| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 23:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you've started this side story to Lucky Ones. I cannot wait for the next chapter to read them going to Arizona. I tried reviewing on adultfanfiction.net, but it wouldn't let me. Oh well. Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: September 30, 2004 22:43 PDT
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Yes! Yes! Another story from you that promises to be wonderful! Thank you, thank you, and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I'm so happy you're starting a story in the LO universe. It's great! I really enjoyed this chapter! Hope to enjoy more! *waves*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:19 PDT
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alright ha this is great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:10 PDT
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YAY!!!! you're continuing!!! I love the Lucky Ones universe, it's so rich! I'm so excited to read more of your work!!! ::dance of joy:: I can't wait to read more!
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Title: Coyote Child Ch 1
Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you decided to continue with the Lucky Ones universe. You did such a good job making the characters come alive in your other story that it is good to know that their adventures aren't over yet. I read all of the Lucky Ones on ff.net and was seriously put out when it was deleted. There was nothing in it that I would consider above an 'R.' *nasty trolls* Anyway, this was great. I loved the part where Kagome and Inuyasha were arguing in Japanese in front of the Natives. I take it that Yukio will stay behind and look after Ian while Kagome and Inuyasha try to find out what happened to the pup's father. Ian needs a little brother. He's likely to get spoiled being the youngest. Will this pup drink formula, or will Kagome end up nursing him? Will any of the Natives stick around to help during the rest of the story? I love how you do the characters. They are so believable. I hope we will still get snippets about how the rest of the family is doing. I would like to find out if Miroku and Ayumi are still together. Wonderful story and I'm sure it will become another one of my favorites. Take care!
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Reviewed By: ali_cat929 On: September 30, 2004 21:41 PDT
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YAY! I'm excited to see where you will take this.
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Title: YOUPPI !!!!!
Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 20:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Youppi, Lucky Ones ain't finish!!! Love the new story. I was suppose to go to bed (I have to go to work early in the morning) when I got an email telling me that you had a new story (author alert). I just read the prologue and got hook right away. Did have to finish it though. Once started, I couldn't stop ^_^ Keep up the good work! And update when you can!
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Title: YES!!!!
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that the 'Lucky Ones' was one of the greatest fanfictions ever, and now you are writing a sequel. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is AWSOME!!! Whoo-hoo! I read 'Lucky Ones' and I thought it was excellent and I have to say that this one is no different. It definately lives up to its reputation! The whole plot is great so far and I can already tell that I will love this story as much as 'Lucky Ones'! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, try and update again when you can! :)
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Reviewed By: MrVampire On: September 30, 2004 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so far a great sequil for lucky ones. Please update soon and offten.
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Reviewed By: pinkdancinghippo On: September 30, 2004 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you decided to continue "The Lucky Ones" Great Start!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:33 PDT
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ahhh! please update! i know this chapter is super long ::to me it is.:: but please update. Aww... poor hanyou baby..... i'm hoping kagome can keep it, but then how will ian react...? oh wells, inu yasha's still cute. update!
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:22 PDT
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Oh I LOVED IT! I'm so glad there's going to be a continuation, I don't think I can ever get enough of this story. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Del_kaidin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:04 PDT
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Hot Damn! First review... I LOVE IT... but you know that. Thanks for something exellent to read right now... I need it.
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