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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 21:30 PDT
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Wait so what hotel did they stay at. Its a stupid question but I thought they were staying at that one hotel and then you said they headed back to the holiday inn.
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love, love, LOVE this story. It's great. Wonderful desription and great plot. I'm excited to read more.
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: October 18, 2004 18:47 PDT
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Wow, another wonderful chapter! On your reference to Muslims, I wanted to say its not "damnation to the soul" to touch a dog, yes we do think them unclean, especially thier saliva. But many Muslims do keep dogs, not in the house, but outside as gaurd dogs and of course dogs for the blind. And after touching a dog we do have to wash ourselves. Anyway, i greatly enjoy your story and look foward to reading more! Layla~
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 18:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It breaks my heart, the pain he must be going through. He misses his wife so much. Upon thinking on it, if I were married and was in the same sinario as Yukio, I think that I would have killed myself. I don't think that I could ever watch the one that I loved and married become increasingly older and then eventually die, leaving me there in my own age, with just a memory of what was and what could have been. It makes me want to cry so bad. I guess it dosn't help that my brother is playing the titanic theme song on the piano. But I really hope Yukio is able to get over his wife. And move on.... soon.
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:53 PDT
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LOl! I luved the end. Great character play as usual. I'm luving this story more and more, update soon.
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:52 PDT
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LOl! I luved the end. Great character play as usual. I'm luving this story more and more, update soon.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 16:30 PDT
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this is great please update
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Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 16:14 PDT
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Just lovely. Well done. :)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 18, 2004 15:37 PDT
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Haha! Poor Yukio. You would think his mother would trust him and not worry so much about him after so many years. Yet, I can relate...no matter what age I am, my mother will still stay up and worry about me too. Ah well, mothers will be mothers.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 14:35 PDT
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Man! 500+ and Mama still waits up for him; is it poor Yukio or lucky Yukio?
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:56 PDT
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Okay, minor thing. The second night they were staying at the Grand Summit not the Holiday Inn. You slipped near the end. Other than that great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one.
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Title: Binah
Reviewed By: Binah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:04 PDT
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Poor Yukio, I feel so sorry for that guy. Anyways, onto the writing itself, I love the way you weave a story it really envelopes the reader. Your use of history and current events makes the story seem all the more real, despite it's bases founded on myth and farytales. I know you write the longest chapters in fanfiction history, but I just have to say that I hope you update soon. I'm really interested to see where this is going.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job... I'm lov'n it!
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Title: another good chapter!
Reviewed By: sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As in The Lucky Oness, I just adore the character interactions in this story. Poor, messed-up Yukio (and he really needs to get out from under his parents' thumbs..."Where have you BEEN?" for a 500 year old hanyou is pretty darn funny. Keep up the great work and thank you for updating so frequently, Terri!
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Reviewed By: darkinufan On: October 18, 2004 10:44 PDT
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this was a good chapter and inuyasha sounded like a typical parent with the "where have you been" line. its going to be interesting to see if youko gets with the n.a. girl. do you pull these things in your story from real life? keep up the good work, dark
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