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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 14:54 PST
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*Nice* Now we have a story - I was wondering when the first battle would take place. Looks like soon- and Yukio will be in the thick of it. I like how you have brought Inuyasha and Kagome back into the forefront - nice to see their interactions with each other! I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: anxsiously waiting
Reviewed By: Scoob_Dog_03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 14:12 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and can't wait for the next installment. The battle will begin and i can't wait to see them in action again. This was a good way to end this chapter a great cliff hanger anyone would appreciate. Hope the next chapter(s) will be done and posted soon.
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 13:27 PST
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I'm thrilled to see another update! I (like many other people) thought you had given up on this. Of course now I see the error of my ways and relize I should have had more faith in you. Though I do ask that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 12:59 PST
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Does a happy dance to see a new chapter. Looking forward to meeting the baby's father.
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Reviewed By: doomprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 10:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly enjoying your story and am thrilled you are writing more, I love how you have developed the characters. I enjoy your own characters very much. Thanks for sharing and please contiue writing!
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Reviewed By: kenshin lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 10:21 PST
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I am bowing down before the master! I absolutely love this story and it love this chapter! Please, Please, Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 09:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...wonderful chapter!! With each chapter I'm loving this story more and more. I absolutely LOVE how you mix history, and actual events with the mysticism of Youkai and the InuYasha universe such as the actual petitioning of Uranium mining on Navajo reservations and the companies who would use Hyakki koumori to get what they want...amazing! I'm very anxious to find out what will happen with that situation, especially considering Sesshoumaru doesn't know of this. I hope all can be resolved so Temeh, Sara and Peter can have their family live in peace. And that ending...I'm holding my breath till the next update!! Great job! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 08:58 PST
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Aiiii! You updated ^.^ An awesome chappy as always, and an excellent cliffy! Can't wait to see what happens!! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix Deathrose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 07:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn you and your cliffhangers!!! I love this story and I'm waiting with bated breath for more. This story is absolutely amazing and I beg you to continue it as soon as you can. Your style of writing and your ability to draw the reader in are phenomenal. I applaud you! Well done!
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Reviewed By: kokoro no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 06:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens! It kind of sounds like one of Sesshoumaru's business rivals back in Japan is trying to get into the mining business in a big way, and isn't all that scrupulous about how he (or she) does it. I hope that Peter's father is okay, and I'm starting to think that he might be involved in this mess--could he have been posing an obstacle to the mining operation? If, as I think, he's still an adolescent, he probably wouldn't be strong enough to prevent it on his own, and if his pack is as small as the coyote guide said, they could be in as big trouble as the Navajo themselves. I really hope that everything works out for the family, and that he can be reunited with his mate. Yukio really has to make the conscious decision to surrender to the inevitable and give Emma a chance--I think that she's strong enough to handle the situation and well-grounded enough to see the possibilities of her extended lifespan in relation to the good that she can do for her people. Although I wish that Inu and Kagome could get another pup, I don't think that Peter will be the right one--maybe that medical breakthrough they were hoping for will happen, or maybe one of those bats will get a little too close to one of the humans, and they'll be able to save her son (or daughter). Once again, I'm thrilled that you've returned to this and can't wait to see what might be coming next!
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 04:34 PST
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I love when I found "The Coyote Chlid" updated! I just love this fic and the new chapter is fantastic because it's all about Inuyasha and Kagome. I like Yukio but Inu/Kag will be my favorite forever. Thank you for the update and hugs from Brazil!
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Reviewed By: psyco_nekoyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 08:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing.. it is funny and serious and very intersting.. The Lucky Ones was an amazing story i enjoyed it inmensly and i can't wait for you to finish this story.. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 09:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was pleasantly surprised when I saw that you updated your story. I had thought that you gave up on it after waiting so long. I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon ^.^ Lexi AKA Bubble-chan~.^
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Title: Coyote Child
Reviewed By: shadowwolf03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 20:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic... I love this story and was hoping you would someday return to finish. I kept checking every week in the hopes that the muses would visit you and you would begin writing and publish more chapters to this tale. Thank you for all your wonderful stories but this one may even nudge out the Lucky Ones as my most favorite Inuyasha stories.
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Title: Homigawdza!
Reviewed By: Hanyouluverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 22:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Homigawd. Finally! Yeay! I'm so happy this got updated. I love this story. LOVE IT. Wow, slightly noobish. meh, Great job on the story, keep up the good work. ;]
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