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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: coldfission [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfic, the emotions Ranma has been going through because of what has transpired for him is communicated to the reader wonderfully. The only problem I have is the spelling and grammar, but that's because part of my major is Reading/Language Arts, lol. I know that there hasn't been an update in a while, and I'm hoping for one soon. However, if you feel that you can't update, I would be honored to continue the story for you.
| Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 19:25 CDT
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Not a bad start, from there it gets WAY to dark and angsty for my taste. The thought the rest the world, and Xavier just sit back and watch japan slaughter and capture mutant/humans indescrimently just doesn't sit well with me. I also feel the need to raise the issue I always do in these darker fics. If the bad guys suddenly up their evil ways into more killing and murder, the good guys have to respond. You can't just 'defeat' the bad guys and let them get away any more if they just come back to kill more people. Sort reminds me of a Ranma/spider man fic where Magneto killed tons of people that got in his way, and ended up imprisoned for it. Just doesn't make sense, even a normal human with a body count like that would be put on death row, not simply imprisoned.
| Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. Too bad that there are several good Ranma/X-Men crossovers available but none of them finished. I hope that you'll update the story one of these days.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 16:01 CST
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well, no updates for over a year, curious about where this story is going now, personally. Anyway, I like this story, a lot, uber-angsty (and why do I see Ranma in Emma's bed at teh end of the night?) On top of that, did rogue do this, taking away Ranma's memories of akane? Could she even do that, or was this a result of something done by Jene, to make up for what she had done? Not one hundred percent certain, but I am bewildered. Neh, more info would be nice, but whatever. Gimme more chapters, or a sequel, please? Later
| Reviewed By: ashuraryu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fic just got done reading it for the second time. I was wondering if your still writing this one? Only asking as there has been no update to it since October of 2005.
| Title: Wahhh... @_@;
Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 08:12 CDT
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Man, it's been almost a year!!! Is this story (which is btheway the second MOST POPULAR on the mediaminer (in Ranma cathegory of course)) actually dead?? Dear Author??? Did Real Life managed to kill all your free time and your muse as well? ??? ... /sigh/ I really hope you'll find a bit of time to continue and eventually finish it for this is (IMHO) the best x-over with x-men. P.S. Oh, and I really think Ranma should be with Nabiki here. After all she is the last Tendo and he is the last (male) Saotome... and honour is the only thing they have left. I think that Nabiki is the only possible choice for him here, the only person who can actually understand him, the only person whos concept of honour is close to his. But that is IMHO... I really hope you are going to continue this...
| Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 16:35 CDT
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It has been awhile sense i last read the full story so my memory might or might not be shot as far as this story is concerned but i dont remember ranma loseing his memories of akane
| Title: Yo
Reviewed By: askthedonkey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see your not dead and still writing. Hope to see another chapter when ever you get the chance. But could you update, Why Always Me, first it is one of my favorite stories and i would really like to see another chapter when you get the chance PLEASE.
| Title: Author's Update
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 03:12 CDT
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I'm way past due for an update, and I apologise for that. You all deserve to know what's going on, and I should be shot for making you wait so long. First, the story isn't dead, I don't have writers block, and has in reality been greatly worked on since my last chapter release. However, between my job, School, House/Social Life, and that blasted World of Warcraft game, I find my energies and times greatly divided. In fact, most, if not all, of the work I've done since the last post has been here at work, during the few moments I can get to myself to work on it. It's not dead, just so you know, but greatly delayed. I'll post an update as soon as I'm comfortable with the way I'm taking the story. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: MutantMFM On: September 28, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story it is the best Ranma/X-Men Evolution crossover fan fiction I have ever read!
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: August 14, 2005 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow been a long time since i read this story hope we get to see the finish story's.
| Title: MORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 18:16 CDT
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OK. I just found this story and have already read it all! Hurry up and post more.
| Reviewed By: Guess On: June 23, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More action! This story is turning into a romance novel. I agree that dealing with Teenage issue and personal angst are part of the concept in X-men evolution, but Bayville is too PEACEFUL lately. I have to agree with "Bob King of the Were-Lemurs" that while the earlier chapters has angst,tragedy, and depth, components of good drama. In the later chapters, it appear the characters are dealing more with hormones than advancing the story. Not that I mind the hormones of course. Anyway, the story as a whole still is very appealing. I am looking forward to when you introduce the events at the dance where the story should get interesting again.
| Title: curious
Reviewed By: rageycat On: June 03, 2005 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i am enjoying this fanfic... now I have to ask if the gene for mutation is male encoded, someone explain nightcrawler, whose fatehr was human and mother was the mutant. Or is this some new thing put out, because in the comics for the most part it was the mother that was passing on the mutant traits. there are of course exceptions to this, but really
| Reviewed By: iCe An6el [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm so far I like it, there are a few things that are bugging me especially the use of "duck tape" instead of "duct" tape, although it's nothing that a good beta wouldn't fix. Also, as far as continuity in the X-men universe goes, it's the males that carries the X-gene (the gene that codes for being a mutant) not the mother . But I guess since this is a fanfic and all that's alright. :) Would want to see more of the work.
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