| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Title: I want youre brain
Reviewed By: lonely_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 00:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great brain for writing one great fan-fic after another.........therefore.........i want your brain..........GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME.............though updating would be a suitable substitute for your brain, pwetty pwease
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Title: new stuff! awesome!
Reviewed By: Aquachick88 (Not Logged In) On: December 02, 2004 00:02 EST
Comment/Review:
Hooray! You've started a new story! Sounds very interesting, has a slight ring of The Lovely Bones to it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 23:30 EST
Comment/Review:
If I grovel will you update faster? heh... sorry to be a pest, but... *grovels*
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hate to say this but... WHY'D YOU END IT THERE??? T_T Okay, I apoligize, but... *growls* sigh. Please update soon. Your driving me even more insane than I already am... and that's a difficult feat. Really, it is. Your story's great, but right now I'm wondering WTH HAPPENED??!?!?!?! So, please enlighten me and update soon... please?
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 22:38 EST
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Whoa. ... whoa. That's all I can say. This story will definitely be a mouthful. Please continue and write more very soon x3 Good luck!
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
humm... I Like it. :P
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: December 01, 2004 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: Inu_luver20045 On: December 01, 2004 20:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez, that was the fastest death ever..anyways i love ur stories. and this one especially...please update soon....
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Reviewed By: JennyChick On: December 01, 2004 20:53 EST
Comment/Review:
*reporter's voice* Who is this mysterious attacker? What will happen to our beloved heroin? All that and more in the next chapter. ^_^ Now that that is out of my system, good start for your next work!! One thing though, something about this just...it just felt forced. I don't know, like it just doesn't have the flow that your other works do, you know? I'm not trying to insult or anything (I hold you in the highest respects), but something felt....argh!! Even I don't know what I want to say!!^^; Maybe I'm just not feeling this story.^^ Or I just haven't gotten into it yet. -_-
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:46 EST
Comment/Review:
I LOVVVVVE YOUR STORIES!!!! And I can already tell that this is going to be another great one! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:44 EST
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Maybe I'll have a chance to get some shopping done before the eight o'clock curfew?" ~~~ This isn't a question and doesn't need the question mark. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Someone grabbed the back of her throat, ~~~ Do you mean the back of her neck? It's hard to grab the back of the throat without first removing the spine. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Somehow, I think I would've enjoyed this much more if I hadn't been awake for the past (checks watch) (falls down) zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ooooo... So was the guy Sesshoumaru or Naraku or even Inuyasha?
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Kira_notloggedin On: December 01, 2004 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! You keep dishing out one great fanfic after another! I cant wait for you to update this its gonna be so much fun to read. You already got me wondering what's going to happen next, so please HURRY!
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Reviewed By: Kisamadesu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've already reviewed your story in FFnet, but you deserve double-review. I wish success in your new story, wich won't be difficult at all. =) You are a great author and have tons of originality, competency and creativity in your work. I hope you know that. I'm waiting for you to deliver that original story of yours as well! May you publish (sp?) it in the real world instead of the online because I want to import it from your country. =) See ya!
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: December 01, 2004 20:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. Is she really dead? Can't be :p She just blacked out... right??... Right? Wonderful, by the way. You really are a talented writer.
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Title: Gaspies O_O
Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky [mm member] On: December 01, 2004 19:40 EST
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Ah, I'm so glad you decided to write another story! I've read all your others, have recced them to others, and have thoroughly enjoyed them myself ^^. No, please don't make this a teaser! That would be so evil of you O_O. Looks like you've got another terrific story coming up, and I hope you'll update soon! TwT Awesome job, keep going!
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