| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 09:11 EST
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You are totally right that not everyone fits one mold. Not all molds fit one person either. There are the American Fuzzy Mold and Eastern Cheese Crud. There is also the Whitebeard Fridge Mold. Today, I have brought Herbie, who is a Norweigan Blue Oozie. ~~~ HERBIE: (squish) Ark! Ark! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Heh. I can picture Inuyasha swaying to the size, unfazed, still staring at the clothes in the window, as the wave of hot bomb garbage washes by and people start screaming. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So Miroku really is dead. I was ready to hear that Inuyasha had tied him up in an embarassing position and left him their for the squirrels. ...but then, he'd probably already done all the embarassing positions. At least he died a happy hentai.
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Title: A Big WHAT?!
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 07:00 EST
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"Big Mac" ~~~~ (Without warning, sirens wail and searchlights begin to criscross the groud.) Oh no! MacDonalds has caught WacDonalds selling their signature burger, and now the grease wars are on! Looks like you're finishing this story from inside the hollow mountain where it's safe. (Heh heh! Gonna read the rest later.)
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Title: Well, well
Reviewed By: Nokomarie the Snake On: December 13, 2004 06:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitly enjoying the story. Or is it that I'm enjoying your ongoing argument with "Whozits" and the writing police. Can't say that my spelling is all that good but grammar is mine to toy with. You failed to mention what it was Inuyasha stepped on. Are we then free to imagine it was a severed hand? Or was it a plot device? Nokomarie the Snake
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (NLI) On: December 11, 2004 19:20 EST
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WOW! First i thought this was going to be about Naraku as some evil Game MAster and traps Kags into playing his game but inu saves her, and i was totally bummed cuz i just finished read a book like that (really old and long) and it was horrible. but this was by you so I decided to give it a chance! Lucky me! It's terrific!
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 11:03 EST
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Ick! Someone is stealing your ideas! I was browsing adultfanfiction.net, and I come across a story, Scientifically Proven by Lady Kagome. Then I read the summary- Kagome Higurashi is a world-renowned scientist who has attracted the attention of an elite group of demons when she accepts a job offer from the government. The Coalition enlists the help of hired Assasin, Inuyasha, to put her in an early grave. M/F,AU... I'm not one to jump the gun but it sounds almost EXACTLY like yours, except for the fact that Kagome is a famous scientist. Check it out, maybe you could decide a little better than I can.
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Reviewed By: Malific [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 23:46 EST
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Sorry for double post but I jstu wanted to add. In the actually story, Inuyasha is roughly 150 years old. (this includes his sealed time)
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Reviewed By: Malific [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 23:43 EST
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Beautiful. I await further chapters with baited breath.
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Reviewed By: ash2 On: December 09, 2004 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE all of your fanfics!!! I can't wait till you update!!! These are the best fanfics I have ever read! Please continue writing them!
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Reviewed By: ash2 On: December 09, 2004 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE all of your fanfics!!! I can't wait till you update!!! These are the best fanfics I have ever read! Please continue writing them!
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Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 18:14 EST
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You know, I should read my reviews over to see is there's any grammar mistakes . . . especially when I'm talking about grammar issues . . . I'm so dull.
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Title: Metallica
Reviewed By: Kagamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 18:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have a problem with the way you spell, I hardly notice any mistakes, even if there is any. Besides Americans choose the easy way to write, come on anyone with know the color is easier to spell than colour, and I'm Canadian!! But I guess our grammar rulers are ruled by the British, but they have cool accents, and mine sucks. Well keep up the good work, I had a few people write reviews saying, 'have you ever read Rozefire's fics?' And I'm proud to say I have and their awesome!! You so rule!! So does Linkin Park. L8er!!
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Title: woot
Reviewed By: purplepeopleater with one "e" On: December 08, 2004 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurrah for the new fanfic! Despite the fact that Kikyo is an evil owner of a make-up line, the plot is altogether engaging. Kikyo's proffesion made me giggle a bit though, which I shouldn't do seeing as I'm taking a cosmetology course. (ducks heavy projectiles thrown from classmates) Make-up and evil, murdering Kikyo just struck me as odd, but it's new and on a realistic level, greed is a powerful motive. Your character interaction is as comical as ever and humor coming from Naraku is refreshing. Most closed minded people don't see potential for humor in him but as you have proved it can be achieved and earn cookies and confetii. A toast to Rozefire, for another incrediably original Inuyasha fanfiction. Cheers. PS. People who critize your spelling probably sit home all day with a thumb up their ass looking for ways to make people miserable. If they are upset by non-american spelling then they probably have never read anything other than books assigned in junior high which they probably got cliff notes for. Cheers again!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 22:10 EST
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Terribly sorry to hear of the people bugging you about your spelling, I like your style and I think it's interesting to see the difference of spelling of certain words from what I'm use too! You're an awesome writer and I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the fantastic work and please update as soon as possible!!
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Reviewed By: D.E. not signed in On: December 08, 2004 21:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't spotted anything wrong with your grammer or your spelling. maybe its because the differences are so small nobody should care, but its still funny that people are getting mad at you for it. (coughLOSERScough) Great Story! I don't like reading alternate universes that deter to much from the original story line, but you do it so well, I can't help but give you a perfect score! Keep up the awsome work! If you'd like to some constructive critism, Bring a few more minor characters, Like Sessho, and/or shippo, maybe Sango and Kohaku. I realize these might be hard to fit inot a story centered completely on Kagome+Inuyasha= Good, Kikyo die= Good. But it might be a good twist to add in a little Sessho try to kill INu, or Shippo annoy the hell out of Inu, or something of the sort. Just try not to completely focus on Kagome and Inuyasha. This may be really out of line, but I really don't care.
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: December 08, 2004 21:29 EST
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Yay! Another chapter! I KNEW he didn't kill her :) How can it be an Inu/Kag story if she's dead? Err... nevermind... =_=" =smiles= Love it. Update soon!
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