| "We Belong" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 19:51 CDT
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I am so excited that you've updated this story! I hope it doesn't take another two years for you to update again! I'm really looking forward to finding out where this story goes.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 18:55 CDT
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So, so glad you picked this up again! You have wonderful storytelling skills, the emotions and setting are absolutely lifelike. Love the insights into K and I deeper thoughts. They are both uncertain without being juvenile. I can't wait to see where this goes, please give us more, and soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadowed Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a truly amazing author!!! Your imagery is extrodinary as well as your dialogue. I love it how you weave bits of Japanense and culture in to the story. The one thing that amazes me most is how in-character and in depth your stories are. You have everyone's personality down to a tee. The characters reactions, thoughts, concerns, and feelings are like those of real people. It's just breathtaking. You are definitely one of my favorite authors! :)
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very good writer who wrote a very entertaining start to a most likely very entertaining story. Please continue. Or if you won't, at least declare such so some kind of closure is had, though it be sad.
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Reviewed By: momcitrus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 01:01 CDT
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Your writing style is so fluid and accessable; I've enjoyed this so much. Nice idea about Eri and Hojo- I can't wait to read more about it; although, perhaps something really marvelous is capturing your attention in real life (wink), since you haven't managed an update since January. Also, for whatever strange reason, I happen to think that a guy buying clothes for his lover is INSANELY sexy. Don't know why, I just do. I can't think of a single improvement that you could make, well, other than finishing it if you ever get the time. Also, I found your work by referral from the Argentenian that wrote "Love Potion". She says you co-wrote that, and I must say, it has a unique style- parts of it read like poetry. Couldn't find the Trusuprise YOU mentioned, tho. Anyhow, thanks for a wonderful start to a great fic. Even if I can't do creative writing myself, at least I've learned something.
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Reviewed By: SweetyPieRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
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Reviewed By: InuKag Fan On: May 14, 2005 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
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Reviewed By: Erin Collins On: May 05, 2005 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love LOVE it!!!!!!! Please tell me you will be updating??? Your writing style is excellent!! I love thw way you take the time to express the chracters inner feelings & thoughts. alot of writers just fly through the story by stating actions and jumping right to the lemon. It makes it a lt less ya know? I love the way this story is set up. It makes it realistic & wanting more. Once I start reading I couldnt stop. PLEASE ley me know whm you update!! irish2001@adelphia.net
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: April 06, 2005 07:38 CDT
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Hope you plan on updating soon, after such a promising start. Enjoyed it thoroughly again, having dropped by to reread both chapters, though noticed Chap. 2 duplicates 1. *sniff* Too many Inu writers, it seems, post a few chapters, then disappear into a blackhole.
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Reviewed By: maniac mansion On: April 04, 2005 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Today I'm in the mood to write reviews so.. Keep going! This story its amazing! I hope you update soon, and I wish that I've a kimono like that. Oh, well..
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Reviewed By: Inuyashin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 09:35 CST
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I love you fic! It's great how you made the characters act and feel. Like you gave them heart and soul. Keep on going - I'm quite sure everone else is as curious as I am to see how the story will go on. Luna
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Title: Washuu Ogami
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 00:19 CST
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What a marvelous story! Unfolding as gorgeously complex as that lovely kimono Inuyasha commissioned for his koishii. :) The characters are so wonderfully well-written...you'd certainly credited Inuyasha with acquired restraint and increasing maturity when he'd remained steadfast up in Goshinboku,rather than confronting her...once the initial shock wore off. LOLROTF--poor, mortified Kagome upon realizing 'twas *Sango*!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please do update soon! Great stuff--thanks!
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 19, 2005 22:25 CST
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Pretty...I want a kimono like that....:P great addition to the story. good movement and I nearly squeeled at the dream sequence. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: LadyOrion(notsignedin) On: February 19, 2005 21:48 CST
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Great start...I liked the scence with Inu in the tree. I do wish Kagome had gotten a bit more flustered with Eri. with the mood she was in I think a good outbutst wouldn't be out of charater. 'Orion
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: February 18, 2005 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Claps hands* WHOO... when you mentioned this fic in your Email, i never expected it to be THIS good... wow, simply put, wow... this is just plain BEAUTIFUL piece of work here, a freaking masterpiece in the making if i might even say. Keep it up, this fic is off to an AMAZING start, update soon, you're in my favourite author list now since i'm also an author here, i would even recommend checking out my stories through Mediaminer rather than AFF.net since Mediaminer dislays special fonts and the text is easier to read... but that's your call anyway. Sorry about that advertisement, if it offended you, i apologise. Keep writing, like i said, this fic is off to an AMAZING start.
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