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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I can't wait to see Inu's face when he sees Kags with the kimono. ::girlish squeal:: Ahem. I really like your story, especially the part about Inu knowing Kags feelings for him. It's a great place to start a story. Anyways, I hope you update soon (cause it's really good). Bye
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 On: February 07, 2005 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,Thanks for including me in the story! I'm touched!Another Great Chappie and I will try to review as much as i can but sometimes that isnt possible since my computer is a virius attracter! Gah! anywho great work and i hope you'll update soon!Anywho please e-mail me when you update again! ^_^ Kagome0820@aol.com You can Instant message to!Like I said your an amazing writer and i hope you get tons of reviews!Congradulations on a new chappie and please dont ever stop writer! It was an amazing chappie!
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Title: Waiting game
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that's it. I've read all your work and I must play the waiting game for new chapters just like everyone else. You are talented and I look forward to reading whatever you have to offer in the future. Take care, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, I'm watching this one. I can't wait for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: puppyluv_3000 On: January 31, 2005 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hate u! how dare you cut off the fic like that? huh? you have no freakin right! a good fanfiction is hard to find and now i have to spend another half-a-freakin hour finding one. any wayz.... i think this is a very cute fic. cute. there's a word i don't usually use. i usually hate fluff fanfics, and yours was slightly fluffy, but surprise, i liked it. i just wanted to say, keep doin what your doin and i'll keep readin. thanx for being a good writer and posting your fanfic.
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fic. It made me cry. From the number of reviews I can see that your story is very well written. People love your work for you do this wonderfully. Please update soon!
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Title: MATTA!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Miko_Higurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are fast becoming my fave authoress y'know that????? Bloody freakin HELL, how do you manage to captivate me like this? As for turning Inuyasha into an 'f' bomb machine, I do the same thing, you aren't alone! *laughs* He's really got a foul mouth if you translate the scans from overseas, a friend of mine does it herself. Makes me wonder why Kagome hasn't given him the soap. I always did LOVE pairing one of Kagome's friends up with Houjo, although, I usually made it Ayumi who wound up with him. Brilliant work, I can't freaking WAIT for the next chapter. Ja matta ne from a loyal fan, Yoake
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Reviewed By: nyagoneko On: January 24, 2005 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am confused the story does not seem finished but it says completed in the status. Are you really going to leave it like that? Please tell me you are going to finish it. I am thoroughly engrossed in this story and can't wait for you to go on.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 23:03 CST
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O.O That was unexpected... Inuyasha commisioning a kimono for Kagome? Hm... how did he know her measurements...And there's the question that'll plague me for a while... You had me believing that Kagome's dream was real for... the whole time it lasted. It was a general 'eh? Surely he isn't that impatient 'bout th- oh...' reaction.I can't wait to read your next chapter! I want to see where this is going! I also am a little curious about this, as Kagome and Miroku are blessing the ceremony, wouldn't Kagome wear the traditional miko robes? Of course, I don't know this, but I am curious.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 04:36 CST
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Thank you, Lord, my prayers have been answered and this story updated!!! (does the happy dance) WOO-HOO! I was beginning to worry about when I would get to see the latest and greatest chapter from you...and this one kicked bootie!! I LOVED it!! But now, I gotta wait for the next, dangit! And oh, yeah, so if Inu had the kimono commisioned WEEKS ago, then he MUST have had some inkling into his feelings for Kag, right? Oh, god, just update... PLEASE!!
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Title: well worth the wait =)
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 20:13 CST
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Well if every chapter is going to be this massive and so well written, no one should complain about a wait ^_~ What a wonderful peek into that adorable head of InuYasha's... I think you had his insecurity and his war with the idea of "feelings" quite accurate. I'm of the opinion Kagome would have been more... not embaressed, but shaken up by her dream. I disagree on the idea of more detail--she's too innocent for her mind to add too many more details--but I think she would have agonized more about what her subconscious was doing to her. Lol, as much as she admits she wants him. The kimono as a gift was a really sweet touch and I'm curious to see what kind of plot conflicts with unfold from the many informational details given in this chapter. And I do so hope InuYasha shows up and he and Kagome get an alone moment or two, lol. Keep up the beautiful work! ~angelica
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: January 21, 2005 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That about says it all.:) A well-written, developed story. So far....need more chapters*nods vigorously* Updates keep readers happy, happy readers write reviews^-^. Seriously though, so far this fic is wonderful, I hope to see an update on it sooner rather than later. It's nice to see the characters being explored more in depth, and i's also good to see Kagome resolving to clear things up with friends and Hojou too...poor guy can't catcha break, can he? Good luck, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: January 21, 2005 00:03 CST
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Another wonderful chapter! I hope you update again soon because I still like this story. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 17:01 CST
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This is looking more promising as you add more chapters; I fell in love with the 1st chapter instantly! The 2nd chapter, I didn't think it was slow at all, in fact it covered a great deal of characterizations and background info. I though the extra elements between Inuyasha's thoughts on love were well concluded and Kagome's reasons for her insistence to stay as individual and less like her predecessor was a great addition. Pointing out the differences between time periods was something that was addressed and so letting us in on how love would be a rare oddity and especially for a hanyou. I thought the small insert on how the children playing with swords shouting out Tessiga was also a great addition; you sold the story to your punters and came out with a profit! I look forward to reading more.
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Title: More detailed review for you..
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your first chapter was done quite well yet the second one, like you said, was a little slow. Nevertheless Inuyasha visting his mother's grave was a good thing to do showing more of his sensitve side and also giving him time to think. The dream that Kagome had was a very good way to show how deeply she wants him, but could have been a little longer with some details. I say this because the way you describe Kagome in the first chapter of how much she wants him, you would think that she would have much more vivid dreams, not more sexual dream, but more sensual dream with Inuyasha more romantic and loving then he usaually would be making Kagome think it is a dream even more. The end of the chapter with Kagome receving the kimono kind was a good way of making Kagome think that Inuyasha likes her a little more then she thinks, and I hope as well that Inuyasha will come that night and move things a little faster. I am not saying I would like to see them mate the next chapter yet not drag it out over twenty-some chapters with them still in the same stage of thier relationship. Also it would be kind of cool if you had a side story involving Sango and Miroku and thier relationship, but you don't have to. If you have to include Kikyo in your story, no offense but could you please find some way to kill her off or something, I really hate her a lot. -Myanime Please update soon and if you want check out my stories (They're not as good as your stories but I try and would like some reviews)
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