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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 20:52 EST
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I never noticed you were spelling things differently... oh well, does it really matter? What matters is you killed Miroku... T_T I'm still crying over that. Who are you going to kill next? Shippo, Sango? Grrr... You just had to kill my favorite character... ah well. What's done is done, and Inu's gotta make a living. So let's all rejoice and be happy... or not. Let's all hope Kagome clears out 'fore the bomb goes off...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: December 08, 2004 19:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i love that a/n...i didnt even notice that you were spelling the words differently...maybe cause i spent two years living in england...anyway great chapter amazing story! and ignore all the morons who tell u others and demand things of u cuz its ur story.
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Reviewed By: tiff tiff On: December 08, 2004 19:13 EST
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I have decided. I love this story. I would enjoy a little more content in the chapters....but then the updates would take longer... so I think that I like things the way they are. One more thing. You're English? I can never tell anymore. I do like the English spellings better though. I kind of...hate my own country in more ways than one, it's very sad. I could go on for hours, but i'll spare you from that.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(*sniff* On: December 08, 2004 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*You killed Miroku...Are you going to kill Kagome and/or Sango and/or Rin!?/Rin:...../Uh oh.../Rin:...NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!/..My ear....
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Title: Astounding
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 18:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love your stories, no matter what. People need to 'read' more. Slang is not the only english that is in use these days. I think that your writing is beautiful and mostly grammatically correct. If it wasn't, you wouldn't be on my favorites, AND you would not have heard from me unless your story made a ridicule of the english language and of the anime you are writing the story of. Continue, we await your next update! -Ryu sachiko Sama
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Reviewed By: TFN On: December 08, 2004 17:22 EST
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SEXY! though sexy as in cool... anyway very interesting fic keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Sabichan (MM won't let me sign in...) On: December 08, 2004 04:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the interaction between Inuyasha and Kikyo in this last chapter, very wicked ^_^. I don't mind the fact that you write the way that is natural to you. I don't usually notice-my good friend spent a few years living in England, going to school. About two years ago, he finished his first novel, and asked me to read it-he never got out of the habit of writing in "English", so I had to adjust according. I'll admit that "colour" looks much nicer than "color". Lovely, story so far, as expected; I'm hooked again, and patiently awaiting more. Thank you for writing!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river * not signed in* On: December 08, 2004 01:52 EST
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Cool chapter.
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: December 08, 2004 00:55 EST
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Oh, how the tables are turning. Awesome chapter... can't wait for the next. Great work! x3
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Honestly, I didn't notice any overt spelling mistakes and your writing is good enough to make up for any mistakes you might make. Not "did," "might." I won't kiss your ass, dear but I will say you deffinately (I can't spell, so :-p) deserve something nice for your great work here. I've read a few of your other stories and I've really enjoyed them. Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 00:03 EST
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Just tell those poor saps that you are not following 'Amercian'. That should wake them up. Oh and I am an us citizen. And tell them to go read Shakespeare. Ha, that should get them to. And I would like to say the even if you used english word I didn't notice. One of many I am sure. On other things. Great chapter. I am glad that Kagome found out that Inuyasha was tell her the truth. I still hope that he tells her the truth about how she was hurt. I mean sure she will be mad. But in light of everything, he didn't kill her. Hope you update soon, later.
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Title: ch. 4
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:45 EST
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Hmm... Never told Naraku what? Your portrayal of Kikyo as a pure evil bitch (tm) isn't accurate, but it works, and way to psycholanalyze dog boy. If the two of them were dating at times past and now she's with Naraku, then Inuyasha could get his (cough!) "fingers" caught in a vise from two different sets of pliers. ~~~~~~~~~ What is it about those evil headquarterses always having unguarded vats of acid? ~~~~~~~~~ you little fibber." he murmured ~~~ comma, not period ~~~~~~~~~ Kidnapping, I could forgive. Attempted murder is part of the cookie, but she RENAMED THE PRODUCT?!?! DEATH TO EVIL!KIKYO!! ~~~~~~~~~ Ouchie! They made him pin his ears? Ten thousand yen is only about $100 US. ~~~~~~~~~ Wait wait wait... If they changed the Harry Potter books, then why did they leave in so much British English spelling?
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Reviewed By: RadiosNmyHead... can't... sign... in.... [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:44 EST
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Another great chapter! Your fic is very well written, and I find it very sad that people cannot recognize the difference between British spelling and bad spelling. Honestly, that just shows ignorance on the reader's part. Anyway... poor Kagome can't get a break, or a clue for that matter. Luckily she has her little hanyou... who is about to give her an earful when he finds her. Great chapter!
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Title: ch. 4, part the first
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 23:01 EST
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(sigh) It looks as though this 'fic is going to follow the typical Rozie update pattern: rapid for many chapters, and then slow as the stupid flamers and real life wear ya down. I should just wait 'til the whole thing is done, but I just can't help myself. Have you found a way to broadcast heroin into my eyeballs? (And why aren't my glasses filtering them out? I shelled out for the tinting, darnitt!!)
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Title: Lovin the fic.
Reviewed By: lancrGrlSingrGrl_5069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 19:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic/fics all of your fics i mean. Please write update i always wait to see if you upated i'm glad that you posted these stories you made I am very thankful for it thankz alot! -Roe Masumi Hukimaru-
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