| "Sleeping with the Mob" Reviews/Comments [ 74 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moon Child [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of those actually thought through lemons. With ups and downs that kept you guessing. In the beginning I didn't know what to think of Inuyasha, and then I began to trust him a bit till that whole Hojo incident. So in a way, the reader was almost Kagome in trying to trust him. I really liked it. A lot. Great fic.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: foxyKyai On: November 06, 2004 20:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it, i think ur the best author i have read so far so keep the good work up... $$FoxyKyai$$
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: November 02, 2004 22:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was actually intears towards the last chapter! Wow. It was truly beautiful. The whole mood itself was perfect for the scene. This was by far, my favorite InuKag oneshot. I'll definitly be looking for your other stories! Keep up the good work! It was awesome!
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Title: AWESOME ^_^
Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this is really GOOD! one of my favourite! i just luv the way u wrote abt inuyasha and this whole setting/plot is just amazing...keep up the FANTASTIC work and im sure u'll be hearing alot from me :D (btw the mood of the fic is JUST UNBELIEVEABLE! awesome awesome job)
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Title: oh my god i love this story
Reviewed By: yashagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 09:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god this is the best story from mediaminer i have ever read i gave the rating because you gave the characters life and their own person its hard to do that and i admire you because i couldnt writs a better story in my life even if it depended on it!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 20:11 EDT
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That is a very cool way to write a story! Lazy but cool! And not many chances of cliffys!
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Reviewed By: lilemmyRA On: October 11, 2004 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo! Who turned up the heat? This three-shot of yours certainly lives up the standard you set with your previous works. I enjoy your writing too much sometimes. How's a girl supposed to get anything else done when you update with a new fic? My only request is that add one more one-shot to close up some issues. Will Naraku exact a revenge? How will the relationship change with Kagome's confession? What exactly is Kaede's role? How will Inuyasha and Kagome deal with the "joys" of pregnancy? These are just some of the questions I would appreciate if you addressed them in a fourth one-shot. No biggie if you don't, though. I love this little series of yours enough already. ^_^
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Title: Keep Going
Reviewed By: Songa On: October 06, 2004 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly Love this fic, it's such an original idae.. you have to add more to the fic. really it amasingly good!!!!! Pleas continue
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 17:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
coolsa.
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Reviewed By: kgirl333 On: October 02, 2004 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i'm so happy they made up and have it all sorted out.... =) this was a good three short story thread. i really enjoyed reading it... each chapter's steamin! hahahaha well... you once again have accomplished an awsome story! >claps< i can't wait for your next one!!
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Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamnedz On: October 01, 2004 21:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like, whoamg! Can you say best story ever?
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Reviewed By: kaginu4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is totally awesome!!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: September 30, 2004 21:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: September 30, 2004 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh...great chapter. Very nicely written and I like how you mixed in the case in this and Kagome's conversation with her father. The lemon was very hot and I can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 30, 2004 18:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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