| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 15:54 PDT
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^^ this is really sweet so far! i can't wait fo updates! --Netiri
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 14:50 PDT
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**dance of JOY!** Happy! Happy! OOOhhh this was a surprise! hehehehe... should get good! ~Caliko
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Reviewed By: Sharpieg On: October 01, 2004 12:40 PDT
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YAY!!! Yukio's back!!! I love Yukio!!! But in a very well written character kind of way. :) This story is looking to be just as good as The Lucky Ones, and I'm very very very excited to see where this will take us!!!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: October 01, 2004 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm overjoyed to see that you're writing more in this series. I loved 'The Lucky Ones' and I was sorry when it ended. This looks like it's going to be as good as the last. I love what you're doing, and your writing is, as always, incredible. Update again soon!
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Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 02:21 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so grateful thet you've decided to write this continuation. I loved 'The Lucky Ones' and I'm glad for the chance to read about other sides of the story. The fact that you've chosen to write about old characters will give both them and the story more depth. It will be great to see how Inuyasha and his family deals with matters that does not really concern his family. The plot you've hinted to so far is really interesting and I can't wait to read more of the story. Your writing is (as always) brilliant and it's easy to envision the story. I can't thank you enough for writing this for me to read. I really admire you and the way you are able to make extraordinaire stories. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 02:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job! keep it comming...
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 01:36 PDT
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yay! a continuation! those poor stupid humans. i don't know if i could have kept my anger down at their ignorence. just reading it made me mad. sigh. i love it so far. i'm so curious to find out what happened to the father. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: Yayeee...more of TLO characters!
Reviewed By: Cutie Pie Hentai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 01:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terri-I fell in love (as did everyone else, i'm sure) with The Lucky Ones. It was beautiful...as a story in and of itself, fanfic status aside. You put so much thought and emotion into all of the characters. I was a bit sad when it ended. But here you are! With another well written, creative work in play. I am thrilled that you've decided to continue with the characters you developed in TLO and I look forward to your updates. Thank you sooo much for all of the hard work and brilliant ideas you put to words for us strangers. I'm not kissing up to get you to post faster...really...I'm not. :) Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 23:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad that you've started this side story to Lucky Ones. I cannot wait for the next chapter to read them going to Arizona. I tried reviewing on adultfanfiction.net, but it wouldn't let me. Oh well. Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: September 30, 2004 22:43 PDT
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Yes! Yes! Another story from you that promises to be wonderful! Thank you, thank you, and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: leelu821 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! I'm so happy you're starting a story in the LO universe. It's great! I really enjoyed this chapter! Hope to enjoy more! *waves*
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:19 PDT
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alright ha this is great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:10 PDT
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YAY!!!! you're continuing!!! I love the Lucky Ones universe, it's so rich! I'm so excited to read more of your work!!! ::dance of joy:: I can't wait to read more!
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Title: Coyote Child Ch 1
Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad that you decided to continue with the Lucky Ones universe. You did such a good job making the characters come alive in your other story that it is good to know that their adventures aren't over yet. I read all of the Lucky Ones on ff.net and was seriously put out when it was deleted. There was nothing in it that I would consider above an 'R.' *nasty trolls* Anyway, this was great. I loved the part where Kagome and Inuyasha were arguing in Japanese in front of the Natives. I take it that Yukio will stay behind and look after Ian while Kagome and Inuyasha try to find out what happened to the pup's father. Ian needs a little brother. He's likely to get spoiled being the youngest. Will this pup drink formula, or will Kagome end up nursing him? Will any of the Natives stick around to help during the rest of the story? I love how you do the characters. They are so believable. I hope we will still get snippets about how the rest of the family is doing. I would like to find out if Miroku and Ayumi are still together. Wonderful story and I'm sure it will become another one of my favorites. Take care!
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Reviewed By: ali_cat929 On: September 30, 2004 21:41 PDT
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YAY! I'm excited to see where you will take this.
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