| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usotsuke On: October 11, 2004 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your writing The Lucky Ones was especially great, but this story seems to be also very good. This story is turning out to be another great epic.
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Reviewed By: Bloodykitsun(NLI) On: October 10, 2004 22:57 PDT
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Poor Yukio..... on second thought, it's kind of....... funny I guess, but still, poor Yukio....
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: October 10, 2004 21:56 PDT
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Aww. Poor yukio. So sad. Another great chapter. Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: karla On: October 10, 2004 20:44 PDT
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another ouvre d'art! i'm eternally grateful that u decided to continue with ur story.....really brightens up my day when i come home from a long shift and see an e-mail saying you've updated. i'm patiently waiting for your next chapter, i hope yukio is feeling better!!!! arigatou!!! beautiful-cherry-blossom
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Reviewed By: darkinufan On: October 10, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter as always and I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope to see if youko will court the girl or not. keep up the good work and update soon! dark
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: mebizevil On: October 10, 2004 17:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter just makes me love your character Yukio even more! It's so sad what he puts himself through!! Glad to see a sequal to the Lucky One's universe, keep writing!!
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Title: Nice to spend time with these characters again!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story last week, and I'm enjoying it very much so far. Poor Yukio--still in so much pain, after all the years that have passed since Miaka died. And it's nice to return to the universe of The Lucky Ones.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:18 PDT
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We are going to get Yukio a woman he deserves who is ten times better than Miaka. Took me a second to understand the joke in Kagome's t-shirt but then I had to remember Wizard of Oz before I got. All that talk about pizza made by mouth water. Being stuck in a little town college with no car sucks! I'm stuck eating cafeteria food, blah! Love this love this love this! More chapter please!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:03 PDT
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I like this fic already! And even better, there are hints that Yukio will find love! Thanks again for a great read and I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 15:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!!Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 14:59 PDT
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I absolutely love how the story is moving. I LOVE how you're putting so many different nationalities into play and how you really emphasize the cultural differences between all of them. It's really really well done. And I sense some fluff going to be going on between Emma and Yukio....am I right? please let me be right! And the ending just made me want to cry.....awwwww update soon!
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: October 10, 2004 14:52 PDT
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This was such a sweet sad chapter, almost had me crying! poor yukio! I love your new story and cant wait to read more. It would be nice to see him and emma end up together.....yukio deserves a nice family of his own ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 13:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!i didn't relize the Lucky Ones was going to be continued. I love this new fic! I hope you update real soon. i love this!
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: October 10, 2004 13:27 PDT
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Oh, that's so sad, I'm typing with tears in my eyes. Poor Yukio is confused and frightened by his reactions to Emma. Is she Miaka's reincarnation? It'd be nice to see him with someone, he deserves to be happy. I'd love to see him with a family of his own. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: KagoKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:04 PDT
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Ya know, I just knew you'd be trying to get Yukio together with another woman...nice choice! This should be fun to see how it goes with Emma. Great chapter, too. =^-.~^=
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