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Title: VERY NICE
Reviewed By: OIga On: October 29, 2004 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your ihstory is very nice, I love it, is very original and very fine. lemon?? I love YUKIO!!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Kaila On: October 29, 2004 15:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!! UPDATE!!! I LOVE YOUR HISTORY!
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Reviewed By: ichie On: October 28, 2004 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read your other story the lucky ones on fanfiction after you finished it and luv it!!! ^.^ i luvin this one too espscially since it's a sequel ^.^ i can never get over these stories they are too good XD ^.^ i'll review if you update!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 02:10 PDT
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yo. sorry for the late review. it's amazing how much time school and a boyfriend can take up. loved the chapter. I'm getting a new Ninja this summer. can't wait. gotta love those bikes. nehoo. i have now stayed up way too late and didn't even make a dent in all the reading i'm behind in. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 25, 2004 19:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
love it!
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Reviewed By: Almaseti On: October 25, 2004 12:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few grammar things to nitpick over, but nothing really major. You've created a highly enjoyable universe with Lucky Ones, (I was pretty peeved at seeing that get booted from FF.net) and I'm happy to see it continue here. One thing in particular that caught my attention: You said that the war in Iraq started five years ago(2002), meaning this takes place three years in the future(2007), when whoever gets the Oval Office will be nearing the end of his term. This means another Effing election year in the near future, with either John Kerry running for re-election against some Republican or Dick Cheney against some Democrat. Think that could come into play in the story any? -Alma
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Reviewed By: Emajor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 11:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you added this continuation! I look forward to further updates!
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 22:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Weee!! I love it! The continuation of character from the "Lucky Ones" to this is just phenomenal. I love the interactions and can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!update soon!!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 18:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ouch! Poor Yukio. *small laugh but at the same time sympathetic* That was definently an interesting chapter. I hope that you are able to update soon, but until then good luck!
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: October 19, 2004 14:07 PDT
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i can't help but notice how Inu-Yasha still treats Yukio like a little kid. ^^ it's very cute and shows how devoted he is! update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: laptawenzell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 13:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
Heh. Busted! Yukio's how old? 250+ years. And he still gets in trouble for going out without telling his parents where he's going. Sigh. Some things never change. Heh. Great chapter. I love the way a relationship is developing between Emma and Yukio. He needs to relax and enjoy. He shouldn't stay widowed and grieving forever. Besides, if his first wife had any love for him at all (and I think she did) she would want him to be happy.
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Reviewed By: whoknoez On: October 19, 2004 13:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Can't wait for the next one! I hope Yukio is able to open his heart again to Emma. She seems like a nice girl... If she breaks his heart though, I'm not sure he'll be able to take it a second time.
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Reviewed By: karla On: October 19, 2004 06:24 PDT
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the ending was hilarious! i'm so glad that yukio decided not to give emma the cold shoulder treatment...i hope she can heal his broken heart, he deserves it! can't wait for the next chapter! ja ne! beautiful-cherry-blossom
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Reviewed By: Evanscent [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 23:54 PDT
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Haha. My home town is Park City, Utah. I've snuck into that hot tub dozens of times at the hotel. I was even on the Canyon's ski team. Brings back good memories...
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