| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:56 EST
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Tokyo in the slumps. Interesting. And Inuyasha an assasin. Different. Do Kikyo and Inuyasha have a background? Hope you can update soon.
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Title: Chapter One:
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 20:18 EST
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Bleh! I loathe pointless regulation! The specific reason for school uniforms is to remove them once school is done. If you wanted me to despise this "Coalescence," with their sneaky, creeping stupid rule-your-life crudworthiness, then you have succeeded! ...and assassinating the slob guy was probably mean of them too. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ everyday Every day. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ your Mom Whenever a title word is accompanied by a possessive pronoun, it must be lowercase. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "When you hand me that notebook and the rock with my cousin's blood on it." "Bring me Snow White's heart!" said the Queen. I wonder if he'll fake it like the woodsman did. I bet there's some part of the formula that Kagome keeps in her head, and that even with all her notes, Kikyo will get buyers remorse.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 19:41 EST
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Rather interesting. Can't wait for you to update and introduce us to more characters and further your plot. Later.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh yeah...4got to leave a rating....XD
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 18:48 EST
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Geez, haven't even bin gone for 15 minutes and you've ALREADY updated! Anywayz, good chapter, you've cleared up a few things, tho we still don't REALLY know who the blonde guy is.... tho I might have an idea....^^. Coalescence, huh? I wonder what would want to make a gang name themselves the essence of coal....hmmmm.... And also, what gave you the idea to call the cream Zero-G? Anywayz, cya l8r, hope u update soon! AND ur other stories! *yes, I know I'm being a pain in the ass about updating, but as I said, I REALLY wanna find out wat happens in Autumn Bane!*
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 18:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it!:)
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: December 02, 2004 18:00 EST
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hmmm.....sounds interesting. Your ideas never stop, do they? I hope you update soon, as well as your other fanfics too, I really wanna know what happens in Autumn Bane!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creative indeed. Who could have ever thought that Zero-G would be an anti-wrinkline cream slash many other things? I would like to know who this platinum blond is... And what debt Kagome has to repay. Please continue, it's quite cruel to leave us hanging! ^^ I loved it so far, and I hope others also myself have encouraged you much. -Ryu Sachiko Sama
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Title: My muffins are missing...
Reviewed By: Arashi-kun On: December 02, 2004 09:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I like the last line... @.@ Very 'Kikyo-ish' ^.^ (oh wait this fic is AU, so anything can happen...)
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 09:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual you have completely captured my attention. I don't know how you do it, but it never seems to fail. So the only thing i can say is please, please update soon.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: December 02, 2004 06:40 EST
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sounds great=D cant wait for more!
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Title: prologue
Reviewed By: Eleature [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 06:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That's certainly a way hook readers when you start a new story. Can't say I'm not intrigued. lol. You're writing is (as always) very good and you have a nice flow to the story. I can't wait to figure out how the plot's going to play itself out, I don't think I've seen a fanfic starting in this fashion before. Way to go with originality. I hope you update soon because you've really got me hooked. I can't wait to find out who attacked her (I have an idea, but...) and if she really dies (if she does it would be great to have her haunt her killer). lol. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Its my first time!
Reviewed By: Sabichan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 04:15 EST
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Okay, I'll admit, I've been a constant lurker to your fics, so this is the equivalent of "Long time listener, first time caller". So why now? 1)this is you first fic I've caught from the 1st chap., and 2) I've actually seen a salon by the name of "Curl up and Dye"-though I can't remember where! Texas? I don't know, that was like ten year ago. But it was down the street from a laundromat with an obvious Chrisitian theme, with the slogan of "For God so loved the world, he gave it his only LAUNDROMAT"-I kid you not.... Anywho, I'm already hooked (you had me at "new chapter"), and I hope to read more soon ^_^ You're always a favorite, always an inspiration, and a writer and artist I look up to. Thank you for writing! ~Sabichan~
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: December 02, 2004 01:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolio! A new story. ^o^ Intruieging first chapter! Got my attention, as always ^_~ Thanks!
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Reviewed By: skne On: December 02, 2004 01:13 EST
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Ever so glad to see something by the infamous Rozefire ;) Looking forward to future installments (although I wouldn't complain over updates to existing works either) Best of luck.
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