| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: KawaiiBabe14 On: February 03, 2005 18:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens on everything, as per usuall, VERY awesome chapter, I cant wait for more! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:00 PST
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Thank you for updating. I was so worried that it would never get an update.I wonder how Tthe knowledge of Yukio and his parent's age will affect Emma and her pursuit of Yukio? This story is so entriguing. I can hardly wait for more!
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Reviewed By: klutz82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 16:03 PST
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I loved this chapter!! I really liked the bit of comedy with the arrow and the tire. (...and the Monty Python reference...^^) This was a great chapter and I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: myeerah - not logged in On: February 03, 2005 12:03 PST
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Excellent. :) I was so happy to find an update. . . I was worried that you'd lost interest in this story.
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Reviewed By: essies2 On: February 03, 2005 08:39 PST
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this great please update
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Reviewed By: MrVampire On: February 03, 2005 08:23 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Please update sooner and offten.
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Reviewed By: Esther Tan On: February 03, 2005 05:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So very glad U finally updated. Inu/Kag are so compassionate. I hope they can adopt the coyote as their own too. I can see the Inu/Kag are getting closer & bonding with the coyote pup. He'll will make a great brother for Ian. Please update soon. I truly luv your story. I read "The Lucky Ones" gosh countless time & each time it gets better & better.
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Reviewed By: PrncessS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 00:08 PST
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Yay!!! This was great, I'm so glad you updated. Please update again soon! I'm dying to find out what happens, and I'm also really glad you're doing another "Lucky Ones" fic and kinda focusing more on Yukio, he's such a cool character =)
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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 20:23 PST
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Coyote's always hungry... Something tells me that Yukio's going to be eating that "keh" with lots of spicy chili.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 20:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, you're back! this was an excellent chapter like always. how is your book doing in real life? keep up the good work and PLEASE update sooner. keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Suze Howe On: February 02, 2005 20:15 PST
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I am SO happy to see that you've updated! This is absolutely my favorite...well...I guess I can call it a "series" since there's more than one story. You have such a wonderful grasp of the characters and your exploration of the realistic, day-to-day struggles in such a fantastic setting is just amazing. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment - please try not to make us wait too long! :)
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: February 02, 2005 20:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you're back! This is a wonderful story. I can't wait to see how Emma deals with Yukio's age (and Inuyasha's and Kagome's), as well as see what happens when the baby's mother finallly reunites with her son. I look forward to the next chapter!
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Title: About time!
Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 19:50 PST
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You must have been suffering from one heck of a writer's block, hopes it's gone now. However, why is it when I click on your name the site tells me it can't find your stories? Will, you please stop hiding them!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 19:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so gifted. I truely love this story. Though, the wait was long, as always you never fail to please. I hope you get a chance to update soon.
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Title: chap 5
Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: February 02, 2005 19:36 PST
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Yes!! Love the update - such a meaty chapter too. What a thing to just let slip out, 400th wedding anniversary… 60 years ago. I'm looking forward to hearing what Emma is thinking.
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