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Reviewed By: Nuha On: March 25, 2005 16:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was something. I have read your other Inuyasha fics, and I must say, I greatly enjoyed them all. This fic in no exception. It's wonderful, but seems to drag a bit. More than once, I found myself thinking, "Can we please get a move on already?" Yukio's charecter is already very well illustrated, and even without the insight the other fics provided, I could easily figure him out. Another thing I wanted to point out was a slight mistake. You said that for a Muslim to touch dogs was damnation to hell. This is incorrect. Muslims can touch dogs all they want, can keep dogs as guards to thier homes, but cannot get dog slobber all over. If a Muslim does, then he/she must wash whatever got covered in saliva hands seven times with water and once with sand. However, this does not mean that a Muslim may mistreat a dog. Muslims beleive that God created this earth for humans, and that humans are the caretakers of this planet, something akin to janitors. Heh. This entails that people ,ust take care of the planet. Well, that's about it. Wonderful story, by the way. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Arrianna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 08:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work! I read 'The Lucky Ones' on the recomendation of a friend, and loved it. when I saw that you were writing a sequal, I had to read it too. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: fuhenenrei On: March 24, 2005 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!! its so original and enthralling, please keep the updates comming. im so gald you continued "The Lucky Ones" i LOVED that story!!!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 10:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the first part of this fic and I'm happy to find that you have continued with it. It's seems like now it's going to start to get real interesting. Please keep me up to date as to when you update.
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:13 PST
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need...more...chapters...come on! I'm dying here, you don't understand how much this story means to me!!!I love stories like this because I just get caught up in them, until I become obsessed with them until the end, then I go back and read them again! PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU!!! *crys in fustration*
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Title: more please!!!!
Reviewed By: lazzykane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 13:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
as allways you leave me wanting, no begging for more...i can't wait so please post your your next chapter soon..i'm dying to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 (not signed in) On: March 11, 2005 23:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, Long time no speak!! Just wanted to say that once again you have proven yourself to be a magnificent writer. You are so very talented and I hope that you will go far with them. This story is simply amazing and it is really cute how you incooperated the love tension between Emma and Yukio. Yukio is one of if not my favorite character in the LO Universe...maybe miroku (the second_) ^_^ Well, keep up the excellent work and I eagerly await your next update...try not to make me wait too long ^_^ Corinthia
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Reviewed By: Pastyglue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 02:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! You are a very talented writer and I hope you update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Tanya (Dragonlady) On: March 09, 2005 00:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A long time ago you gave me permission to post an illustrated version of "Lucky Ones" on my site (which is annoying me now cause I can't seem to access it for revisions... grrrrr). Anyhow, I remain a very devoted fan of that original story... and I'm now, also, completely caught up in this one too! Once I can access my site again, I was hoping I could have your permission to post this story as well- also with illustrations. The story, as well as Lucky Ones, would be posted intact, in spite of the rating rules of my page... to remove anything from this magnificent work would be like butchery. So, once more, this is just so fantastic, and please, do not feel pressured to complete it NOW NOW NOW!!!! As a writer, I know how frustrating it can be to have all your reviews be urges and orders to stay at the keyboard all day long! So, write slow, write as wonderfully as you always do, and I will read with the delight of a 5 year old on Christmas morning when you post your next chapter! www.geocities.com/naninuyasha/index.html I'll send you a private message with my e-mail if you want to respond. :)
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Reviewed By: Hlikari no Tenshi On: March 08, 2005 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter. Though I was hoping for more Emma/Yukio moments. But I guess finding out your love interest is over 400 years old, would slow anyone down. I glad you finally updated and I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
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Title: AMAZING!!!
Reviewed By: inu-ears On: February 27, 2005 18:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! amazing chapter once again!!! please, if you can find it in your schedule as well as in your interests, update as soon as you can!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! im so excited!!! i love all your Metamorphosis!! I praise you on your magnificant ability to portray the characters so well and your amazing ability to right. I just love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: -=Cloud=- On: February 27, 2005 18:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST.....READ....MORE.... Ok, please update soon. Good story. But i shouldnt expect less from the writer of Lucky Ones. Come on, please make more chapters... I want to read more... So interested.... Now, just so you remember, UPDATE COYOTE CHILD!!!!!!!!!! SOON!!!!!!!! yes, i know its... a little... you know... But thats really not the point... What the point is, is that YOU MUST MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bye Bye ^_^;;
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Jolaine On: February 22, 2005 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow keep it up this story is just as amazing as you other ones!!! I read the Lucky ones in less than a week!!! It was so good!!! So happy to see that you wrote a sequel. Please update soon!!! I feel like I'm watching a mivie when I read your story :)
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Dark Lady of the Moors On: February 21, 2005 07:53 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stupid ratings won't go to 11 Oh, Hi! Just tried to give you an 11 out of 10 but it wouldn't work. (Big cheesy grin) I have to tell you how much I am enjoying your new series. You've spoiled me for most of the fanfiction out there. Rarely, if ever, can writers take someone else's characters and situations and turn it into both something uniquely their own, and yet seamlessly fit into the original author's 'universe'. You have supremely done this. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: February 20, 2005 18:44 PST
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Neglected to mention how further authentic the lore you've already so marvelously expanded upon became upon reading Kagome's acknowledgement that the Native American's system of magick differed from her own...yet purification itself offered as a universal concept. I applaud how far you've evolved Kagome's character.
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