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Title: timax
Reviewed By: timax On: December 10, 2004 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved the lucky ones and am so glad that you are writing a story related to it. I love yukio and think its so cool that you are creating a love story. I think this story is a good as the lucky ones and cant wait until you update it. thanks so much for doing this story.
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Reviewed By: update!! On: December 08, 2004 10:53 PST
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UPDATE PLEASE!! You are dead????
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Title: Coyote
Reviewed By: K A D A E D E On: December 07, 2004 20:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that this is an exceleent work and I am really enjoying your style of writing. Please keep up the good work and update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already read TLO and I'm loving this sequel story. I was a little disappointed when Kagome's friend chose Miroku and not Yukio in TLO. Yukio really needs and deserves the closeness of having a mate, but the wounds to his heart were too deep. This new woman, Emma, is much better. She's stronger than Miaka was and her heritage and upbringing will allow her to join the Youkai/Hanyou world with very little difficulty. Matter of fact, I can see many benifits in the offing. Unfortunately, Yukio is still hurting, (not surprisingly) and Emma is going to have her hands full trying to sneak around his defences. ----If the pup is unable to stay with his mother and has to be adopted, I think it would be wonderful if Yukio could finally be 'Otou' instead of 'Aniki' this time...hopefully with his new...mate? *snicker* I'm not asking, so don't tell. I'm glad to be along for the ride this time.
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Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 12:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far!!! Plz continue.
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Reviewed By: GabrielZed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an incredible story. I fell in love with all the original characters while reading "The Lucky Ones" and am estatic that you decided to continue with them. You are definately one of my favorite writers and I can't wait until you continue.
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 00:26 PST
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I can't wait for an update...sorry. I'm impatient
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Title: ..when??..
Reviewed By: Chio On: November 29, 2004 20:13 PST
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Hi, I am missing a lot an update of your story. I love Yukio and the way you make descriptions of the places is great....I can close my eyes and imagine them pretty clearly. Please, update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: lazzykane [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 10:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read your other works and loved them so please keep them up and please let me know when you update i'm so glad that yokio is finding some one to love although it's not fair you can make me laugh and cry at the san me time but believe me i'm enjoying it....
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Title: waiting.....
Reviewed By: Chio On: November 18, 2004 21:35 PST
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Hi, I hope you´ll post a new chapter of "The Coyote child". This is a very sweet story. Thanks for sharing so fantastic fanfic with us.
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Reviewed By: HN-I-Love-Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 20:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pic, and started reading the Lucky Ones on ff.net. I would like to say I am very much displeased with the person who complained about your st ory and had it deleted form the site. In every chapter u had warnings plus it was rated R, so obviously this person cant write themsleves and likes to make great writers miserable. I have read this story since it has started and have been hooked on it since the very first chapter. I cried when it was sad and when it ended and was overjoyed with the sequel. I wonder if Yukio will get together with Emma? Or will Kagome and Inuyasha have a new son? What happened to the hanyous father? So many questyions I have, and I cant wait till your story reveals the answers! Awsome writng! A loyal fan and reviewer! Haley Nicholls HN-I-Love-Inuyasha h.nicholls@shaw.ca HN
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 17:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smiles brightly* A lovely story to complement The Lucky Ones! I am thrilled that a woman has come along who can spark in Yukio fellings he hasn't felt in so long. I am amazed at the way you write these characters, because I can see Yukio in my mind, and he seems so real. You have a wonderful talent, and I would love to read any original fiction you have. Bravo!
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Title: love it!!!
Reviewed By: ichie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great!! i really love this story and this chapter ^-^ update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:36 PST
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I was wondering what percentage of the population is "gifted" and sees through the concealment spells? What happens when someone starts running around raving about the funny looking folk? I assume some are institutionalized but I guess What I am asking is if there is some sort of "gifted" bureau.
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Reviewed By: girlf from ipanema On: November 11, 2004 09:35 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for answering my wish to see a story following Yukio's healing. I find him a most interesting character and I really like the native connection. This is a really interesting romance/mystery plot and it has me completely engrossed. I hope we eventually get to follow Miroku's misadventures too. I really like these two characters. Emma's seems to be a very interesting character too. Don't let us wait too long, pretty please.
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