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Reviewed By: bethananny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 18:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT!!!!GREAT!!!!!GREAT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Literary Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 17:16 PST
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I love the way this story is heading! Is it almost over? I keep expecting a sudden twist or new obstacle to appear. It seems to easy that they were able to destroy the Terror Bats and find out who was behind them. I want to see Temeh and Sara have a few more difficulties before they are able to settle down as a family. And I would love to see more roadblocks between Emma and Yukio or affirmations that they are meant to be. I loved the interplay between Kagome and Inuyasha when they were talking about meddling in Yukio's personal life for his own good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 17:10 PST
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great chapter lots of littles to add into the big picture and just keeps getting better. If possible i might love this one mroe than The Lucky Ones...but not sure that's possible
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 17:05 PST
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Yukio is ready to take this job and shovel it?
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 15:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I absolutely love your characterization, particularly of Inuyasha and Kagome. And Yukio....oh, I'm rooting for him. He is by far the best OC I've ever read. I just look forward to seeing where you take this next...because your plot is great too. Excellent story.
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 11:24 PST
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i just read this story and can't wait for the next chapter. please update soon.^_^
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Reviewed By: inukaigas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 14:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love everything but ive noticed some spelling mistakes. i am also a writer and i know that spellcheck on Microsoft word and programs like that dont always pick it up. my suggestion to u is to do what i do and once ur done print a copy out, get a red pen and just read over it using the red pen to circle and correct mistakes believe me it really helps. otherwise than that ur story is great. keep up the great work, plz try to update soon.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 03:01 PST
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First, great to see the fic continuing its as good as ever. Second, congrads on the book, you can put another mark on sales board for me.
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 21:13 PST
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Another engaging and thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Yukio has to be one of the finest original characters in the entire Inuyasha fandom. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 19:03 PST
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If it wasn't known that the chapter was from Yukio's point of view the use of "he" constantly would have been very confusing especially when following after another male charater. Don't be afraid to use Yukio's name more often when there are multiple characters of the same gender on scene. That being said. Great job! The action plot involves that creepy councilor and the fight of the uranium. The emotional plot that seems to be driving this is Yukio finding and accepting second chances at love and happiness. I can't wait to see when the turning point is for Yukio! Funnier still is that everyone seems to see except him.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 20:41 PST
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Okay, my brain's evening out... If Temeh is eighty, Jemma would have to be what? Somewhere between ninety-two and 117? ~~~~ All this is just hammering home that this kid is not only not ready to be a parent but that he has no idea how not-ready he is.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 11:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy for chapter 11!! I thoroughly enjoyed it! It's nice to see questions starting to be answered. It's too bad that Yukio doesn't want to be blind again because I too think that Emma is the right one for him...It must be really hard writing a fanfic for a series that's still evolving. Like the whole Kagura situation,it must be upsetting to see how your fic doesn't fit in the time line anymore. But I still say you're doing a fantastic job and I eagerly await your next update!! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 07:55 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For someone who never wants to blind again, Yukio needs to open his eyes a little wider. Thank you for the Christmas gift. This story is as good as the first and is well worth reading. I'm going to have to find 'The Heart of a Fox'. I'm glad that you are enjoying commercial success with your writing. Who knows? You might be the next 'Mercedes Lackey'. (She started in fanfiction, too.) I'm sorry to here of your loss. And it says a great deal about your character to do all that you did to give her peace of mind before she died. Back to this story. An American youkai that is an anime fan. That is too funny. And it figures that Temeh would look like a scrawny version of Kouga. 'Prarie Wolves' do look a lot like their larger cousins. Temeh has got a lot to learn about things, but like most teenagers that first become adults, he thinks knows it all. (I have a nineteen year old daughter who 'Is an adult now' and doesn't think that her parents know what they are talking about.) Pranks over broken toys; it's no wonder Yukio tore him a new one. Who knows? If the two move to Canada to live with the Inu clan, maybe Yukio can teach him a few things. Wouldn't be the first time that he set a younger youkai straight. Besides, Ian could use a playmate and can you imagine the amount of trouble that Peter and the grandkits could get into together. Might turn Kagome's hair as white as Inuyasha's. Of course, with any luck, Yukio and Emma will take care of the playmate thing on their own. I've rambled on long enough. I have enjoyed your writing and will look forward to the next chapter. Merry Christmas and have a great New Year!
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Title: ..Thanks!!!!!...
Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 00:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really thankful. For years I was waiting for the continuation of this story. The lucky ones was my favorite. Please, continue and give us a wonderful end.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 23:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! I'm so glad you updated! What a good chapter too. I was ready to start hating Temeh as soon as he got into the picture but I guess not. He's kinda interesting. I still love Yukio though, he's gotta be the best made up character. I think we're all waiting for Yukio and Emma to shack up lol. Anyways loved the chapter keep up the good work!
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