He was very brash and rude and she didn't seem to mind. Of course, he grew on me, but I thought the romance at first was a little unbelievable. Other than that, the writing style was good, it flowed well, and the descriptive language was strightforward, which I prefer. I had no problem picturing what was happening, but there were no purple prose, which annoy the holy hell out of me. Overall, very good job. I haven't made it through most of the stuff I've agree to read lately, but this was a joy.
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Reviewed By: foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it! Took me a while to finish it, but it was worth it! ^.^
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 15:07 EDT
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this was a nice and cute fic.... enjoyed it alot
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Reviewed By: Jozz On: February 19, 2006 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story is all I can really say.If you do write other stories well I'll be looking for them.Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Jozz On: February 19, 2006 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story is all I can really say.If you do write other stories well I'll be looking for them.Please keep writing!
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Title: Kaglover1
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:30 EST
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As I continued down the story. I was wondering, KJagome is 19 and how old is Inuyasha even tough he is a father. Email me at kaglover1@hotmail.com
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Title: Kaglover1
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, at first when I read the title of this fic I thought this was going to be awful but when I read the first chapter, IT WAS AMAZING!!! It's way better than the other'babysitter'fics I've read. WOW! Keep up the awesome work!!!! (I am so crazy right now)
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Title: Kaglover1
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, at first when I read the title of this fic I thought this was going to be awful but when I read the first chapter, IT WAS AMAZING!!! It's way better than the other'babysitter'fics I've read. WOW! Keep up the awesome work!!!! (I am so crazy right now)
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Reviewed By: Rami-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:24 EDT
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Wow. I read this such a long time ago and had to go back and read it some more. Sorry I didn't review the first time around but I did adre your story. ^^ Very cute and a nice take on a subject that seems over done. Yours stood out and you made the topic your own. Shiro is a doll. Thanks for the lovely read!
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