| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 19:23 PST
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oohhhh! things are really heating up between Yukio and Emma! Sometimes i forget that he's not Takashi's character, he's so realistic and i keep imagining him in the anime. Emma is really the one for him. Much love, Shadow_Within
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: November 03, 2004 19:21 PST
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this is great please update
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Reviewed By: oracle44 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 18:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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I like your story and I usually don't like original characters but yours I like.
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Title: Emma's characterization
Reviewed By: slant_eyes03 On: November 03, 2004 18:17 PST
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Because Emma is a new character...it would be nice and better if you could show how she is special...why she deserves Yukio. I don't want her to be ordinary...everyone has something about them that makes him/her special. Readers will want to know what that is.
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: November 03, 2004 15:41 PST
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Oh I hope Yukio opens up more to her! He didn't even studder once or feel unsure about talking to her. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 13:03 PST
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Another great chapter. So that is why she is being so aggressive, she was told that it was her destiny to marry Yukio. I wonder how Yukio is going to deal with that revelation when it comes.
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: November 03, 2004 12:06 PST
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another amazing chapter! i especially liked the dream sequence :)
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Reviewed By: nycscribe46 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 10:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excellent chapter. The scene in the thrift shop was very well done, as well as the following scene with Tom. Ah, the dream sequence intrigues me, and this reader asks, is Emma simply trying to fulfill her grandfather's prophecy, or is she truly drawn to Yukio? Either way, this adds an interesting subplot to an already vastly entertaining fiction. Thanks for the amazingly frequent updates, and I'll join you for the next one as well.
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Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:36 PST
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Excellent, as ever. I do enjoy the not-so-subtle matchmaking. :)
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:14 PST
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Heh. Why doesn't Emma ask why Inuyasha still has teeth in his mouth after giving swords to so many sons? I can't wait for Eri to show up, or at least for Yukio to mention her.
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Reviewed By: Tqo (the quiet one) On: November 02, 2004 09:49 PST
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I love you!!! I love 'the lucky ones' and I was going to re-read it when I saw this! I love your writing!!! Please update as soon as you can!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!
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Title: Dragon's Lover
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 13:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, Terri. Errr chapter 3, I mean. I'm liking this already. See ya on the next update!
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Title: Dragon's Lover
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 13:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, Terri. Errr chapter 3, I mean. I'm liking this already. See ya on the next update!
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Reviewed By: lolade On: October 31, 2004 10:09 PST
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Please update! please please please please
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