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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Title: it ok
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: September 11, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it ok what people think of me when i ask the author about his story. my questions is narrowsighted but i try the best i can. So just to say for this review is to tell the author to keep doing your best with this story and good luck with your job.
| Reviewed By: Caminatsugi On: September 10, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to let you know I only read the one review/response from ya, so if some things are already addressed, sorry. First off, the N/R page the guy is talking about is probably the Nabiki and Ranma relationship archive. I have no clue why the man would think that he would end up with 'Biki though, your story is in the non-(Nabiki and Ranma)matchups section. The person in charge of the sight has pretty much said that fics in that category are probably not N/R fics, so they aren't gonna be included in the "Matchups" section. Second, I gave ya a 7 for spelling an' grammar 'cause, amongst other things the word "homely" means ugly, and "homey" means a sense of home, or welcome. Oh, and by the way, sometime several chapters back you explain'd 'bout words like goin', gonna, and talkin'; well you're right, but it's usually more a function of rapid speech, more than accent, but good job, most authors don't seem to know that. Also, I gotta agree that Marco is rather...narrowsighted in his requests. Doing a threesome would kinda take away alot of the reason you're giving Ranma a more human slant wouldn't it? Why surround a believable three-dimensional character with 2-D dick-puppets? It should also be noted that I know...little about the marvel universe. This isn't to say I know nothing, but really all I know came from the old X-men cartoon, so I can't really comment on that, but thank-you for not trying to include the (also) usual 2-D Ranma characters in an anime style of writing. cya
| Title: Next chapter...
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 14:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Having it out by Saturday or Sunday is going to be impossible. Found out yesterday the client I work for has requested me, two other guys, and this one chick to stay on for another 3 days. Which is today, Saturday, and Sunday. The problem with this, is, I think I start my next work assignment Monday. Thats up in the air though, my supervisor kinda mentioned the next assignment wouldn't start till Wednessday. It's possible I get it out monday, or tuesday. Who knows? One last thing. This thing is linked to a Nabiki/Ranma thing huh? Where? I've never seen it. Anyway, off to work I go.
| Title: rouge or jean
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: September 10, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw the other review and thought alot of people like or dont like ranma with rouge. why i think it ok that ranma ends with eather rouge or jean. I read fanfics were he with storm or kitty or any x-men chick. I just read the one were matdeception tell us that he going to write a big chapter in the next story i hope it come out saturday or sunday. He also said tha proffeser x finds out ranma was the one who took the picture of rouge, jean, and kitty. Man those girls are going to kick his ass so bad that it might take ranma a month to walk again. I wonder how he going to get out of that one hope rouge or jean still forgive if it possible. And emma frost she might see this as a chance to get ranma as her boyfriend. What happen to ryoga were the hell have he bin? and to tell you truth when i first read this story i thought ranma end up with nabiki because i found this page from a another web page that pair ranma with nabiki.
| Reviewed By: Philip Weigel On: September 10, 2004 12:23 CDT
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Okay, there's not going to be a three-some with Ranma, Jean and Rogue. I'm pretty sure that Mat won't do that. (He never really did like the harem threads on the Anime Addventure, because most of them are poorly written and concieved.) As for this fic not being on FF.Net? Simple enough. The NC-17 rating. FF.Net doesn't allow fics like those anymore, nor any lemons. DAMN YOU SOCCER MOMS AND LAWYERS!! Note: I don't hate anyone in particular, just the people's attitudes in general.
| Reviewed By: DL On: September 10, 2004 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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really enjoyed ur story its prolly one of the best ranma/x-men crossovers out there. i'm really surprised u havent even posted this on fanfiction.net cause this would most proabably get an average of 50+ reviews per chapter (may also find some one willing to donate to your cause). overall the story is well written i'm not really that fond of the idea of ranma paring up wif rogue, i was hoping for a ranma/jean fic. anyway hope u keep up the story man ;)
| Title: hentai man
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: September 10, 2004 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One more time treesome, treesome, treesome, treesome, and maybe ranma can find a way rouge cant suck jean power away!
| Reviewed By: Daniel de los Santos On: September 09, 2004 23:13 CDT
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Well that was very interesting, the Ranma/Jean fling really threw me in for a loop, I'm sure Rogue will confront Ranma about this, I am still going for a Ranma/Rogue pairing, and let me remind everyone, or people who already know, Rogue was adopted by Mystique, so Ranma and Rogue are not blood related, only Kurt is ranma's actual half brother
| Title: marco cabrera is one of the usual 'hentai that needs more schooling" person
Reviewed By: mukamuka On: September 09, 2004 21:22 CDT
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marco cabrera...if you don't know....JEAN AND ROUGE CAN'T GET IT ON WITH SINCE ROUGE'S POWERS WOULD SUCK JEAN'S POWERS AND HEALTH DRY! yeesh. Okay to Matdeception: seeing your explaination, I can understand your position right now and won't bug you like hell for the next chapter and similar crap. Just rest and do what you have to do okay? I believe we can wait for the next chapter. If not, then we are all a bunch of assholes.
| Title: none
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: September 09, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this page yesterday anf it very good. I would like to see more of the ranma,rouge, and jean love trangle. Why cant ranma just have them both? Two girls who are hot!!! maybe he will have a threesome with them later in your next story. this is the only ranma1/2 x-men crossover i like. When ranma mom coming back soon you think i see it right now she will say MY SON SO MANLY. Am a big fan of both shows that your writhing about have you ever just wont die from jeff oneshot wong he really good too. He made a just die story were ranma meet the x-men it damm good. Well that all i have to don't have anything else to say about your story but remember ranma, jean, and rouge treesome next time in your next story please please please please please please please please please please!!!!
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 08, 2004 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter
| Title: Yep
Reviewed By: Philip Weigel On: September 08, 2004 15:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh, yeah Mat. School's been going on for the past three weeks. Was bogged down with some problems in RL, so I didn't try to get ahold of ya ta let ya know I was back. Hey, just keep up the good work man. We're all rooting for ya.
| Title: Me and my addictions
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 14:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh. It's a sad but true case. It's not like my writing depends on them 100 percent, but more or less my ability to sit down and write that comes in question. GOing through nicotine withdrawal the last time, makes me pissy, anxious, unable to sit down worth a damn. It'll alternate between that and annoyance, all of which is a big negative when it comes to writing. One of these days I'm going to quit, I just don't see it happening it any time soon. Once pay doll rolls around, I'm going to go buy a corn cob pipe, and a shit load of tabacco. That'll save me a ton of cash in the long run. The problem is getting to pay day. I hate starting a job just before the next pay day, making me have to wait nearly three weeks for cash. Argh. And thanks for the vote of confidence Philip. Nice seeing yah again. School started up for you already?
| Reviewed By: mukamuka On: September 08, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
feel like adding in a poll vote of Nabiki boinking Jean or Ms. Frost? - I'm joking, I'm joking. A vote Ranma for Jean for your pairings please. - I believe that this is the first time I've actually seen Ranma human in a fanfic. Not like some urbr god like asshole, not like some wimpy, never had sex idiot, but HUMAN. I have to copy this to wordpad maybe and print it out just so I can have something like this to read while walking to college or on the road. - Curious though, you REALLY do need smokes to write your fics?
| Title: Aww... Who Cares?
Reviewed By: Philip Weigel On: September 08, 2004 08:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mat, I'm serious, who cares if you mess around with the time-line like this? First off, you are having fun, at least from what I can tell. Secondly, this is an awesome story, I don't think I'm alone when I say that many of the things that you've done in this story make it even better than before. I mean, come on! Everyone's saying that this story is good, hell, I'm practically busting a gut in these last few chapters here. Heh. I gotta wonder when ole' Buckethead's going to show up though.
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