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Reviewed By: heyitsjenn On: January 29, 2005 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o this is turning out so good! I can't wait until the next chapter, I'll be checking daily for it ^_^
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Reviewed By: Phoxy Kitsune On: January 26, 2005 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**laughing her ass off** Nice ending, And impeccable use of euphemisms at the end there. Update soon. **still giggling like mad..and I rarely freakin giggle...**
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 22:01 EST
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awww its over already.. ::sigh:: lol, and kikyo wasnt to far off about that.. getting desperate thing, lol. inuyasha's just about the only guy she sees, lol... any time now.....
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Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune (not logged in) On: January 25, 2005 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would just like to say one thing: I LOVE YOUR FICS! I absoloutely love all of you stories, especially this one (and 28 days ^^;;;). even though I haven't finished reading itI like the whole mafia thing: It's original, cool, underground, and I like the name! I hadn't realised the spelling was different... Maybe because I spell the same way? (Canada seems to have the same spelling). I only spell like Americans when I'm writing fanfiction because Word always corrects it. *grumbles* For some weird reason... I understood the old english. 0.o I am seee~rious. Oh well, add another language to the list. ^^ Anyway: Back to the story: *sniffle* Miroku... man, it's like a dream I had, where Inu choked Miroku with a pink licorice rope! 0.o Ehehe...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 25, 2005 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic. thanks for sharing it =D god how i hate kikyo!! i know you said no more fackyews but what are your thoughts on her? sorry if you've already answered that and i didnt see it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 25, 2005 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol petrified koala....
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Title: Ha ha ha ha!!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 06:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is awesome! Man, I can't believe Kikyo bit him hard enough to draw blood! Talk about sick...But, I'm really glad that Inu made it out of the job alive and that he's not gonna get caught. Also, to end the chappie with him in his boxers while his clothes were washing in the laundromatt, Man! LOL!!! Poor Kags...what she has to put up with...Two words, You're Awesome!!!!
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Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 00:16 EST
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i loved it.. can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: darkempereror (not signed in) On: January 24, 2005 22:42 EST
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I don't know when I did an earlier reveiw but i did. Great story. kagome's a little naive, inuyahsa's got too little concious that is, like many other stories where INuyahsa starts out the bad guy, developing far to quickly. But Unlike most other stories, you actually seem to have caught the characters. Keep up the good work and tell everyone who complains about nonamerican spelling to go to hell. Because you know what? They never complain on the fanfics where the authors,(I'm guessing american) don't even know how to spell the words in american, let alone other languages. LONG LIVE STRANGE SPELLING!!! And out of curiousity, Why did you demand food in french and why were you talking about eating a pig?
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Reviewed By: FlameDancer077 On: January 24, 2005 22:40 EST
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nice chappie, ha wish me luck, having boy worries. ok well update as soon as you can ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: January 24, 2005 21:58 EST
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oooo she's not below anymore! hah! i was talking about graciestanton.... just so the real person below me didn't get confused.... hahah that would be kinda funny...
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 21:57 EST
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Eaten by a frog, huh? I suppose that's not any fun. I once dreamt that a spider ate my mother's head... Not much fun either... Great chapter! It's actually a bit disturbing that I understand most of your British caloquilaismis (can't spell to seve my life) and terms. They're fun BTW... Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: January 24, 2005 21:57 EST
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i agree with my friend down there *jerks thumb to reveiw below me* this is a very good story and YOU are a very good author! so... how old do you think inuyasha is in the anime? NOT IN YOUR STORY! LOL update soon! love the story!
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Title: The Laundrymaid
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 21:51 EST
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Mirror mirror, who has the fairest face of all, bitch? Another Snow White reference. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hate? Love? Which was it? ~~~ Yes. Witch it was. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And Kagome's own name isn't in that book because he was contracted out? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hhehehehehehheheehhehehsocksehehehehehehehhshshshehhehehehe!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(It's me...) On: January 24, 2005 21:27 EST
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...Poor Jaken.../Rin:*sniff*Jaken-sama doesn't like being stepped on.../So we just throw rocks at him. And how in the world do you grow things on laundry of all things...?
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