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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 04:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! I've been waiting for a new chapter, trying to remember that patience is a virtue, but my virtue was starting to wear a little thin. grins Loved the chapter. Can't wait for Yukio to finally admit that Emma will be good for him. Unfortunately, he seems to take after his father in that regard. Unrelated note - I read the preview of your novel. I liked what I read and wished to read more of it but I'm a little strapped for cash (I'm dead broke.) at this time. Hopefully, I'll be able to get a copy in the near future. I look forward to the next chapter in this story. Since my virtue has been renewed by this chapter, I should be good for a while. LOL Later.
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:58 PDT
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These chapters always seem to be worth the wait. I enjoy a well-written Sesshoumaru, and you have a fine one here - as ruthless as ever. It's good to see more of Ian, too, he's an engaging lad. Looking forward to more, no matter the wait :).
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 18:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Man, Sesshoumaru is cold-blooded. But, then again, he wouldn't be the demon lord we all know and love if he wasn't, lol. Excellent depiction. I also enjoyed the phone call home. Inuyasha's technophobia is so cute...and so like him! This was a treat. And I look forward to reading the next one.
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Reviewed By: gramsgrl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 18:15 PDT
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Yay I'm so glad you updated. I can't wait to read this chapter, if it is anything like the previous ones it is going to be great. Can't wait until you update more of it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things seem to be going well now with yukio, inuyasha and kagome around... like how sesshoumaru cares for his family... he may not show it much but in his own way he does care... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 14:17 PDT
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YAY YAY YAY i'm so happy u updated and thank you so much for updating. u've made a bad day better for me.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 13:44 PDT
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This makes me wonder if this story is amost over... Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 13:41 PDT
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i was hoping you would update. nice chapter. although sesshomaru is still claiming inuyasha's life as his to take. update again soon. i want to read some more about yukio's reaction to emma's scent. hopefully he will find love with her.
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Reviewed By: bittersnowofspring [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 13:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome. I loved it. Could you tell me what Sesshoumaru ment when he said my brothers life is mine? If its not intrical to the plot, of corse.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 13:28 PDT
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If destiny and fate had had their way, he would have been dead for centuries. Hmm... Nice. Very nice. There seems to be a surplus of exposition in this chapter. Anyone reading this story from beginning to end (instead of in real time) would feel that it was repetitive. The joke about Tetzu knowing who it was would work better without the follow-up. Inuyasha shrugs as he mentions his six dead children? Sesshomaru sneered and looked down at the battered demon who had been tossed at his feet. His guards had brought the idiot in on his orders, and dragged him into the office he kept in Tucson. Oho but this might've been fun to see. Wohoo! Go Sesshou! But now it seems like the outer plot is done while the inner bubbles on... What now?
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 12:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chapter! Thanks for updating I can't wait for more it's always worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 11:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful suprise to open my e-mail and find an update from you. What a great chapter. I have always loved Sesshoumaru's character and it's nice to see him so accurately portrayed. I hope Yukio figures out something soon. He only has a day or more to do so, if they really are leaving that soon. I really like Emma and he needs someone that loves him and wants to stay with him.
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Reviewed By: Chaos_harbinger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 02:12 PDT
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Okay, I know life get's in the way and things pile up, but I'll make you a deal. I've been wanting to draw a Fushikenwa family portrait (all 36 adopted plus if I can) but I never just sit down and do it. I've started planning it out a few times but I never get out the big paper and start it. How about we help each other along with some encouragement. If not, that's cool. I just may never get off my duff and do it. And I'd like to.
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Reviewed By: natasha99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 02:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so intense! Botta does an amazing job in portraying her characters truly and genuinely. And besides, doesn't Yukio act just like you'd imagine Inuyasha's son would? Great stoy, interesting plot line, true characters - and overall addicting. Yup.
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Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 13:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I need to read more of your fic.... love ya Must know what happen please update when you get a chance. This is a greats story and I learning from it and it makes me want to learn more about the different tribs. And how there life is on there land so keep on please.
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