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| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] | | Pages (23): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: LOOK! A REVIEW!
Reviewed By: k'yra On: February 20, 2005 21:59 EST
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did you ever notice that the majority of reviewers write a simple sentence saying something to the effect of: "this is a really good story" or "UpDaTe PlEaSe!!!!!"? i wonder why. anyway, i do really like this story. it's well written, updated fairly often, has good chapter lengths, and, most importantly, has flows well. now if only i could find more stories written like this one. i was curious, though, as to why inuyasha is so old. i mean, you went on forever with him being all pissy about being called a pedophile, and then we find out that he really is one. as amusing as i found it, it was somewhat of a let down. though i can imagine kagome's expression at that point in time. it's a shame this isn't a movie, because then i could see it. are you planning on introducing some of the other characters from the show into 'Zero-G', oer is it just going to be the ones already there. also are we going to eventually find out why inuyasha joined the coalesence (sp?) or are we supposed to just try to think of a reason by ourselves? i love how you end on cliff hangers. it makes it all the better when you update again. it was great how inuyasha got out of that trouble with kagome and the bar. i swear that guy is houdini reincarnated or something. he just keeps on slipping through all this trouble that gets heaped on him. i'm glad that you didn't have kagome's family believe souta, because that would be way too unrealistic. well, i'm out of letters, so i'm gonna stop babbling now. ja ne!!
| Reviewed By: TwistedEvilStapler [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 20:44 EST
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I must congratulate you on your wonderful talent as a writer. I always love reading your stories. You mix drama and comedy without making either of them seem fake, something most authors seem to struggle at. You always manage to make me laugh even when I read your stories in a bad mood, and less humorous parts have a weird realistic pull that always keep me on the edge of my seat, like the story has a heartbeat of it's own that pulls me gracefully through the chapter. I particularly like in this story that, while Inuyasha seems to be second-guessing some of his actions as an assassin, he's not suddenly turned into Prince Charming, saving people left and right. Instead, whatever change may be happening seems less of a change and more of something that's been brewing for quite a while. He did save Kagome after all, and helped Sango in a similar manner, but he still goes about his job. Well you know what I mean, you wrote it. I've just finished reading the chapter, "The April Shower," and am eager to find out what happens next. The whole premise of the chapter intrigued me. It was very interesting way of finding out things. I really don't know how you can come up with all these great ideas! You're a very creative individual, or maybe I'm just really uncreative. Anyway, that's a little long, but I figured I'd put some effort into sharing how much I enjoyed the story since you put so much effort into writing it! Kameron, TwistedEvilStapler
| Reviewed By: Nermia On: February 20, 2005 20:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a quick review to thank you for wrting anouther chapter of your great fanfiction. It was a perfect elcome home gift. Oh, and don't worry, guilt dealers who frolick whilst you slave will end up in cow paddies. Trust me; I live in the dairy state. Anyway between the cliff hanger in this chapter and the drawing on your blog I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for posting this, and all your others, story.
| Title: a close call!
Reviewed By: Sharibet (not logged in) On: February 20, 2005 18:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this chapter (I'm really enjoying the entire story so far, actually). What a wonderful jeopardy for Kagome, standing in Inuyasha's embrace while he debates whether or not to kill her! That was really well-done. Poor Inuyasha is already in deeper than he realizes. And, as always, lovely twist/cliffhanger at the end of the chapters. Sharp, tight writing...you're definitely professional-grade, Rosie-chan!
| Reviewed By: DE On: February 20, 2005 17:20 EST
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Yee hee! Thank you for that last Fackyew answering, it really puts it into perspective for me. i can now take a two week vacation from writing my own story and right another one instead! haha! Just kidding. But your right. once you lose interest in a story, it can take forever for you to regain your interest. The reader just better hope it happens, or it's their loss. You know how many stories i deleted because I lost interest after the first few chapters? Its sad really. When you delete as many stories as I did, thats when you can send us on a guilt trip. Man do I babble on and on and on...
| Reviewed By: ixchen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 16:42 EST
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whoops is right..she's going to be in so much trouble..loved it..can't wait for more
| Title: please? >_>;
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel (not signed in) On: February 20, 2005 15:35 EST
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Hey, would you mind giving us a list of your favorite authors and stories? It doesn't matter if its on mediaminer, or aff, or ff.net, or whatever.. just please? And you could say where its from, and maybe even why you like it, but that seems like too much trouble... o.o maybe just a list and where to find them? I'm curious of what a good author like you reads.
| Title: GoGoGo! If you can't do it, no one can! XD;; (your the best.)
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel (not signed in) On: February 20, 2005 15:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god, do I love this story... I also like autumn's bane a lot. ^_^ actually, i LOVE all of your stories. You do know that you're one of the best- if not THE best- authors on media miner? I've read a LOT- I found dead famous, then from there read everything you have. You're right up there with Weezambu, and Sueric. ^_^ You go girl!!! P.S. Don't give up! don't you hate writer's block..?
| Title: Still here!
Reviewed By: ~Kate~ On: February 20, 2005 14:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In case you were wondering, I'm refusing to work on my 200 point French project and bleach the moldy green stuff off of our bathroom ceiling to read you story. =D Regrets? *snort* As if. Anything you write is SO much fun to read. It's nice to know that you can ignore all the crap you get thrown in your face and not get to huffy about it. You were half my inspiration for writing as well as... well, other things. Anyway, still love your stories! I'm a 35% done with reading Dead Famous for the 4th time. It's addicting. Thanks! ~~~Kate
| Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 13:47 EST
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Unless someone schooled Inuyasha onto how to mask his face (probably true), then it was a "taut" mask, not a "taught" one. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yep, Souta's off to the Home for Incurably Criminal Boys, and not the pansy St. Brutus' one where they were going to send Harry, the cool one where they train them to be evil bishie ninjas who sneak into your home at night and broil your sea monkeys. YOU HEAR THAT NARAKU? THE HIGURASHI HOUSEHOLD WILL HAVE ITS REVENGE!!
| Title: Uh ohhhh....
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha ha haaaa! Man, I soo swore Inu was busted. Man, just call him Hudini! He has gotten out of every situation he's wound up in so far. Man, he's amazing! As far as readers begging for more from finished stories, yes it is a bit unnerving. Sometimes your mind gains interest in another story. I'm in that predicament at this point. Oh well, I love this fic just as much as all your others. Yes, it would be nice to see more on some of the ones you haven't finished yet, but I understand and am waiting patiently while I'm reading this one and loving it just as equally *nods* I bow to you! Oh greatest author!!!! *bows*
| Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: StaryKegome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, as usual! Seriously, that was great, though i feel sorry for all the peolple Inuyasha has killed ::sigh:: But that just adds to the plot, and i think its a great one. Oh but that was evil, leaving us hanging like that! What's Kagome going to do now? What about Inuyasha? Ugh, no fair. Well update soon, please? Really really soon?
| Title: AWESOMNESS
Reviewed By: hobbitfancier77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story rocks...im dying tor ead the next chapter...see? *dies* yeah update soon..
| Title: Kick ass
Reviewed By: Nessa-kitty On: February 14, 2005 14:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kick so much ass that if there was a picture of a ass that you kicked it would be a bloodly mess of red cottage cheese. *thinks about what she just wrote* Ewwwww.....
| Reviewed By: Genericzombie On: February 14, 2005 06:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved the story, Rozefire! Kept telling myself, amid email alerts for your newly-posted chapters, that I'd wait until you were finished to begin reading... but... gave in, obviously. Can't believe I'm left with such a cliff hanger, too. Ah well. I love that kind of stuff. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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