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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: October 18, 2004 10:39 PDT
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Thank you so much for writing another story. I loved 'The Lucky Ones' so much, I still read it. I love Yukio too, thanks for giving us more insight on his personallity. I can't wait to see how this one turns out.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 16:04 PDT
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When a good story ends, one where I have enjoyed spending time with the characters, even if it has a good ending, I get a bit sad because I can't continue on with the characters. But sometimes, if I am lucky, there is a sequel a that maintains the quality of the original work. Thank you for doing this sequel to The Lucky Ones. I am interested to find out what sort of differences there are between Japanese youkai and new world "youkai" (don't know the appropriate name), if any.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 08:48 PDT
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Ahh... poor little baby. Poor big baby too. It would be nice to see him get over loosing his wife. Hey - one of these girls needs that t-shirt that says in French, "I kiss my dog on the lips" HAHAHAHA. Great writing, love your work.
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Title: Binah
Reviewed By: Binah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 21:41 PDT
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I hope Yukio finds love! I feel so sorry for that poor boy. But I guess the whole Inu youkai mate for life thing would be hard to get over. Another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Elizabeth On: October 14, 2004 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITTING TERRI!!!! IT'S INCREDIBLE!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 14, 2004 16:58 PDT
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poor yukio. wanna give him a hug
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Reviewed By: Dea Mariella On: October 13, 2004 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
m'lady, what you have, is known as talent. There are few who can equal or surpass you in this department. You are practically an entity unto yourself! My first fic of yours was, of course, the lucky ones. I practically weep just thinking about it! Then i read the card game one-shot...forget the name. And now i see you have a new fic. Well, there are no complaints here! I agree wholeheartedly with your new adventure. You have yet again, found a new way to combine everyone's fave characters together. i am anxious to see the next update. I cannot wait until the meeting with the mother and kagome...that'll be fun! And inuyasha meeting her dad? oh hells yeah! there'll be sparks there! fun fun! I just wonder what did happen to coyote...hmmm... as to why the pup was underweight, have you read niamh st. george's fic of gods and monsters? the theory there is that it is the youkai father's job to keep the pup content and well. if coyote wasn't there, that explaination would work. if you want to read it (and haven't) you can find it at green tea (http://www.everniamh.net/). it is a wonderful story, incomplete, but wonderful. M'lady, i just wanted to say congradulations upon your most marvelous fic! and now i am running out of space left...so i will bid you adieu, and i wait impatiently for the next update. ta! Dea-chan =^..^= P.S. if you like humor fics, and san/mir pairings, try my fics! (shameless plug!) ttfn!
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yukio! He would be an amazing father with all of the experience he's had and just his natrually loving ways. Hopefully Emma catches and keeps his interest because everyone deserves to have their dreams come true. LOVED TLO and will definitely love The Coyote Child!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 00:21 PDT
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hey, sorry for the late review. school and friends have been keeping me extra bissy. i loved that chapter. it was so sad at the end though. poor Yukio. i hope his heart turns out ok. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 21:22 PDT
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AAwww. Thats so sad. I hope Yukio becomes happy. Nobody should be alone, left with nothing inside of them but emptyness. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:22 PDT
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wow this is touching please update soon
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 17:22 PDT
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*sniffle* I feel so bad for him, but he is so sweet and gentle. I hope that he can find happiness again, even if it is not nec. with a mate. I am REALLY enjoying this story and look forward to your future chapters. Till next time. ^.~
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Title: EXCELLENT!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 15:27 PDT
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Great chapter! It was absolutely excellent! But man, I felt so sorry and really felt for Yukio and his conflicting emotions! Oh well, I guess in time he'll be able to move on. Great job! I'll be looking forward to a new chapter soon so update as soon as you can! Thanks. :)
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Emma and Yukio... i likey! They seem perfect for each other! Were did Inuyasha go, though?
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Reviewed By: purplepeopleater On: October 11, 2004 13:30 PDT
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Awwwww! Poor Yukio! I want to give him a hug. Is Emma Miaka's reincarnation? I'm anticipating the trip to Arizona. It's been my favorite state ever since I took a six day road trip down there. People who say the desert is brown have no idea what they're talking about. I just came back from a trip to Ohio to watch bull riding (and stalk cowboys), and it was great to see an update. Update soon! Cheers.
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