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Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 15:27 PDT
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Congratulations for your award at the 1Q of the IYFG. Yukio is a really wonderful character. Well deserved!
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Title: Nicely done
Reviewed By: simplyme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. You're work is amazing. The characters you've introduced into your stories are developed so thoughtfully that you've made it feel like they're actual people. ( They aren't actual people are they?...because if Yukio was real.... Yum) I haven't read your book yet, but with how you've handled this story, I'm sure that it isn't going to be anything other than outstanding. It's too bad with that problem over at fanfiction.... it would have been great to have this story on both sites. :( There are some things I love about fanfiction and some things I just can't stand. Anyway, nicely done. Keep up the good work! 10s for you :)
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 11:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry and write a new chapter!!! i cant wait nuil the next one comes upXP lol is it possible fo ryou to come up with another chapter soon? i really cant waitXP lol i loved the lucky ones and then when i found this fanifc i practically screamedXP please hurry with the next chapter=D
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 16:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your fanficXD i finished reading your other inu fanfic called the lucky ones about a month ago and i was starting to miss yukio and kagome and inuyasha and everyone elseXD i hope you continue to write this fanficXD personally ill never get bored of the lucky ones storyline and charactersXD after this one is done are you gonna make another fanfic of the lucky ones? lolXD im so obsessed...i cant wait for the next chapterXP
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Reviewed By: bittersnowofspring [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 08:07 PDT
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SOO GOOD!!!!! I love THE LUCKY ONES and I really like this continuation. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 11:42 PDT
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Well, it's been about six months and I've just finished rereading The Lucky Ones and Coyote Child...again. Oh, my poor neglected obligations! Oh well, they'll get over it. I know some people are probably getting impatient for Yukio to give Emma a chance, and truthfully I am too, but you can't really blame the poor guy for being cautious. The kind of relationship in which you only realize the magnitude of your problems with someone after it's over can being really draining and damaging, and after that long of being with his mate, who can begrudge a guy the time to come to terms? I am enjoying the way that he can see what Kagome and Inuyasha are trying to do without actually interfering--it's so like caring parents to have to restrain themselves from getting too involved. I like Temeh, in spite of his being so cocky and defiant. Even if he's an adult by the standards of his pack, he's just barely cleared the threshold and it shows! All in all, I'm looking forward to seeing how it all plays out. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 21:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! Chapter 13 was excellent as usual! I really love how much effort you're putting into this even though it's a fanfic. The research alone of the Navajo tribe must be very time consuming. I really admire that about you!! Two thumbs waaaaaaayyy up!! I wonder if Temeh's parent's will be able to attend the Laughing Ceremony....I most definitely will wait for the next update!! Keep up the amazing work!!! ^_^ ~VelvetNight
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 02:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your first story, The Lucky Ones. I fell in love with it. Coyote Child is bound to be just as good. I can't wait for another chapter. Update soon.
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 02:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your first story, The Lucky Ones. I fell in love with it. Coyote Child is bound to be just as good. I can't wait for another chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 01:07 PDT
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Wow. Another great chapter! I really love your style of writing. How you make each chapter in someone's point of view, showing all the different aspects of each character, how they are seen by others. It makes it all the more interesting. I hope you get time to update this story soon, it's so captivating! :)
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 22:47 PDT
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I can't wait to see more about the laughing ceremony. I can see a lot of the points in making the first laugh when the child is finally part of the family, and I want to see how Peter is welcomed. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 10:06 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! Peter sounds so precious! I want Yukio to open up so badly! I think the Laughing Ceremony was a very good idea to add to the story. Next chapter, here we come!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 07:39 PDT
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nice new chapter. Thank you for the update I was excited to see a new chapter. there aren't to many new chapters to all my old favoriates!! glad to see some one still making the effort!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 23:29 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Poor Temeh is really on edge. Thank goodness Emma finally got the scoop on Yukio's history and didn't flip about it! Yukio's gonna have a lot on his plate with this ceremony but I'm positive he'll be fine lol. Man I can't wait for the next chapter, this fic is so addicting!
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