| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starrika On: October 05, 2004 17:05 PDT
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Oh, I'm so glad I googled your stuff. When FF.net removed you, I had no idea what happened. I'm so glad you finished The Lucky Ones, and I'm so happy you've continued to write in that 'verse. So good!
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 16:31 PDT
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I loved The Lucky Ones and I'm so glad you're writing more. Could you hurry up with the next chapter? Please, please. *whine* 'Submissive gesture'
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 14:34 PDT
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Well, early on, you've got me hoping that Temeh will come back, and that the little fuzzy-eared cutie will get to stay with his mom, who wants him. So unless Temeh turns out to be 100% unresponsible, I've got my fingers crossed for that. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ "b-line" should be "beeline." It refers to bees traveling in a straight line. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I'd love to know more about what Ian looks like. White hair? What color are his eyes? ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ What a ride coming up. Plenty of questions. The first part of this story makes things look like they're going to be too easy, but by the end of chapter one, I have enough questions to keep me going. Hee hee! I can't wait to see Ian cause trouble in the southwest! ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I would love to know more about what research you're doing on this one.
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Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 23:34 PDT
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whoo hoo! another story. this is great. i just have to wonder at all the possibilities of where you're going with this story. will this be just a side note of a couple chapters or will this be another epic of the lucky ones scale? i am excited though that you're getting into youkai and hanyou in the modern world and how things are done to intermingle the two cultures. whoo hoo for you.
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Title: yayy!
Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: October 03, 2004 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm SO happy to see more of TLO! I enjoy reading your work very much and look foward to reading what happens next !:)
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Title: ^_^;;
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone needs a break from reality once and awhile and your story The Lucky Ones has given me that break from the day I read the first chapter. I am very excited to read this new story and see a continuation for your writing style for a whole new group of readers to enjoy. I am a little surprised that you made a continuation so soon, for most writers wait a decent amount of time before they restart, in attempt to make the sequel an even bigger deal that it is. I am also surprised at how well it is written. I have seen sequels that have gone to shame because the writers head has swollen with popularity and no longer puts as much effort into their new work. From reading the first chapter I see no indications that we will be dealing with those problems with you. Simply I would just like to congratulate you on a job well done and a start of another excellent story. ~Amanda a.k.a. Kazk
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Reviewed By: Mockingbirdflyaway [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! New Lucky ones universe fic! *dances* I love this already... I wonder what happened to little coyote's father. Ah well, all will be revealed in good time! ^_^ Keep it up! ~Mockingbird www.fanfiction.net/~mockingbirdflyaway
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Title: *does happy dance*
Reviewed By: Mockingbirdflyaway [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! New Lucky ones universe fic! *dances* I love this already... I wonder what happened to little coyote's father. Ah well, all will be revealed in good time! ^_^ Keep it up! ~Mockingbird www.fanfiction.net/~mockingbirdflyaway
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 14:07 PDT
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Coolsa. A sequel. Me Happy.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: October 02, 2004 13:38 PDT
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Woo ho! More stories! Thank you!!! Been kinda sad and stressed this week. Your stories always cheer me up. Thanks! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 11:24 PDT
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I am so happy that you are writing another story in the "Lucky Ones" Universe. I loved "Gameface" and of course "The Lucky Ones". You have just developed this so well. I look forward to reading more of this story. And, once again, I fell that I just have to thank you for sharing your talent and creativity with all of your readers.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I went raving mad when I say you wrote a new story I didn't expect it so soon afer TLO. Well loved the first chapter can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I went raving mad when I say you wrote a new story I didn't expect it so soon afer TLO. Well loved the first chapter can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 22:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plz up date soon!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 21:02 PDT
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Excellent beginning. This will be fun. It sounds like the father was calling out to her on the night she gave birth. This will be fun to read. I want to know what happened to Coyote, too.
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