| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 11:13 PDT
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Wow! Very exciting chapter! It was a nice surprise with Emma turning out to be a miko. Yukio is great! Have fun writing the next chapter and I hope to read it soon!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 09:05 PDT
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Yay another update! And another great chappy!
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Title: Coyote Child
Reviewed By: Neko-Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 07:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is unique but it still fits with the manga. It is easy to read, the descriptions clear, with very few if any typos to distract from the story. The new characters are as engaging as the original, you Want them to win!
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Title: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 07:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!!! PEAS?!
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Reviewed By: ellisande [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 03:36 PDT
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I knew obsession was a good thing! Thanks for another great update, can hardly wait for the next one. ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 03:20 PDT
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i really your stories... good thing you updated this one... hope you update again soon...
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 21:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Another wonderful update!!! I just love your descriptions because most authors can't find the right words to portray battle scene so that the reader can picture them, but you do it easily. Sesshoumaru's involvement makes this battle even more exciting. And I can't wait to hear what Emma thinks of Yukio's true form!
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Reviewed By: bethananny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! I read through this chapter like I go through chocolate, at super speed!!! It's was GREAT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YoukaiLuvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 20:31 PDT
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Teeheehee...I love that...'They didn't have a chance.' It's true, you know.... Yay!!! A new chap!!! Please update soon!!! I really, really, really love your story!!!!
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Reviewed By: szaugglaughs [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyable as always: Emma as a miko is a nice touch. Yukio and the rest are just as enjoyable as all get out! Nice flow. I like the tension and the description of the action and, of course, even the brief mention of Sessh the badass of all time, LOL.
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Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 19:47 PDT
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Oh, I was so excited when I found out there was a new chapter, and I was not disappointed. It was very exciting, and I just sighed at the end. Only Kagome could feel sorry for terror bats...
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Chapter nine was everything I expected and then some! I can't get over how quick and easy read that was. It was over before I knew it; I absolutely had to know what was going to happen next. Emma being a miko...well that's not really something that surprised me. I kind of had an inkling that she would have some sort of spiritual powers that would fully...or at least partially awaken sooner or later, I think I remember in the earlier chapters that she said that she could catch glimpses of Yukio's true form. I'm anxious to see how she will develop. I absolutely am IN LOVE with your character development, especially with OCs!!! It's amazing and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Sesshoumaru's in the picture now....*shudders* I also noticed that you have a new Email address...does this mean that you graduated from PSU???
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:57 PDT
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And look what's rescued from the discard pile... Exciting, but it could use more polish. This isn't the most graceful you've done. Has a bit of a hot off the press feel to it. ~ ~ ~ They face the WRATH OF FLUFFY!! BOOYAH!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 17:27 PDT
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Outstanding! Wonderful fight. Amazing characters! I am ever waiting and wanting more. Thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: kenshin lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Emma's a Miko!(And the plot thickens ^_^). Totally loved it. You are on a role. Please keep going and update soon!
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