| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Title: Another "WOW" Story
Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 13:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Why have you not updated in so long. As a wife/mom/ almost full-term pregnant, I realize Real Life all-to-often gets in the way of our fanfic writting... Plus writters-block can put a damper on things as well... I know it! If you have any questions about Arizona you can ask me, I lived there from when I was 10 till I was 19. My husband was born and lived there till we got married and he joined the Air Force. But I loooooooooooooove this story. I do wish you update it, it's been a while, but I've been known too keep my fans waiting for lets say.... a year (eep...Didn't mean too!)... I just hope you don't wait too long... OH! Thanks for the e-mail! I hope life blesses you (and calms down so you can write more... J/K)... But I'll be patiently waiting :)
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Reviewed By: PrncessS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 19:31 PDT
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I love your story, it's so creative and interesting and truly fascinating, I just wish you would update more often. If you need a beta I would be more than happy to do it for you, I'm pretty good. Thanks and I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 13:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story! please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 00:17 PDT
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great story so far, unfortunantly it nearly 3 in the morning so my brain is off, and my review is dull, update soon, Zirra *YWAN*(good-night)
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Reviewed By: oldham On: April 14, 2005 11:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly love this story, but will you update soon please?!!!! It's been since eraly FEbruary. I want to see how the story goes!
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Reviewed By: [-No One-] On: April 13, 2005 18:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very unique story. I absolutely loved "The Lucky Ones", and I am very excited and happy that you have decided to do a sequel in "The Coyote Child". I also read "Game Face"-- absolutely loved it. You have a great style of creativity, and it pleases me that you know so much about what you are talking about, instead of making it up like some other authors do. I noticed you talked about Utah, (I currently live there), and yes, the Mormons are uptight most of the time >.< I have met some that aren't uptight, but they are rare, and it bothers me greatly. I'm a "city girl", I guess you could call it. I'm not used to so many people being so... peaceful and "good" all the time, though it is a nice break, sometimes. Park City is quite full of art stores, and is usually full. Salt Lake is more of the big city (seeing as it is the capital), but I guess the three main places to go to, to have fun, are: Salt Lake, Provo (right by Orem), and Park City. Provo is a bit stinky at nights, because of the lake, and I doubt Yukio and Inuyasha could last, but it's still a nice place to have fun at. Salt Lake has lots of places for dancing and such. I think you've done a great job at keeping the character's originality, and I must say, I love Yukio. Tetsu is also one of my favorite characters in your stories, and you've done a great job on him-- on all of them. Keep up your great job, keep your inspiration, and keep writing. Take your time, but update when you can- don't stress yourself, thoug |
Title: Keep Going
Reviewed By: ramzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 18:45 PDT
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I really am enjoying this story. I don't know how you do it...god, if i had have the ambition you apparently do. Anyway...I hope you continue on with this story...and for gosh sakes...let Yukio be happy. I mean good grief...hope to read more soon! TTFN
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Reviewed By: dazed On: April 07, 2005 19:21 PDT
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I love this story as abt as much as I loved TLO... I mean, I absolutely adore this universe u've created. I can only imagine wut heights u'll take us to w/this spin off. R u ever going to update this story? I mean, I do understand u have other obligations in life & this isn't necessarily high on that priority list... but plz for those of us who've been waiting forever for u to finally update... plz at least give sum indication that u do plan to continue & a relative time frame wud be nice... so that u don't lose ur readers. I don't mean to be pushy or anything... it's just that I check, literally, day in & out to see if u've updated... that's a lot of disappoinment that I've faced, considering u last updated in Feb. Hey I'm only pestering u cuz I like ur story, so wutever u do... plz don't take this negatively in the least. I'll be waiting for at least a little update on ur bio page on this site. Keep up the amazing writing.
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Title: the coyote child
Reviewed By: lady101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 11:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed all three of the stories that you have wrote. I love to read stores like yours they are great. I hope that you will soon be completing the coyote child as it is most intrusting and I forone can't wait for more of it. If you could let me know when it will be up I would like that, thanks lady101@rogers.com.
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Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer (not signed in) On: April 07, 2005 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved "The Lucky Ones" and was really excited to see a sequel. It's hard to tell what is going on when an author doesn't update for a couple of months. Especially an author as good as yourself. I do hope that you are doing well and will soon gift us with more of your wonderfull storytelling. Walk in Beauty
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Reviewed By: moongal85 On: April 02, 2005 13:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good just like the others but it would be better if u updated ;) it is great so far but ur leaving us hangin.
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Reviewed By: zorioko On: March 31, 2005 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is very educational. the whole native american thing. anyway, i love it. please update soon!
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Title: Awesome Fanfic
Reviewed By: Sunny = ) On: March 27, 2005 21:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved The Lucky Ones and thought that Kagome's role as the mother of all these children was a great idea. Inu Yasha is so cute as the gruff father. I thought these character portrayals stayed true to character. Yukio is a great addition and I was always interested in his story. After his last wife, I was so desperate for him to be happy. I was ecstatic when I saw that you were going to resolve his loneliness. I just can't wait to read the next chapter. Your writing is exceptional- please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Chibiwolf On: March 27, 2005 19:34 PST
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Ok, I absoloutly love this fanfic mabey even more than the first. I love Yukio. He's a realy great character. The ONLY problem I have with this is that you don't update often enough. I mean, I'm so into this and then at the end of the chapter I'm left wanting to read more! But... there is no more... So, ya think you could try to come out with the chapters a little faster? It would be greatly apreciated.
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Title: Hurry!!
Reviewed By: kachique On: March 26, 2005 17:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great sequal to The Lucky Ones!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! Before i go crazy... I'm waiting impatiently for Yukio and Emma moments.!. I love how you are continuing the story with the focus on Yukio! WoW! Hurry!!!!!....
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