| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kota Magic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 19:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've finished writing "Heart of a Fox" and published it. I've bought a copy and am waiting for it to arrive. Unless you're working on another novel, could we please please PLEASE have the next chapter of Coyote Child sometime soon? Please? With sugar on top?
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Reviewed By: Supergal200623 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 09:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, please update.
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Reviewed By: Supergal200623 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 09:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories, please update.
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 17:36 PST
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Sometimes, when I'm feeling down or drained, I go back and reread The Lucky Ones. I just read through all of that and The Coyote Child in the last couple of days, and I just wanted to tell you that even if this never gets finished, THANK YOU for writing and posting it. All in all, they're two of the most beautiful and well-written stories I've ever read, as evidenced I suppose by the fact that I keep coming back. Every time I get toward the end of The Lucky Ones and Yukio's voice starts to take over for Inuyasha's, I get sad that my time with your Inuyasha is almost over! Of course, I get over it pretty quickly and just fall in love with Yukio so it isn't too much of a problem! =) I want to give that guy a hug so badly--he deserves every bit of happiness you can scrape up for him when you get to writing the next chapters for this! Thanks again and I hope everything goes well with your novel!
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Reviewed By: kitalya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 01:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. It's been a long time since a fanfiction has gotten me this hooked. I just finished reading "The Lucky Ones" today and practically cried that it was over. Then I saw this and immediately fell in love. I loved Yukio's character and am glad that there is a continuation of the story. You've created an amazing story, and I do hope you update soon. The suspense is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 18:47 PDT
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Woo hoo! Lucky you! Congrats on your new book. And as for the descrepancy because Rumiko keeps writing, not a problem. I totally understand. I screamed when I found out Sesshomaru's mother was still alive. I was going out of my way to write all inclusive prequel but in the prequel I show how she died. I'm not going to let it faze me. (I'm just going to pretend that was his aunt in the manga who told him about Tenseiga.) Great chapter! Let's see how this goes.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 00:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 10 was excellent! And congrats on the new novel. I'd love to buy it and support you any way I can! I once again must comment on your sense of 'balance' in each chapter. You have the perfect mix of drama, comedy, and romance...including a little UST...teehee. Not too many fanfiction authors know how to do that. I really admire you for it. I especially loved the part between InuYasha and Yukio...I wonder if Yukio will give Emma a chance, hopefully so, I think they'd make a cute couple, following in his parents footsteps (A hanyou with a miko). Anyways, super great job on chapter 10 and I eagerly await the next update. Especially considering the ending...didn't expect to see Kagura there at all.
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Title: thank you
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally funny with Yokio and Emma I really like Yukio he just so darn cute. and hmm lust I like how the two are around each other it's in no other words cute. and thanks to this story it has made me want to learn a bit more about different clans. I loved the lucky ones and go back to read it all the time. the ending totally shock me even though I was like hm Kagura, I didn't relise that I didn't know what happen to her. just figure she's dead you know not a pip on 5 hundred years. I'm just so happy that your posting chapter! update soon ok I really want to know whats going to happen next. ohh forgot Sesshomaru coming his pup in the next state or so and there are anwers to be had. and all of us want to see the romance between Yukio and Emma. pleas update sooooon.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 05:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently read The Lucky Ones and now this one and I am very impressed. I am really glad that Yukio looks like he could end up being happy. I think I like Yukio better than any of the cannon characters. I also like how you have developed the cannon characters. I see that you do not update quite as often as I would hope, but I know that it will be well worth the wait.
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Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 13:51 PDT
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That was worth the wait. Lots of juicy character development to enjoy. I wouldn't worry too much about how far canon has drifted away. It's a risk you take when you write stories based on an ongoing series. Your world is yours now with a different flavor and tone from Takahashi's. If we didn't like your world we wouldn't have continued to follow your stories all this time. Just write what is true to these versions of Inuyasha and family and it will be good.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 00:10 PDT
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I assume that the coyote adolescent is Temeh, is it not? I'm glad to see that you haven't forgotten your faithful readers and I can't wait to see when your book comes out! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 21:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. For what little it is worth, I think it is a shame that continuity issues are causing you problems with this fic. I think any story written within the framework of a continuing story universe runs the risk of derailing, continuity-wise, as long as new issues are being produced. What's important are the less tangible things like the characters themselves and the "heart" of the fanfic, if you will. This is what made "The Lucky Ones" a great piece of writing and enjoyable to read, because even though the situations were removed from the 'official' Inuyasha universe, the characters felt true to themselves and their reactions to the story's events felt in-character. It doesn't matter how far removed you are from the continuity at this point; this story and its prequel are incredibly enjoyable and I hope that the spirit remains willing, writing-wise. I've no doubt, too, that you'll have some fun with Kagura. Greatly looking forward to future chapters of this, no matter how infrequent, as they're worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 12:51 PDT
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GAH!!!! How could you leave it there?! Please say you are updating soon...
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 22:51 PDT
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WHAT?? I am so confused now it's not even funny, I think I need to reread this to refresh some of the details in my mind. Otherwise very little of it makes any sense. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 22:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats on the new novel! Well definitely a 10 on this story. I must have read the lucky ones at least 5 times over the past 3 years and never ever get tired of the story. Of all of the fan fics I have read that were about Inuyasha's children, Yukio is my favorite character. I think one reason I love Yukio so much is how you portray the whole family. I can just picture Inuyasha being a father the way you have portrayed him and his relationship to Yukio. Also your portrayal of Kagome's mothering influence on Yukio's upbringing seems more realistic than most stories. I have read some fics that make Kag's and Inu's kids to be either rebellious or crude. Yukio's personality definitely reflects Inuyasha's strength and Kagome's kind heart as in the anime. That is sooooo refreshing to read a fic like that so thank you and please post soon. J
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