| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kota Magic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 23:36 PST
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so we finally get the skinny on Temeh! I've been waiting a looooooong time for this! Nothing like the traditional "mom, dad, i knocked up a girl" situation, with a youkai twist of course! By the way, "The Heart of a Fox" finally came in and I am halfway through the book already! A masterpiece, just like all of your writings!
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Title: She lives
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 22:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not that much of a LJ reader so I don't really know your story as of late, but congradulations on your book. I think that its fantastic that you've written a book. I've enjoyed your fan-fiction for a couple of years so, it comes as no suprise to me that you've got bigger and better things swimming around in your skull. I'll be waiting for the next update no matter how long it takes.
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 22:17 PST
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I truly enjoy this story. Yukio is my favorite character, right behind InuYasha that is. I love the characters and how your story also includes native americans, another of my favorite interests. I love how you brought these two together. I hope to read more soon. Thanks. Dei Dei
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 19:23 PST
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Never say 'never', pup. He's such a young one to be doing stuff like that. Honesty is the best way to deal with situations like that, but what am I to say about that situation? At least there is someone that they can call for help if things don't go completely as the pup planned. Inuyasha will smell the coyote blood when he gets back and wonder what happened. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 15:09 PST
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YAY! An update! I liked how you explained where Temeh has been. For a while there i was starting to dislike the guy for leaving Sara. Please update as soon as possible! -jessie641
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yukio needs a hug. Man that kid has his head so messed up he doesn't know what the hell to do. I wish I could give him a good hug, he needs it badly. So I'm just guessing hear but does his reaction mean that he might actually accept Emma. (she has a name similar to mine, I just love that, my name's Emily) I'm very sorry about your loss, but at least she knew her pets were taken care of, it was nice of you to take one. I hope that works out well. Have a Happy Holiday season. The one and only strangeness, Emily.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 09:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! He started an anthrax scare because they broke his Naruto figure!?!? LMAO! This chapter was a little confusing because it was hard to identify who was speaking at times. There was also some tense jumping. It would be in first tense and then jump to second. Other than that, I'm glad you updated and can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 09:33 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... interesting events have occurred... and some questions have been answered... what about yukio & emma... hope she's the one for him... what will inuyasha & kagome find in the caves... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 08:17 PST
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:) a filler chapter with a bit of who's behind the mask. I liked it and was hoping to find out a bit behind the goings on and what had happened to temeh. Great update and can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 07:07 PST
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Yeah, Yukio'll never be blind. What does he think he's doing with Emma now? Lol. Awesome chapter, and short as it was, thanks for the appearance of Kagura, she's really one of the under-appreciated characters out there.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 05:31 PST
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Darn you, botta! Right when I have things when I'm supposed to do, and you KNOW I can't let this wait... ~~~ Heh. I can hear the Chaikovsky in the background. Hee, poufy tail. ~~~(sigh) Another stupid baby having a baby.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 05:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the holiday gift! I began grinning like a madwoman when I saw the title of just what had been updated. I was in the middle of reading a rather interesting story when I got the e-mail too, and I didn't go back to finish the chapter first when I realized that it was this story. I would comment on your brilliance, but I am a little too tired to think of such things... I'm sure I will think of some praise I should have bestowed upon you after I am rested... I love this story and these characters so much I am sure I will think it over tomorrow... Enjoy your holiday season and update soon!
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Reviewed By: gramsgrl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 11:49 PST
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I love this story so far. I can't wait for you to add more.
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Reviewed By: apal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 13:40 PST
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This fic is so good!! Can't wait for updates!!
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Title: just a little more motivation
Reviewed By: inukaigas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 22:05 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz write more soon, i know real life gets in the way but....... DONT MAKE ME THROUGH INUYASHA PLUSHIES AT YOU!!!!
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